ArSh SS 'Badmaash Dill'#3 - Page 93

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

nahi yaar..she won't say it this time..her mind is working over time on ArSh..I have told her ki just to tell you the intricacies about the wedding and stuff kyuki she knows a lot about it and wait and watch your work and your creativity...woh jo soch rahi hai woh realistic nahi lagta utna and thats what she thinks is the USP of your FF..the realistic nature of it and the easy flow of events in your ff.

jaise woh hamesha bolti hai tumhe..ki your FF is like she is standing on the side lines and watching things happen from her own eyes.

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

aur haan usne ek complain bhi ki hai..

batah du?

Originally posted by: sameera_12

batao batao...😆

Originally posted by: teenorchid

tu ne kyu nhi parhna?

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

waise yeh hum dono ko hi lagta hai ki..

you are focussing more on building Armaan's character..usi ke character ke tine shades gain and discriminating shilpa...uska character ab tai itna simple Jane types ka come across hua hai...

we think ki shilpa ki koi mystery honi chahiye..uska koi friend circle..uske friend circle men kya surf Anjali hai..? that will be so not just with her..you understanding.. what I am trying to put across..is cheez se related idea tha uske pass

Originally posted by: sameera_12

iss ke answer mein phir wohi mera ghissa pitta dialogue "Har cheez apne waqt pe ayegi!! Lekin ayegi zaroor"
Shilpa abhi khuli he nahi hai...

Originally posted by: teenorchid

tu friend hai ya behan?

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

matlab yeh ki your readers keep on checking for updates here..toh before you pm we already know that you have updated..toh time waste hai...bas new thread ke liye chahiye hota hai pm tumhari side se.

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

khol na usko phir...Nandi thinks ki ab yeh story armaan cntric hoti ja rahi hai..

its not like ki koi narration hai kisi ke point of view se par phir armaan ki mystery, armaan ke character traits, armaan ka gussa..sab armaan armaan ho raha hai yaha...

muskaan and shilpa are not talking anything except armaan..unk bhi toh koi sister talks hongi..yah shilpa and shashank ka relationship..kyuki jaise shilpa only child hai waise hi nandi bhi..and she feels ki in absence of a brother or sister to a girl..woh pane papa swath hi khelti hai, badi hoti hai...toh unke relationship pe focus karma chahiye..

Originally posted by: cool_sri

agree..i keep on checking this ff daily..for the updates.. & sometimes again read the previous ones..love this ff..it has a reality touch to it..