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sspoorthy

@sspoorthy

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#591

finally the truth is out

oh no now y did anjali didn't accept arshi's marriage

awesome part

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archana

@sarchanu

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#592

i like it but it was not your usual standard.

i felt that it was very fast that other family members accepted it when khushi tells the tale. but u as usual wrote the understanding between arnav and khushi very well.

pls continue writing and pls update fast

thanks for the update

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#593

Superb chapter...thanks for the PM

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Deal05

@Deal05

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#594

Love it, love it, love it.

Another awesome concept which is beautifully written.

Enjoyed it from the beginning to the end.

Really liked the POV of Arnav talking to his mum's knowing he had a wrong impression of Khushi.

Loved the way Arnav protected Khushi and stayed with her while she was in Mumbai.

Even when they came to Delhi how he stayed with her every night and how they consummated their marriage.

NK part and reaction is really great and love how he confronted Arnav on the way he married Khushi.

Happy that the true colour of Shayam is out to all. Loved how Anjali slapped him several times.

Would love to see Khushi's dad talking, Arnav and Khushi moving back to Mumbai.

Thank you for the PM.

Keep.on writing and producing wonderful stories.

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teja21

@teja21

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Awesome update dear

Loved it

Finally d truth is out

Thanx fr d pm

Continue soon

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CRAZY4CARTOON

@CRAZY4CARTOON

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#596

finally
Shyams truth out and
ARSHI marriage revealed

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#597

Welcome back
awesome update
finally shayam truth reveals out by arnav
loved the part where shayam in confusion split the truth himself
and
anjali's two slaps were awesome
now shayam will sit in jail and wilk think why he mess with arshi
continue soob