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Posted: 12 years ago
Mind blowing story...

Love it so much..

Please update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
B0th 0f them are 0ne fiesty l0t!!! Enj0yable update
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was simply amazing...loved every word of it...
any chance of you updating it by another chapter TODAY *wink wink*
I will be eagerly waiting for another update...its a marvellous story ... they are behaving pretty much like a normal person...not just bang on straight to romance...not that I mind reading romance...but still...love reading this bit...ASR not yet ready to understand her, and yet behaves like a possessive husband...and Khushi,, well she just wants to make him back to how he had been...and is willing to go to any lengths, and yet, she guards her self-respect and honour...
am loving it
please continue sooon *sighs dramatically*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the next update !
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update dear plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


Good Morning for rest of us...and Deepthi Di...tumhare liye Good Night...
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Posted: 12 years ago
now the stage is all set for them to fall for each other
specially for khushi he is already in love with her
but kya karain is big fat ego ka🥺 after NK fiasco he has all rites to keep his ego on top
its more like he want to make himself away from another heart break
khushi is not helping him at all poor arnie so confused also determined not to let her go this time
good my boy im impressed from ur attitude but keep ur tongue in ur control sometime u cross all boundaries of humanity so watch out dude
n I was not expecting they r not going to share the room but it is quite interesting to see how she won the challenge n im sure he is more then willing to loss this challenge
lovely update
Edited by aayt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow!!! Loved the update & the VM. Thanks for the PM 😊


Khushi amazed on seeing his spotless room & mentally comparing it to her's & wondering how she'd manage to live with him & she tracing his palm of his picture to soothen his pain was lovely 🤗

Khushi's turmoil on unable to expose the truth to Arnav about why she broke up with NK fearing what if on saying it Arnav blames her or doesn't trust her & waiting for the apt moment & hoping that he would understand it. She many a times wanting to disclose it but deciding otherwise owing to the gap between them, his anger, the feelings he has for her unknown to her & their differences which they faced few days back ... clearly brought out her worries with which she was battling with. I loved the manner in which she wanted to take away all his worries & pains

Khushi's patting herself for her sense of humour was cute ... Arnav wearing suit while sleeping 😃 ... who other than Khushi can think such weird stuff 😆 😆 😆

I love Kaka for being so caring towards Arnav 🤗 Guess his head is going to spin on witnessing our short tempered lion & the feisty tigress's fights

On returning home Arnav scanning his room for her presence, he recollecting the events of how she entered his life : he forming admiration for the woman behind his success & his heart frolicking in enormous joy on the thought of she staying with him & for having to share everything that belonged to him though for the time being throwed light on how his heart was overflowing in happiness at the mere thought of his lady love entering his life

Though Arnav was engulfed in happiness but fear surging at the corner of his heart if he'll be able to control his feelings while in the same room & also perplexed regarding her coming to his house & deciding to cross the bridge when it comes beautifully laid down the numerous emotions swirling within him

His eyes searching for her & he on learning that she's staying in a different room causing him to angrily rush to the guest room but his rage instantly vanishing on hearing her melodious hum & seeing her cute little actions making him slip into a beautiful world & he snapping out of his dream world on not hearing her sing & causing him to proceed with his mission of dragging her to his room, she resisting him & questioning the reason for his sudden anger, then the heated convo between them making him say that generally couples make love on their first night to be stopped by her, he coming out of his trance & realizing the extent to which he had said things causing him to feel bad & leave the place to be stopped by her & his anger once again overtaking his senses leading to he bursting out that he she meant nothing to him & ending up with a challenge was excellently structured scene 👏

Arnav's thoughts going down the memory lane of what made him fall in love with her & his heart wanting to lose 'n' no of times was another amazing scene 👍🏼

Sleep miles apart for Arshi & they emersed in the thoughts of the other throughout the night beautifully portrayed how their hearts were drowning in the love for the other 😊

"In all pure ways, they celebrated their first night and made love without letting the other know and without physically touching the other"

Brilliant lines 👏 👏 👏 Arshi's own way of loving each other deep down in their hearts without physically touching the other was so pure & ethereal

The VM was mind blowing ... I thoroughly enjoyed it. It spoke about the pool of emotions surging in Arnav's heart & mind & how he was battling within himself with his wish to be close to his lady love

Looking forward for the next update

Edited by fleurs - 12 years ago
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