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vks11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

thank you so much you are an awesome writer. I voted for your story.

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OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Quite a Anjali centric update...

But was long too..

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

nw he is understanding hw much kkg went through dear

bt still i say asr shuld loose kkg in these 12 days dear

u r ff always do magic dear

why cant u make kkg has sm rich brother

and dont make tht she lost him at age 8

say smthing like tht they hav rift now it cleared

i wann kkg to be more richer thn asr dear

hope u cn do like tht dear

if not make her to leave after 12 days dear

and after tht let him win

but nt in 12 days dear

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ayushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

awesome update...
finally amma & buaji told dem
all d truth...
so its khushis bday..let see
wat will arnav do for her.. 😊
loved d update!!

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ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

wow dis is a lovely chappy 👍🏼
so finally each nd evry truth is out to arnav nd now he will regret more dat he has misunderstd his angel over dat scumbag...!
I love it how khushi is trying to get practical...!
Loved it how she is calling anjali as anjali di but not nly di coz her marriage is not valid nd its a mere contract marriage whose time span is for just 12 more days...!
I can feel arnav's helplessness nd my heart is tearing up seeing him like dis but i believe he will win his khushi back in these 12 days..! ❤️
nd atlst here he wished her HAPPY BIRTHDAY 😛
waiting for d maalish session now 😉
lovely chappy 👍🏼
waiting for d nxt chappy now 😳

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

beautiful update...now he knows exactly what happened,how much Khushi had to go through..."Your Titliyaa saved me"...I just loved this line...I always wished Arnav told everyone its Khushi for whom he is saved...WOW...he wished her immediately...loved it so much...and now Khushi has to massage his forehead...lucky Arnav and bechari Khushi...darling this oil is for maalish,not frying...waiting for that...
Thanks for the pm...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago

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hydsri

@hydsri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

beautiful. waiting for the next update.

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Edited my comment on page 48 😳

I forgot to mention, Arnav WISHED Khushi on her birthday without any difficulty 😆 The constant reminders of Khushi leaving him were much required to make him realize not to take Khushi for granted. She ain't a punching bag. Khushi has every right to do that after what he said to her the previous night. At other times I might have felt bad for Arnav for Khushi's cold attitude towards him but not after him accusing Khushi once again for utter rubbish. I hated that man on that night 😡 Enough of my ranting.

So yeah I was saying that I have edited my res on the other page 😳

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Loved this chapter to bits.

The language, the humor, the unfolding of secrets and over-all feel of warmth. Fabulous :)

Shall read and vote for you at indireads as well. You most def deserve it!

Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#310

Arnav is slowly getting an inkling of how much he hurt Khushi. The poor girl had to go through hell and back, and pay the prices for things that were out of her control. I think she needs to leave after 12 days. Arnav needs a taste of living without Khushi, after all he has been taunting her with those very words.