#1PolemicJackanapes: Complete [Note + Blog Link Pg154] 3Jan 2016

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Say sorry its not an easy task...

but its not pride or ego for everyone

you just don't how to say it...whenever i have to say sorry i just remembered how ASR practice to say sorry to khushi.

Garima is mother like every mother, she also wonderful know how to teach their children and handle their emotional strength

she's even care about arnav and his emotional stability with the words payal that day.

So its khushi first day...i m waiting for next update

one thing i like about your writing...its simplicity

like i m reading about my life

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Firstly thank you for the buddy request and then dropping the PM, Twiggy..much appreciated :-))

Garima -Payal relationship is heartwarming...( it felt close to my heart, cuz, I share a similar equation with my Mom) I loved the manner in which Garima castigated Payal, ...and, what appealed to me was the fact that she asked her not to apologise, just to satiate her mother.. that is what I would do too...

I am glad that Payal decided to dwell upon her mother's pearls of wisdom, and, asked for forgiveness...and, it felt so gratifying, to read about Arnav's laughter...though, I was grinning when I read about a screeching apology.. now, that is something novel ;-) what also stood out was Payal's candid confession about her being herself around Arnav, it cements the fact that the girl does not believe in affectations ...

Looking forward to the next ...

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

This is an interesting story.

You have the knack to describe things so that we visualize it then and there without even being aware of doing so!

Loved this ordinary Arnav who is sensitive and who loves Khushi a lot!

Waiting for the next update.

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Great interaction between Payal and Arnav, they certainly have a good relationship despite her sharp tongue.
I loved Arnav's good natured laughter at her inept apology, which then melted her resentment enough to allow her to apologize to him gracefully.

It is not very common to see Arnav and Payal have any kind of a relationship independent of Khushi, This chapter almost made me forget about Khushi, despite the initial conversation between Garima and Payal!

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Res, too late in the night, Will updt tomorrow, pinky promise.

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nimmi

@aksuji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

hey!! u do know how awesome u r ,don't u??...

I wonder from where do u guys get such amazing ideas...

this is an amazing story...

I loved all the teasing by arnav to akash that was in I guess 2 or 3 chap...

m fond of payal too...

and arnav khushi have their ow charm

this is really a masterpiece story and m enjoying reading...

m eagerly looking forward to more updates...

plz update soon

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

A mother's anxiety never abates! And I can vouch for that.

I liked the whole mother-daughter convo in the beginning.

But Payal's apology took the cake! That was very well-written, Twiggy!

I enjoyed reading that part, and it gave me a real sense of what the equation is between Payal, her Mom, and Arnav .

But now I can't wait to see what has happened on Khushi's first day.

So update soon!

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Awww...Arnav is mine. Bas. Khushi's is going to have to find another wonderful, caring, sweet, funny guy for herself. 😆

Seriously the way you have written Arnav is just wonderful - I can totally say that while he may feel anchorless this character is the anchor for many people around him; his cheerfulness, sense of humour, and overall awesomeness - is it a wonder that even the Guptas think the world of him?

Payal...I can understand where she is coming from, but family or no family, her bluntness and lack of tact is just too much. I'm glad she apologised at least. I hope Khushi tells Arnav just how special and wonderful he is...

I hope we get to see more of Akash too - he and Payal are too funny!

Wonder how Khushi's first day will be??

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.caprice.

@.caprice.

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

I loved the equation between Payal and Garima. It reeked of a certain nostalgia, it seemed as if the author was missing their mother whilst writing this update.

Arnav and Payal were another story altogether. I have never enjoyed an uncomfortable apology until now. It seems unkind of me to laugh, for I too turn into a mess of fumbling words whilst apologizing, but it cannot be helped. I must giggle!

Oh, please do update soon! Thank you for the message!

-Sangfroid