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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
I just read the two parts together and I so loved it .
You write so well with a touch of reality.I am glad it remained within the friendship bond, was much more realistic. Your writing has a continuous flow, not once did I get bored or lost .VruShan off- screen bonding is so adorable and was very well depicted in this OS.You wrote it keeping in mind their real-life personalities and that was really commendable.

To sum it up , this was a very pleasant read and do inform me when and if you write more.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written OS I usually read only VruShan OS but I must say this is the best one and I relates to VruShan in every aspect:)

VruShan friendship is always a treat to fans..their supportive and understanding among themselves is something which makes them special as in this OS I loved this bubbly-matured Vrushika who understood the situation and made it a point that no matter what world says she'll never let her friendship get affected:) loved the way she made him understand that their friendship is something more than ppl's talk:)romance can be found in any OS but friendship u described made it really a fab one:):)ending was nice and I could really connect actual VruShan with the OS VruShan:)

Well written:):) enjoyed reading it:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you SO much for all the lovely comments :)
It feels so good to get people reading and liking my works. I'm really happy :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Hmmm first of all kudos for coming wid this amazing & innovative concept the way u have merged their reel life & real life situation is just commendable!!! Shantanu is very much affected by vrushi's presence so thought of avoiding her be it unintentionally but he did hurt in the process!!!!Simply this is something flawless work I've ever come across!!! brilliant piece of work!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmmm first of all kudos for coming wid this amazing & innovative concept the way u have merged their reel life & real life situation is just commendable!!! Shantanu is very much affected by vrushi's presence so thought of avoiding her be it unintentionally but he did hurt in the process but alas everything got sorted out n they are back to being friends n I simply loved their bond!!! U made me fall for vrushan even more n deep!!!!Simply this is something flawless work I've ever come across!!! brilliant piece of work!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
namii diii thank you🤗..
mere andar ki saari negativity aapne nikaal di
os was awsome
i loved it..
vrushan
how can they be chhooo cute?
keep writing more and thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: .vruShan_rocks.

namii diii thank you🤗..

mere andar ki saari negativity aapne nikaal di


os was awsome

i loved it..

vrushan

how can they be chhooo cute?

keep writing more and thanks for the pm :)


Oye main teri di kab se ban gayi? 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Anddd the perfect ending! This is what I call being real. Loved reading this! You've done such a fab job with this one, even though we dont know much about Shantanu and Vrushika. But it feels like their bond must be similar. ^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a relly amzing n a realistic atemt which was realy a sucess i could feel the the bond n frndship thanks for keeping it dat way ,i loved it .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you for d appreciation :)

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