ARSHI OS: ALL OF ME

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tanvi_arshi

@tanvi_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wonderful update...love the teasing of arnav n boldness of khushi at the end...

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

despite my loving YLME i still read it independently and loved it

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archa2810

@archa2810

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

i had loved it in YLME n i loved re-reading it here too 👏

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

I can never get enough of this story...!!! Arnav is just perfect...

YLME anytime soon???

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

RES.

Will be back soon!

Edit:

This has to be one of the most enjoyable pieces I've read in a while!

I understand that this is actually part of an FF, but it worked really well as a stand-alone piece .

I just loved the whole scenario here, the remarriage and the delayed suhaag raat were a perfect backdrop to bring back the flirty ASR that I missed !

Your Khushi is passionate, shy and wicked by turns, and I liked how you gave her a woman's desires. She is hesitant about voicing them, but she finally takes the plunge!

I also liked how ASR said that he was angry because she said the marriage wasn't real. My other favorite bit was where he came up with his 'solution'!

And the part at the end about sharing fantasies makes the imagination run wild!

Thank you for a fun, well-written story, I loved it!

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago