Be-intehaan virman ff #1

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

nice update viren is still confuse about his feeling
manvi came to help viren and virat also came same
hotel where viren and manvi came update soon

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

wow so finally virman face off...but u guess misunderstanding of virat will nt be sorted soon...so
some fights in store..i guess...anyways loved the dialogues u have written as always...do continue soon dear...

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unknown

@anu0555

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

awsome update..

superb...

fab

lovely...viren realise his love for manvi...

n virman meeting..excited,,...plzz update soon...waiting...!!!

n thnks for pm...

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harininaidu

@harininaidu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

superb interesting finally virat manvi come face - face

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

awesome it is lara 👏👏
yayaayyy finally virman ka aamna saamna this is gonna be damn exciting woww am sooo excited when they meet eachother how will they react and how will virat react after seeing manvi with viren 😃😃
and viren is in love with manvi feel soo bad for him ...
update next part sooon😃

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

amazingly written
loved it
cant wait for the next part
thanks a lot for the pm

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

wow lara it was an awesome seriously. Wow soon virman are going to meet. Viren realized his love for manvi viren virat meeting. Aww its going to be full on dhamaka. Very eager to knw that what will happen when virman come face to face after long time. Nw plz dnt make us wait for long nd update soon. Thank u so much for the pm cont soon

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: Tuba_KSG
Yes yes !!!
maanvi ayii viren ki help k liye , virat viren meeting = virat maanvi ' ankhain mili after so long ' yes yesss it was all connected .. beautifully written like a drama seriously scene by scene .. great yrr ..
but yeah it was such a small one .. don't latkao us naw by giving chote chote update .. i want a LONG one next time .. pleaseee ' inni si request h ' ..
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yeaahh Again m first n that too with out PM .. i was stalking ur FF kal se ' literally '

First of all .. claps...👏... ...First one to comment ⭐️...And I can see that you are very excited...😃...I am excited too to write the next chappy...hope you will like that too...Will try to cont really soon...Take care and thanks a lot for your beautiful comment and appreciation...😃 😃...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: virumanu
tooo tooo short updaTE... PLZZZ CONTINUE SOOONNN
loved it...waiting for the next updasteee..

Thanks a lot my friend...😊...Sorry for the short updt...Will try to cont soon...Take care... tada...😃

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#500

Originally posted by: Jannat94
wow Lara
what a face off
and seriously gal u writes very beautifully
i love viren and manvi scene...loved a
and update totally rocking
Thanx in advance for PM
waiting for next part
update soon