You write so well with a touch of reality.I am glad it remained within the friendship bond, was much more realistic. Your writing has a continuous flow, not once did I get bored or lost .VruShan off- screen bonding is so adorable and was very well depicted in this OS.You wrote it keeping in mind their real-life personalities and that was really commendable.
To sum it up , this was a very pleasant read and do inform me when and if you write more.
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