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Lumos-Maxima thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww so sweet of you 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

aww so sweet of you 🤗


less than u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update in some time...
Bt as u know i m busy i can only gve this one in this weekend...
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this update for meera...
Hope u like it
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other readers also...
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NOTE
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PLZ GUYS...
THE BELOW PARTS R
62
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63...
I MISTAKEN TYPE WRONG...
PLZ MANAGE...I CANNOT EDIT IT...
PLZ...
THANK U...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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PART-61
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He is still in that dream land when he hear his name from her mouth in some diffrent magical sounds like freshness of flower..like after long long long 5 yesra he felt like live person..he always hve lonly space in his heart after his fathers death..he never get atteched to anyone bt after her entry in his life his heart automatically attached with her..nd with in whole one year he confirmed that she also has some feeling for him..he just want to hear this from her..as he promis her to wait for one year he do that bt at that he was in such restless stage..even that day he cannot wait for seond to meet her..to hear her..to watch her walking towards him in that red nd white dress..nd most important..he cannot want to hear her confession..that 3 words..with his name..
Bt all get vanish that day..she left mumbai at that evening without any clue left behind her..he felt hundrad of death in thoes years..he regrate to gve her one year promis..he has to get her that first day..he never hve to face this wait..
Bt today..
Today her one single word make him drag in past..he forget all his pain..hurterd..anger..fustration..restlessness..agreevness..madness everythig..he just gve her small inoccent nd relief types smile..
Nd in next moment he got another shock from her..first she behave like normal nd old maanvi..his old maanvi..nd now she conffesion her true feeling..
V-as she whisper his name his grip gets loos little..
M-when he lost in this moment she gather her all courage nd emotionals nd get ready herself..whisper-I LoVE U..
He just froze at his place as he hear this..just sec..what she said???..i..i..l..love..u..he loose his grip little more around her..his lips curve in big victorious smile..he is shock..happy..surpries..on nine cloud..in heaven of love..he felt his life just get starts from this moment..
V-cannot believe on this-..k..kya?..kya kaha abhi tumne?
M-repeat again with more determination-I LoVe U Virat..
V-smile more..-ek baar aur..
M-i love u..
V-plz ek baar aur..
M-i love u..
V-wann jump..dance..run..roam..fly..blast..scream..shout..kiss her..feel her..just want to confoirm this moment..move his hands towards her face..cupped in his palms..with full of love nd passion-ek baar phir se kaho..plz..ek baar aur..
M-try to stop her tears-I LoVe u..
As she finish last word he imigeatly pull her in tight hug..more tight..he gave her born-broken hug..her body almost crussed in his arms..he even not realize that she is not hugging him back..
V-happily-thank u..nd i love u..
He still holding her..didnt want to leave her a bit..
Just then they hear sameer turning to other side..with murmering something..
V-broke little part-chalo yaha se..before sameer wake up bcz of them virat hold maanvi's wrist nd took her to come out from his room nd walk towards hall..he took her in hall..
V-just reach in hall nd he stop near sofa..still holding her wrist..turn towards her..happily..ecxitly..hold her from sholder-maanvi..ye achank se..matlab ye koi naya drama nahi hai right?..tum kuch naya plan nahi kar rahi ho right?
M-just nodded in no..
V-smile more widly-sach main tum mujhse ye kahe rahi ho..still not believing on his ears...
M-come close to him-haa virat..main bhi ek sach hu aur main jo kahene jaa rahi ho sab sach hai..koi jhut nahi..koi drama nahi..koi trick nahi..sirf ek sach..
Just looking at her..
M-i love u..shayad tab se jab se tumne ye mujhe paheli baar ye kaha tha..shayad tab bhi jab tumne mujhe milne bulaya tha..aur har baar jab tum mujh se ye confession chahte the..yahi sunna chahte the tum..chahte the ki main tumse khu ki haa..haa main tumse pyar karti hu..chahte the ki meri banke rahu..to tumhari banke rahene ko ready hu..tum chahte ho ki mujh pe sirf tumhara hak ho..to hoga..aaj se..aur abhi se ye maanvi tumhari hui..jo kahoge jaisa kahoge waisa hoga..jis tarah chahoge waise hoga..
When she saying all this..on starting he liking his statments bt as she telling him more..specially in some last statments he felt something wrong..she making some new track in front of him which he didnt felt right or good for them..
M-as she say all this..she stop for sec nd gulped..remembered god last time nd again look at him-ye sab hoga..bilkul tumhare tarike se..lekin..
V-lekin kya?
M-main yaha nahi rahungi..
V-shock..
M-tum jaha kahoge vaha kisi aur jagah pe rahe lungi..
V-surprise..
M-jab chahe jaise chahe mujhe treat kar sakte ho..kuch bhi ecxpect kar sakte ho..kuch bhi..
V-more shock..surprise..confuse..
M-lekin humare reste ka koi naam nahi hoga..koi jayash naam nahi..ye rishta duniya ke samne kabhi nahi ayega..
V-now he getting angry nd irritate..his confusion making him mad..angrily look at her..-maanvi..
M-try to be strong-haa virat..aur tum chahoto iske baad kisi aur se shadi bhi kar sakte ho.mujhe koi problem nahi hogi..
V-more more more angry nd shock..rored bt in low voise-maanvi..
M-just small step back-main har chiz karne ko ready hu jo tum karne ko kahoge..baat se leke bed tak..
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continue..
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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VIRat geting angry by her each nd single word..he is hell shock nd surpried..his anger getting high..
M-baat se leke bed tak..
Nd with this she make him mad..out of his control..he close his eyes to control on his lawva..he fuming in anger badly..he is hell angry..he felt to kill her..yes to kill her..how can she take their relation in sucj low stage..he took her mumbai just bcz he want to marry her..to saw everyone that he found his love back nd now he going to marry..bt here she planing something else..some rubbish..which is disgusting..very low..
M-continue-sab karungi..bina kisi shikayat ke..lekin sirf ek request hai..kisi ko bhi ye pata naa chale ki tumhari jindgi me koi maanvi hai..naa family me naa bahar..
V-pressing his teeths under his jaw..tighting his fist in anger..lookwing down angrily-maanvi stop here..
M-plz virat..plz..i promis main vahi karungi jo tum kahoge..lekin mujhe apne saath yaha mat rakho..humare saath hone ki baat kisi se mat karo..plz..i promis jo kahoge sab karungi..tumhe kabhi nahi rokungi..janti hu tum mujhe yaha shadi karne ke liye laye ho..
V-imigeatly look at her..
M-to nibhaungi..jo tum mujhse shadi ke baad ecxect karte ho sab karungi..sirf tumhari ban kar rahungi..sameer ki kasam..kabhi tumhe apne karib ane se nahi rokungi..ek biwi ke sare farz nibhangi..sare..din ke bhi aur..aur..raat ke bhi
as she say this she felt sharp pain on her cheek nd she imigeatly fell on side sofa..with her hand on her cheek..
He..who already go through many pains nd confusions..guilts..waits..desire..loveless life nd all..bt always believe in her..on her..on his love..on her feelings that telling him that she has feeling for him..yes he want to claim her..to feel her love..to make love with her..to own her..to make her his from every angal..bt..he didntthink once for this kind of rubbish nd low think..he never fell in such low level..he want her bt with all rights..right of low..right of love..right of respect..right of trust..right of understandig..right of tuning..everything..
Bt she..she is such a rubbish..out of mind..she is mad or surly wann him making mad..
As she saying that last line..his anger get over all boundries or level..his hand make his way nd leaned on her cheek hardly..slesh..
M-ahh..nd she fall on sofa..
V-angily..as he slep her nd she fall on sofa..hold her arm from elbow nd pull her up again nd make her stood again..hold her neck from back side of her head..from her hairs..
M-a..ahh..
V-not holding her tightlt bt still holding her neck from hair..pull her face near to him..full of anger nd madness..fumimg fire from mouth nd eyes nd actions-how dare u?..hun?
M-hell scared..tears come out from her eyes..-v..vir..virat..
V-shut up..shouted to loudly..
M-shiverd with this..
V-kaise?..haa?..kaise?..kaise kahe diya tumne sab?
M-gulping badly..sweating..shivering..
V-shayad tumhari mom ki death ne tumhe pagal kar diya hai..mere saath unlegal relation me rahene ki baat kar rahi ho..
M-vi
v-cut her imigeatly-i said shut up..ek word aur nahi..maine worn kiya tha..mujhe firse purana virat banne pe majboor mat karna..koi bhi ulti chiz mat karna..
M-scared more..
V-left her neck nd sawing finger ttowards her face..pointing his pointer finger towards her..full of mad-ek..ek aur word nd i sawear maanvi..main apna promis pura kar dunga..ye moment tumhari life ka sabse bura nightmarge banke rahe jayega..i swear..
He warn her angrily..
V-tumari problem kya hai ye mujhe nahi pata lekin i promis tumne apne liye problem jarur badha li hai..
M-scared..worried..more nd more..
V-angrily..cannot know how to control his anger..still fuming-mere pyar ko pata nahi kya samz liya tumne..lekin ab nahi..bahot sokh hai naa ye sab se mere dil se khelne ka..to thik hai..yahi sahi..lekin meri sarto pe..ab to tum bhi yahi rahogi..humari shadi bhi yahi hogi..aur..-come more close to her nd pull her close by waist-aur tum meri biwi hone ke sare farz nibhaogi..sare..meri har baat se lekar mere bed tak ke sare..he gve weight on each nd every word..his anger..passion..fustration..pain..madness..love all r in his voice..
M-just froze in fear..shock..scared..sweating..
V-angrily bring his phone from jacket nd dial number-mujhe half hour me ek lawyer marriage documents ke saath mere ghar pe chahiye..just do this fast or else be ready to die..nd he hang up phone angrily..
V-to m..pull her more close-5 min..5 min me woh dress ke niche aao..1 sec jyada nahi..
M-gulped-le..lekin..wo
V-cut with more angrily tone-4 min 45 sec..he rored..
M-hell scared didnt know what to say or do..
V-just free her waist-sirf 4 min nd 30 sec..5 min me 1 sec bhi jyada hua to vahi shadi se pahle apna bed vala huk mang lunga..so get fast..only 4 min left..
She step back..
He turn to other sidend again call to someone..
Here his mom was on the way for home..bt bcz of traffice she getting let..
In house..
Maanvi rush towards room nd without wasting sec get to change..
V-after call-tumne thik nahi kiya..
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😳 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Dhamaka..!!!! OMG Virat would blast her complelty...she confessed but had kept very wierd condition..eager to know if Virat finds out the real reason of her condition..!!!Waiting for next.!
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Superb update Khushi..!! ⭐️⭐️ Shocking.. Whats wrong with Manvi?? She was talking all nonsense.. She confessed her love but her strange condition made the whole situation even more complicated..
Edit :- OMG Virat slapped her and now they are getting married also 😲.. He is so mad at her.. Angry & possessive Virat is back in action.. Manvi is in big trouble now.. Don't know how his mother will react on this.. This is getting really very interesting ⭐️..

Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for updating 😃.. Take care 😊
Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was shocker complete shocker manvi saying all that this time am completely supporting virat she deserved tht slap how dare she talk so cheap abt their relation and loving the fact tht the old virat is bke and zor zabardasti shaadi this is gonna be fun ...
wanna know thw exact reason of hers ...
thanx alott for the updates 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
virat slapped manic 😲
but she deserved it
reveal what she is hiding
continue soon

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