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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

This is TOO MUCH like 'I've Got Your Number', don't you think?

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Varnita Khare

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

OMGG Amazing STart Chutki! 😉

I got along with the story and it was so entertaining! I'm really curious to read what is next...How Laad governer and Sanka Devi going to meet next time! :P Give us the next part soon! Waiting eagerly :P

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Aishwarya

@muffins2waffles

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: ShikhaKhushi
This is TOO MUCH like 'I've Got Your Number', don't you think?

Only the first chapter.

I did say that it was based off of that story and wrote a disclaimer that the first chapter is heavily based on it & even listed the sequences which belonged to her. But the second chapter and from now on won't be much like it. Actually I don't think the second chapter was anything like it. Did you even read it? What would you prefer me to do? Take it down?

Edited by Mrs.MuffinSobti - 12 years ago

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Aishwarya

@muffins2waffles

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Varnita.
OMGG Amazing STart Chutki! 😉

I got along with the story and it was so entertaining! I'm really curious to read what is next...How Laad governer and Sanka Devi going to meet next time! :P Give us the next part soon! Waiting eagerly :P

Thank you so much Varnita🤗 Really glad you liked it.

Edited by Mrs.MuffinSobti - 12 years ago

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Arnav Singh Raizada ka phone cut kar dia, like this hmmppfff

khushi is crazy, like our hilarious and arnav's unbelievable khushi kumari gupta

YOUR INITIALS SHOULD BE ASS, NOT ASR' 🤣 🤣 🤣 where that come from 🤣🤣 ASR=ASS

well done lavanya

i don't like shyam, even he's not negative still not like him and his so tight dimaag wala attitude

she didn't love him, and also confessed infront of him, he still forced her to marry him yukkkiii

hate buaji and her emotional attaychar on our khushi ...

but arnav is here we expect some turn

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Aishwarya

@muffins2waffles

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Important Note:

I recently got a comment saying that this story is too much like the book 'I've Got Your Number' and just wanted to clear a few things. First off, I am not trying to take Kinsella's work as my own in anyway. I've stated the story will be based off of the book in the first page, but if any one of you still think that it is not right to write an FF based off a book let me know and I'll take everything down.

Also, the story is basically only based off of the book in the first chapter. Besides a few resemblances in the later chapters, the plot will be mostly different.

The first chapter is heavily based off the book's intro - from Khushi losing her engagement ring due to a fire alarm at a hotel, annoying the hotel manager about it, finding a phone in the dust bin, the phone belonging to the male protagonist's company and that too of his previous PA who ran away, Arnav asking Khushi to stall some business man, her singing a song to stall them, Arnav watching from afar, Khushi receiving a mysterious phone call later, Arnav having an fiance named Lavanya, these are all sequences in her book (with her own characters I mean) and I'm not taking credit for them so please don't credit me for them either. I realize I haven't said this earlier so saying this now.

But like I said, this was all just to kick the story off and later on the resemblances will be much less. I didn't think it was a big deal to write an FF based on a book if proper credit was given but if anyone thinks it inappropriate then I want to take it down, as I've already gotten one comment.

Do let me know what you guys think :)

-Aishi

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@whiterose29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

I'm completely fine with the progress of the story Aish 😳 But yes I'll say that if you can then add this note on the first page too so that the new readers don't mistake you as a plagiarizer! 🤔

And update soon! 😳 (Though I've still not read the previous chapter! 🤣) But I said so because its all readers tagline after all. 😈 😆

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SARUNIAN!!!!

@luv.u.rubletin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

I don't think its wrong to take up a concept from a book giving in all the credits. Maybe as Aashi said, you should keep this note on 1st page Aish. The story is progressing in a nice way! Continue soon! :)