What happened in 1998#2|| Note on pg 21

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momb24

@momb24

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Didnt realise you updated,good progress,looking forward to the next update,hopfully Khushi is honest and lets him know how much his actions are hurting her.

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

something is definitely wrong with Khushi

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

I unreserved my comment for chapter 12 on page 3 (sorry for the late edit!).

Now on to chapter 13: So glad that Khushi didn't wake up to find Arnav missing without knowing where he went off to. I'm wondering if he would have left her a note if she hadn't woken up. However, I still don't like the fact that he actually did go to that meeting; I'm sure his business associates would understand that he just got married!!!

So Arnav's dadi will be making an entry, I have a feeling she's going to create some problems.

The title of the chapter was "The First Argument" but there was none between Arnav and Khushi so far, so I'm guessing it's going to happen in 13B (as Khushi says they need to talk once they get home)...I'm very curious to find out what conversation they will have.

The dinner at Khushi's parents house was really great. Loved the fact that Garima made Arnav eat so much and he couldn't refuse her in his typical ASR manner...good thing he respects his in-laws and is not downright rude to them. Shashi's sincerity as a father amazes me, his last line was just great. And what was the deal with Arnav eating Rasmalai out of Khushi's bowl...that's usually a sign of two people who are very comfortable around each other, but that's not the case yet between these two.

You promised part B within a week of the last update, and it's been a week now! Hope you get a chance to update soon.

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

I loved the update and I love shashi and Garima. Khushi and payal are so lucky to have them as their parents. I can't wait to see how Arnav and Khushi's marriage will progress. Amazing update!!!

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zaibun un nisa

@saima4744

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Congo on new thread.
It was superb.
Tfs.

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Dreamcatcher

@Dreamcatcher

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Lovely update... waiting for next part...

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Aarnavi

@Aarnavi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Amazing update.. And congrats for the new thread..Wating for the update..👏

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

caught up n the FF very interesting

please please add me in PM list

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

aweosmee...

wow khush is doing good job in avoiding him

chaya is a spy ah 😡

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Note

Hello all. I know I haven't been around for quite some time and my lack of response in the past few weeks has probably upset you. I am Very Sorry indeed.

I am in my final year of uni and as a result I made a (sudden) decision to write an additional exam, apart from the usual university ones that I write. This has kept me busy attending various classes- not to mention the loads of self study I am required to do. Due to this every time I sit down to write, I suffer a writer's block with not even one productive paragraph written.

This demotivated me, frustrated me even, to an extent that I couldn't bring myself to visit IF for weeks. It made me feel worse that I was delaying my updates further, n I just kept delaying my visit to IF until a few friends spoke to me.

I do not want to discontinue the story. I really do want to pen the plot I have in mind. So I will try to update as and when I can. I hadn't anticipated any of the changes (both in student and in personal life) and really do apologise for the delay.

U might have noticed that I haven't 'liked' the feedback given to my previous chapter. I have read each one of them and would love to read them again after I post part B to the chapter, hence will 'like' them then. Thank you for all the encouragement and wonderful analysis that you post. They do mean a Lot to me.

Love sj

Edited by sj_arhi - 12 years ago