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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: ruby-red
a brilliant update, like how he is not a complete monster.

HEHE WELL THATS MY MISSION IN LIFE I THINK TO TRY AND PROVE HE ISN'T A COMPLETE MONSTER...ONLY LIKE HALF 😉😆

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
hey ...
Brilliant upate !!

I was just hoping that Arnav doesn't commit any mistake which would actuallly make him guilty later on ...

Thankfully he didn't ... And the opening of her dori was just an accident and nothing more ... So that's ok !!

My favorite parts are, the way he analysed her when he entered the room and decides to do something to his security team for hurting her !!

And when he let her go and the way she just figured out he was in pain just by gazing in his eyes was just intense !!

Thanks for the pm :)

THANK YOU...n that is my favourite part in this chapter too, when he is annoyed with his security for roughing her up and when she notices the pain in his eyes...for me it just shows their charaters so clearly in those moments...it shows how he even though hates and wishes to do terrible things to her ultimately does not wish to acutally hurt her for he is not a violent man only and angry man...there is difference and he shows just that...and for her shows just how amazing a person she is, that even though this man has threatened her rape (unintentionally of course...but she doesn't know that she thinks that he breaks the dori on purpose) she still stops to see if he is ok, his pain gnaws at her even though her own life is in jeopardy for a fraction of a moment she puts him above her self than snaps back moreso because of payal then her own sake...thats khushi putting everyone before her self...there are these moments in the show too which just leave you in awe just little things what she does what he does that show their true nature and leave you with a completely knew projection of their characters...its fantastic...and this was my attempt to create one of those I dunno how succesful I was in doing it but at least you picked up on it so its a start right 😛

thank you for the comment...always love hearing what you liked and disliked in a chapter, it helps me when I write...so thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts means a lot 😊

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: pakpearl
I m too happy to find my KKG a fighter...

First,she dealt with Shyaam though she was so hurt..

Then ,she held her head high before ASR by not giving in n escaped ...

Then,she made to her Jiji's wedding...Playing the best host...

O Khushi...I m really proud of you...

ASR,the ruthless man,is so vulnerable at heart...

I loved that man inside him...

He was so mad at the girl who tried to ruin Lavanya's show...

But,he dint cross his limits n even felt so guilty over breaking the string of Khushi's shirt...

Abeer...
I can't wait to see how does this wonderful story progress...

How my Arhi will meet again...
under what circumstances...
what would be their reaction...
How they will affect each other's life...

OMG...I m so excited !!!

PHEW YOUR HAPPY...I'M GLAD...N YUP KHUSHI IS AWESOME...THIS IS ONE THING I LOVE ABOUT HER, HOW SHE CAN ALWAYS PORTRAY CALM FACADE WHILE INSIDE EVERYTHING IS IN SMITHEREENS...THE PERSON IN FRONT OF HER MAY NEVER KNOW THE TURMOIL THAT IS INSIDE OF HER...SHE SUCH A STRONG PERSON...THE MOST THEY MAY COME TO WITNESS OF HER PAIN IS A FEW TEARS...BUT EVEN THEN WILL NEVER KNOW WHY THEY'RE THERE... ABSOLUTELY LOVE HER CHARACTER TO THE CORE...SHE HERSELF NEVER REALISES IT JUST HOW GOOD PERSON SHE IS WHICH IS WHAT KEEPS HER MODEST AND DOWN TO EARTH...SHE IS SIMPLY AWESOME!!!

AND ARNAV...LOL HOW CAN I END A COMMENT WITHOUT MENTIONING HIM...😆 WELL DIDN'T I TELL YOU HE'S NOT ALL THAT RUTHLESS...ALL ONE HAS TO DO IS TRY TO SEE THE MAN UNERNEATH AND THEN ALL COMES CLEAR AND YOU REALISE THAT IN ACTUALITY HE IS NOT A MONSTER ONLY MISTAKEN TO BE ONE...THIS IS WHAT KHUSHI COMES TO REALISE IN THE SHOW AND WILL HOPEFULLY COME TO REALISE IN THIS STORY TOO...😳

N HEHE,,,JUST BECAUSE ITS' YOU AND CUZ I'M AN EVIL WRITER AT TIMES I WILL CONVEY THIS MUCH THAT THE TWO WILL MEET SOONISH ENOUGH, BUT I HAVE A SNEAKY LITTLE FEELING THE CIRCUMSTANCES THEY MEET UNDER MY CRITIC FAUZIA WILL BE BACK...😆 AND FOR THAT TIME I WILL JUST SAY HAVE A LITTLE FAITH IN ME...😉

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: maazia
Amazing update. Liked the way you described their feelings and emotions.

THANK YOU 😃

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: aarrsshhii
i really loved the update...brought back alot of memories 😊
well...thank god arnav let her go...and also no more shyam ...
poor khushi , had to face so much in a day...
i hope u will continue soon...😳

THANK YOU...yup poor khushi indeed...she has to face a lot but she is a fighter and so will not give into either of these men...😊

And Arnav as much as he trys to be ruthless at the end of the day he cannot be, his morals don't allow him to be a scoundrel he can allow himself to hurt her only so much not more...not that it excuses his interrogation style but at least it shows that while he is mean he is not a psycho who will stoop to anything to get an answer out or to exact revenge...thus he lets her go...😊

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: ACTywm

PHEW YOUR HAPPY...I'M GLAD...N YUP KHUSHI IS AWESOME...THIS IS ONE THING I LOVE ABOUT HER, HOW SHE CAN ALWAYS PORTRAY CALM FACADE WHILE INSIDE EVERYTHING IS IN SMITHEREENS...THE PERSON IN FRONT OF HER MAY NEVER KNOW THE TURMOIL THAT IS INSIDE OF HER...SHE SUCH A STRONG PERSON...THE MOST THEY MAY COME TO WITNESS OF HER PAIN IS A FEW TEARS...BUT EVEN THEN WILL NEVER KNOW WHY THEY'RE THERE... ABSOLUTELY LOVE HER CHARACTER TO THE CORE...SHE HERSELF NEVER REALISES IT JUST HOW GOOD PERSON SHE IS WHICH IS WHAT KEEPS HER MODEST AND DOWN TO EARTH...SHE IS SIMPLY AWESOME!!!

AND ARNAV...LOL HOW CAN I END A COMMENT WITHOUT MENTIONING HIM...😆 WELL DIDN'T I TELL YOU HE'S NOT ALL THAT RUTHLESS...ALL ONE HAS TO DO IS TRY TO SEE THE MAN UNERNEATH AND THEN ALL COMES CLEAR AND YOU REALISE THAT IN ACTUALITY HE IS NOT A MONSTER ONLY MISTAKEN TO BE ONE...THIS IS WHAT KHUSHI COMES TO REALISE IN THE SHOW AND WILL HOPEFULLY COME TO REALISE IN THIS STORY TOO...😳

N HEHE,,,JUST BECAUSE ITS' YOU AND CUZ I'M AN EVIL WRITER AT TIMES I WILL CONVEY THIS MUCH THAT THE TWO WILL MEET SOONISH ENOUGH, BUT I HAVE A SNEAKY LITTLE FEELING THE CIRCUMSTANCES THEY MEET UNDER MY CRITIC FAUZIA WILL BE BACK...😆 AND FOR THAT TIME I WILL JUST SAY HAVE A LITTLE FAITH IN ME...😉

I just wanna ask one thing...

Am I really too scary ??? 😕

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anonyasr

@anonyasr

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Ugly snake. Interesting story.Well written.

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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆😆

U write just a sentence~~~~~

Abeer will reply in a para or two 😆

What if I write a para,~~~

She'd definitely write a book in return

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

crap she was so scared when her dori broke

but he realised quickly that she would think that he may try to rape her
and turned away from her, letting her escape