Swaron FF: Destiny and it's Funny game [Chapter 14 UPDATED]

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#401

another amazing update...

i just love d way u describe d situation..

gang part was nicely penned down..

feeling bad for swayam..i wnt dis Sid topic to get over asap...

and chotusa swaron scene was emotional yet romantic...

and after reading d ending...cant just wait for next update now..

jaldi update karna..

ps-sorry again for late comment.. 😔

Edited by sweetdivya - 11 years ago

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#402

AWESOME UPDATE...
thank u fr d pm...
plzzz update soon 😊

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Sneha Chheda

@snehac2

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

awesum update
wat a point to stop the chap

eagerly waiting for SID's reaction n d nxt update
cont soon
thanz for d pm

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

fabulous update dear...
loved d swaron convo...
swayam was afraid nd sid is here...
hope dt sid will understand nd will not cause any problems..
thanks 4 d pm..
update soon

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

it was a nice update

i liked swayam and sharon chemistry

and the ex - st louis cultural team is great

do update soon

i am waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

waiting for s-i-d

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#406

wat an update buddee 😲

ab meih kaha sey suru karu

this update was a perfect blend of everything

from romance to drama it had it all

the small swaron romance scene

whr they were going to kiss was

beautifully penned

n the end baap rey

wat a cliffhanger tha woh 🤢

you did a fab work yet again

Bringing your characters' emotions out of the analytical, away from the general, beyond the abstract you hav the ability of filtering emotion through your characters' consciousness n Recreating their experience tat draws me directly into that experience.

reading tis update n many more from you

i want to share one quote wit you which suits your writing perfectly

''Although we read with our minds, the seat of artistic delight is between the shoulder blades. That little shiver behind is quite certainly the highest form of emotion that humanity has attained when evolving pure art and pure science. Let us worship the spine and its tingle.''

do update soon 🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

edited on pg 55.. 😊

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#408

great update..
omg sid's entry with a bang..(literally)..poor swayam..kaafi jor se lagi hogi..
really eager for the next chapter now tanvish..
thanks for the pm
love
nishi
p.s. sorry for the short comment..

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#409

Tannu tu itna achha kaise likh sakti hai yaar how can someone be so bloody kickarse awesome?? .
I loved the gang's reaction bechari Sharon darr gayi thi for a moment even I had a short laugh after reading that portion and it was great to read the entire team working together again..😃.
The sweet romantic moments which Swayam and Sharon share were truly awesome to read bahut achha laga after reading them and I loved Swayam's care and love for her..❤️.
Also loved how Sharon soothes away Swayam's worries about Sid not accepting their relation that moment was good.. And kriya's teasing was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.😆.
Sid is back my my and aate hi maar diya Swayam ko poor guy..😔.
Update the next part ASAP tannu I'll be waiting for it.. And Ohhh yess I loved Sharon and Swayam's outfits they surely would be looking a million dollar in those outfits..😊.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#410

Nice continuation of a beautiful story. SwaRon relationship was beautifully penned and really Swaronish. Needed Sid's entry here or it might have become little predictable.