#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016 - Page 69

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Posted: 12 years ago

Are we not glad about it !😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
the intimacy the closeness of lovers the soulmates was fab
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Posted: 12 years ago


Me enjoyed your update😉
You Yanjayyy Kozakattai !😆
Next
Paal Poli 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
the couple time in the farmhouse was really written beautifully..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow this was one of the best chapters...
as it is the one of the bes ffs and its updates get better everytime...
this update had a different calm feeling in it...arnav and khushi all to themselves in each others solace .loving each other ,soothing each other of their worries and discussing what was bothering the other person...both of them have a lot going on in their life...
its so beautiful how the two understand each other,how their love is so mature and so calm...
it seems now both of them have something interesting coming up ahead in their lives...finally arnav is ready to take lavanya's case , khushi too seems to have found her opening to become a published writer...
u have different flair,a different magic in writing,...
marvelous work...plz continue soon...
thanku for this quick update, as it is I keep stalking this ff...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What to say about this Arnav and Khushi ... they are something else ...
They are so tuned in to each other that it is not funny ...
They understand each other like the back of their hands ...
infact so well that every word uttered ... every mood ...
each action is understood by the other ...
And what better way of beating stress than ... Intimacy ...
that was so beautifully written ... it was sensuous ... had a bit of naughtiness ...
and playfulness given their ages ...

Both seem to be at cross roads and not wanting to make mistakes which could
affect others ...
Loved the way Arnav encourages Khushi and Khushi Arnav ...
They both just need to take the plunge now ...

Thanks Twiggy ... beautiful chapter ...
Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Since when did you start writing intimacy like a pro? :) Now I see why all your readers are thrilled that they aren't just playing Ludo in the farmhouse. The thing is we just want to see that Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai chemistry all time that we don't realize that couples fall into a comfortable pattern after a while but that doesn't mean that the fire isn't there. They just learn how to keep it to themselves without letting the world know. Imagine being witness to a couple who has eye sex all the time. Shudder. No. No. Maybe that's why people always joke about leaving newly married folks alone :P

Ah you know what I am beginning to love about this story " that it is different is a given but that it is about growing up (if you can call it that) or no wait...let me call it come of age " together. I think this has to be the only story where the love is actually a force that helps them be better people while allowing them to be themselves.

What an Arnav this man is. And no I am not going to say that he is fiction. At least today, I will be the soppy romantic I am and I will say that these people exist. And Khushi is lucky to have found hers just as he is lucky to have found his. They make a pair so wise, so perfectly in sync, one of those couples you think can do no wrong, that it makes you want to steal their hearts and minds, just so you can see what their little secret is.

I am rarely a sucker for only Arnav-Khushi chapters in any story, Twigs but I loved this one. To bits. And not just because of the fiddling, for everything that you have managed to create in just 9 chapters. Some of us take months to do the same and still struggle ;)

Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res... Will make it up for previous one too:)

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Sincere apologies for taking the liberty to be this late here... Sorry my girl...

I loved this update twiggy... It clarified an very important aspect of their relationship... Given their years of being together it is only natural for them to be so... But I had my doubts when you chose not to touch this topic while they went to the farm house last time... Now all doubts are cleared in a picture perfect manner... Farmhouse visits does mean what it should in every sense 😉

A very different n totally matured take on relationship... It is not an easy task to write n weave a story on a completely well established relationship n hats off twiggy for choosing to write so.

You know how much I adore the Arnav here... And for first time I did like Khushi for being there for Arnav.. Obviously Arnav is more selfless here but Khushi does not lag far behind... It's just that she has more on her plate to look into n not just him... But they are a very sweet n cute couple n I hope they just stay together all along n let not the work n world affect this warm love that they share...

Ps: did he just think himself to be old??? Dare him :)
Edited by preethi.saseeda - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
God. I could relate so much to this chapter. It was so me.
When your hopes are broken once, you don't dare hope again. Because the risk is too high.
It's too hard to let go of your dreams and hopes.
It's so difficult going through that phase once that you would rather waste an opportunity than going the same route.
You start doubting yourself. This is where you need your loved ones around you.
But what ive learnt is that one should keep trying. Eventually things do work out...
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Posted: 12 years ago
its wow update
love their understanding, intimacy, and their faith in each other

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