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Jannat94 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update Khushi and Debo
love this virat
eager to read it further
waiting 4 next part
update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jannat89

<font color="#9900FF" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">amazing update Khushi and Debo
love this virat
eager to read it further
waiting 4 next part
update soon😃
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thank u dear
i try to b a soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma


i try...
Bt what abt other stories...


other stories can wait little i wanna see v.mom and manvi's faceoff 😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman



other stories can wait little i wanna see v.mom and manvi's faceoff😆😆😆


okay
i updated one more part today...
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Posted: 12 years ago
FOR...kulsum_virman
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PART-61
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MAanvi entered in his large size house as he drag her inside with him..she scared more now..as soon as virat took her in sameer's room he left her wrist..
V-sawing sameer's room-ye hai sameer ka room..woh to soa raha hai abhi use sone do..indicate towards bed..
Maanvi move her gaze from him for few minutes nd look around whole room..sameer is sleeping in middle of bed with cludding pillow nd cover with blanket..its too big room..decorated with sameer's fav colour yellow nd red..his fav cartoon characters..sports stuff..games..toys..computer..study desk..wardrobe..small couch nd also music player is also in this room..it was too facilated..everything according to sameer's choise..she is not surprised or shock with all this bcz its all can be ecxpected from him..bt she felt too guilty nd helpless..she felt like this bcz she know when he know abt truth..that truth which broke him completely..she just thinking all this when she heard his voise..
V-when she scanning whole room..he quickly walk out from room nd return back with one bag in his hand..walk near to her-maanvi..
M-turn towards him as she hear his voise..
V-ye..tumhare liye..he said with hard voice..she surprised to see change in him..he looking normal now..may b his anger now decreace..bt still he has the same fire in voise..he gve her bag nd without any argue or questions she took bag..bt he can saw question on her face..
V-isme tumhare liye kuch kapde hai..
M-shock-mere?..yaha..
V-come close to her-pichle 4 saal me jab kabhi shopping pe gaya aur jis ko dekh ke laga ki woh sirf tumhare liye bani hai use kharib liya..he said with full of passion..continue-is bag me sirf ek dress hi hai baki servants baad me le ayenge..
M-gulped..as she just think abt other stuffs also..
V-continue-aur mujhe tumhe batane ki jarurat nahi hai ki tumhe yahi dress pahenni hai..he said with more dominatingly..
M-she just look at shopping bag nd open it slightly..she get surprised..-ye to..
V-complete her sentance-vahi dress hai jo maine tumhe send ki thi 4 saal pahele..jab maine tumhe bus-stop pe milne bulaya tha..
She hear pain in his hard voise..she imigeatly look at him..his eyes still sawing his passionate love..nd pain also..
M-lekin ye tumhare pas kaise?
V-smile-tumhare apprtment ke guest room me tha..
M-look away..
V-continue..pull her close by her waist..with full of passionate-tension mat lo..kyu ab tak sambhal ke rakha tha nahi puchhunga..
M-imigeatly look at him
V-pull her more closer nd her hands crush between them with shopping bag..leaning closer to her face-his lips just away from her lips-kyuki main reason janta hu kyu sambhal ke rakhi thi..smirk..
Both just looking in eachothers eyes..
How can she ignore his unwasted effect on her..his love nd confidence always make her weak..she never ever refuse that he loves her a lot..his love is true..bt that was the maine problem..as much he love her..as much as he hurted when true revealed in front of him..
She cannot even imagine when he cme to know abt that truth only god know the result..or may be god also unknown abt his reaction..
M-automatically her hand move towards his face..her eyes now sawing her true feeling of her heart which she hidden from last 4 years..her fingers touched his face with full of affection..nd love..whisper in magical voice-virat...
He felt too good nd be a pleasare hearing his voise..this is first time she saw her loving side in front of him..he just staring at her..he found diffrent maanvi in his arms..he left all his anger nd hard heart treats..he smile lovingly as soon as her hand touch his cheek lovingly..nd she took his name..this is not that same maanvi who behaving like stobborn from last one month..who always try to stife nd fake all time..talk nonsense nd gve rubbish reason to him for leaving her side..who made him confuse all time..
Bt now..she is his old maanvi..who met him before 5 years..in rain at bus stop..the same maanvi who roaming in college that whole year..too pure..delicate..nd most impertant easy to read..simple nd innocent..full of life nd happiness..she can never hurt to anyone..who look at him everytime with sweet nd innocet smile..her eyes always easy to read..who telling him at that time..in college time that she like him..she has some feeling for him..he succeed to leave good nd right impression of is love in front of her to fulfill his promis..by gving her whole year..on one single demand..
He remove shopping from in between them nd place on side chair..he find the same feeling inside her which he searching from this last month from her..for him..her touch make him felt whichhe want from her..to accept him..to accept his love nd stay a life long time with him..nd be a his belong..
He just living this moment which he want to live from last 5 years..he smile nd felt heavy breath like his heart beat fast as she touch him like this..
In next moment he get shock..unecxpected words from her..
M-with full of love..true 1-I LoVE U..
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAANVI FELT SHARP PAIN ON HER CHEEK...
AS VIRAT SLEP HER HARDLY SHE FELL ON SIDE COUCH IN HALL...
HE BURNING IN ANGER BADLY...HIS ANGER CANNOT EVEN MEASURED...
HE ANGRILY CAUGHT HER ARM ND PULL HER STOOD UP IN FROM OF HIM FORCE FULLY...
V-HOLDING HER BOTH ARMS TIGHTLY..SHOOK HER LITTLE ANGRILY..FULL OF ANGER..FUMING BADLY..-HOW DAR U???...
M-HELL SCARED...
V-HIMMAT KAISE HUI TUMHARI..?..HUH..??..KAISE..?..KAISE KAHE DIYA TUMNE YE SAB..?..KAISE?
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NOW AS I GET COMMENTS OR DEMAND IN MY STORY THREADS I UPDATED IN THAT STORY FIRST...
SO IN WHICH STORY U WANT TO UPDATED NEXT COMMENTED IN THAT THREAD FOR THAT...
THANK U...
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I m trying
bt may be i cannot filled up above update early..its took some more days...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
its ok dear
we will wait
take care
Edited by shirhid - 12 years ago
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

sorry for asking
bt wann know...
U read this story?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

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PART-61
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oye hoye thanx alottt khushi 🤗🤗
really really exited for this on 😃

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