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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here you go with the character sketch part 1 is coming soon will try to update in night... if u will give me quick response then I will give you quick updates now all is up to you all😉😉
CHARACTER SKETCH:
viren vadhera:
Good looking, charming, flirty, he have never taken life seriously but deep inside he is nice person, lives with his parents, the only child...
jeevika chauduary:
Beautiful, loves her life, charming, loves karan...
manvi sharma:
full of life, chatter box, finding true love for herself
virat shukhla:
loves doing parties n all
karan verma:
karan n jeevs studies together, they are madly in love...
Those who r not in my PM list plz like the post of PM list on pg 1...I will add you in my PM list😊
Don't forget to press like tab above n do comments 😊
SCROLL DOWN FOR PART 1😊😊
Edited by koolgurl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

waiting for the response😊

@avni_19: I need other name for this FF as frnds forever will not go for this FF + my other FF name is also frnds forever tht's y it will create confusion😊
PART 1
-''girl's lines are in grey''
-''boy's lines are in pink"
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-"Oh God I have to do lot's of work plus I don't have much time, and that stupid idiot is late today as well i'm not going to leave him... he is so dead..."
-"priya do it fast we don't have much time today it's our farewell and we have to perform it perfectly"
-"guys please do the rehearsals seriously"
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scene shift to other side...
-"oh shit I'm late she is not going to leave me what to do what to do, I need to think something.." Idea you are too good K...
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-"finally guys practice is done I hope everything will be ok.."
-"don't worry when I'm here then everything has to be ok..." a voice came from back
-''itni jaldi ane ki kya zarourat thi still we have much time for the preperation"😡-said jeevika
-" acha, please don't be angry jeevs I swear I woke up early today bt I had accident while I was coming here my hand n legs are still paining I was unable to drive that's y I came in cab just for you, Sorry"- said karan
-just then a clerk came to karan and said
'' sir your car is not parked properly"
-karan to himself '' karan now you are gone"
-'' oh tou you had a accident you came here in cab right?" said jeevika with full anger😡
karan was nodding his head in ''NO''
they started running karan was running to save his life
-"karan now I'll break your leg for sure"said jeevs while holding a hard stick
-"jeevs i'm sorry please leave it, yaar yeh bht zour se lage ge, tm mjhe kise aur chze se marlo plz" said karan while running😳
while others were having good time while seeing there cute nok-jhok😆
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- "beta I think you should go for holiday as your clg is finished before you take something I think you should have some holiday"
-"Dad I'm also thinking same" said manvi
- "so now it's done ka manvi you are going for a trip"
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In store:
-"Two guys bump in eachother."
both together "Sorry"
B1: -"virat you...?"
-"hey, viren hows you yr?'' said virat while hugging viren
-" wow it's been long time yr" said viren
They had there chat
later
-" so virat what are your future plans'' said viren while having sip of coffee
-'' I'm thinking of going some whr for a trip before taking some thing in life" said virat
-'' oh cool, I'm also thinking same yr" said viren
-" I have an idea we should go together for the trip what say it will be fun'' said virat with his exciting smile😃
-'' Good I'm in" said viren😊
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That's it for today if I will get 60 likes by tomorrow then i'll update next part tomorrow...
If you want quick update then you have to press like tab and you have to comment asap...😊😊
Edited by koolgurl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
prologue and Cs looking forward
how story will moving update soon
koolgurl thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 1 updated😊

Edited by koolgurl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reserved to comment first :P
i thought wil b d 1st to comment bt i wasnt 😭😭😭
jeevika loves karan 😭
loved d update
its was damn good
liked jeevika n karan masti
waiting for viren n jeevika first meet
great concept
update soon
Edited by surbhi1994 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
hammi🤗
u r always awesum amazing concept i m waiting eagerly for the 1st part
thnks for the pm!
nd cont soon!!❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start
Looking forward to the next part
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Awesome..!!Waiting for next n Thanks for the pm..!!1
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fab update...
Thanks for pm...
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart thanks for the pm and plzzz do continue soon👏

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