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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: ariya_rocks
What to say yar this update was is superduper awsome
so well and beautifully written
I loved roya and baby convo..
I hope one day arjun should listen riya n baby convo

Wow sam planned a trip for ariya.. He s such a swtheart
shree n chotu were fab yar dost ho toh aisey..

Flashback moments are derscribing arjun n riya emotions
towards each other..

But present is sad bt thank god sam is there to handle him
kabhi kabhi strict hona padta hai dost ko sambhalne ke liye

one more thing guys u mentioned shimla where ariya s going
and u knw shimla s my hometown
so thank u sweety
loved it to the core

thans dr for the sweet n lvly comments...
Ohh thats grate..
per meine abhi tak shimla dekha nahi loo..
etane pass hone ke baad bhi

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: diii
niceee😊

ariya smila trip thats great😛😳

Originally posted by: Moner_Radio
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#990066">piya :</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#990066">awww rathore is such a wonderful friend to have .. always ready to make things easy for his bestie ..arjun is lucky to have a friend like him, and the last scene is so sweet .. update soon.😊</font>

thans dr for the sweet n lvly comments...
glad to know new reader also like my work...
thanks uuu

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: priyu03
Awsome update
So finally opration started... Arjun didnt want to leave her... he feel like someone snatching his life from him... Rathod come to knw that they live in separate rooms... so he thought of sending them on trip...precap is scary... what happen to Arjun...??? Y he is so much angry...???
update soon

Originally posted by: Chocolate_barun
riya's operation started
sam dragged arjun out was so emotional
they are going shimla
waiting for next update
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Geeta.R
Bahut mast di! thankyou for update and pm xx

Originally posted by: tejaswini.253
loved it
thanx fr d pm dear

Originally posted by: mshikha
Awesome update...pls con't soon

thans dr for the sweet n lvly comments...
hum thoda sa to scary hai..
or may be.???????

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg
Superb update love it love riya's talk with the bady so ARIYA is going to shimla for holiday ARIYA'S thought is written beautiful pls continue soon thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Christeee
good that sam sent them for a trip thoda change hojayega
shree and chotu teasing riya
arjun kab aage badega
precap mein arjun itna gussa kyun hai
update soon

Originally posted by: pankhuri96
awsm piya di...

thans dr for the sweet n lvly comments..
Just wait pata chal jayega

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

arjun noticed her..she was hugging herself..
Ar-riya kya tumhen thand lag rahi hai..
.
Ri-she smiled..humm thodi se..
Ar-(muttered under his breath)
ye rathor bhi na..kya jarorat the ye trip plane kerne ke,
ager kerna he tha to shimla ke jagah kahi or ker deta..
(meen he to want loll)
Bus dont warry riya hum ab pahooch gaye hain..
bus kuch formality poori ker loon ..
phir tum aram se apne room mein aram kerna..
.
She just nodded her head..n follow arjun..

--
SCENCE -hotal -
moon sunshine (fake naam)-
AT RECIPTION-
.
Ar-plz check Mr n miss arjun rawte ke naam per booking hogi
Rec lady-yaa one second sir..
After few minute..
.
Ar-plz jaldy kijiye..meri wife thodi tired feel ker rahi hai,
.
aap at least pehale rooms ke keys de digiye ,meri wife jaa ker rest ker legi..
or mein aapki baki ke formailty poori ker deta hoon..
.
R lady-She smiled..ok sir.,i hv no problem,
She giv keys to arjun,
Ar-room mein hitter to hoga na..or baki sara saman cleen hona chahiye..
.
(as he know riya is totaly higenic frenk,but why hitter..?? loll what about u ..
naughty me..)
.
RGirl-dont warrt sir..
room hamne vaisa he decorate kiya hai,
jaisa hamen booking ke time instruction dee gaye the,
.
so u dont warry..if u need any think than plz infirmed us..we r happy to help u sir..
---
Arjun goes near to riya-
riya ye lo apne rook ke keys..
.
tum jaker fresh ho jao..
or meine dinner bhi room mein order ker diya hai,
mein bus kuch formality poori kerke ata hoon,
.
She took keys n moved toward her room..
---
After few minute-
Arjun enters the room..
He was shocked..
.
in mind-ye rathore..
pehale to sirf ek hi room book kervaya, or vo bhi hanymoon sweet..
.
or ye sab decoration..ye candle ye flowers..
.
all room decorated with candle or red n white flowers..
.
n their bed was also decorated with

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Flowers..
the fregnance of room..
losses his sense..
Ye rathore..he yelled in mind..ese to mein baad mein dekh longa ..
.
per riya se kya kahonga,
pata nahi kya sonch rahi hogi,
n specialy mere baare mein,
shittt..
(sudenly he realised)
Riya kahan hai..
he turned his face here n there..
Ye riya hain kahan..
finaly his graze fell on a couch..
she was sleeping on a couch..
What the hell..?? ye etani thand mein vo bhi bina blanket yahan kyun soo rahi hai..
or phir se dinner nahi kiya..
had hoti hai laperwahi ke,
apna khayal bilkul rakhana ata hi nahi,
.
hamesha mujhe hi eska khayal rakana padta hai.
.
per sonne se pehale dinner to ker leti..
or ager sonna tha to bed per so jaati,es tarah couch per...
.
he composed himself first n then he cleen bed..
.
he goes near to riya..
Riya chalo udho pehale dinner ker loo..baad mein sonna..
Riya..!!!
ahhaa mujhe sonaa hai,
sonne do tai..abhi school jaane mein time hai,
.
Ar-what school tai
ab mein ese tai lag rahi hoon,
.
Mrs Riya rawte chalo udho jaldy..Ab tum school jaati bachhi nahi hain..
khud ek bachhe ke maa banane bali hain,
.
He again shake her body..
Stil in sleeping mood-
pehale kissi do ..phir udhungi..
.
Ar-what.???
in mind-lagta hai es room ka kuch jayada he bura asar pada hai,
.
---
SCENCE SHIFT-IN mumbai

What..???
how could u do that mom..
Aap ek maa hoker ehsa kaise ker sakti hain..
.
Her mom-ager mera bus chalta to kabhi us ladki ko hamare gher aane nahi deti..
.
or meine koe galat kaam nahi kiya,usse apne gher se nikal ker..
.
Girl-mujhe to bilkul yakeen nahi ho raha..ke aap ehsa ker sakti hai,
whyyy u do that.??
Apne riya ko gher se bahar kyun nikala mom..
.
mein to ye bhi nahi jaanti ke meri chhoti behan dekhati kaise Hai,
meine jitani baar aapse uske koe pic mangi..
aapne her baar koe na koe bahana kerke ma

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Mana ker diya..
kash apne kabhi use apne baiti mana hota..
.

she was to angery on her mom..n now she hav no idea where is her sis..
.
Her mom-bakbas band karo apni aisha..
vo ladki meri baiti kabhi nahi ban saki..
.
or usane jo kiya usake baad to bilkul nahi..
akhir khoon kiska hai,usane bhi vahi kiya jo uski maa ne kiya tha..
.
Aisha wss shocked..
what.??? aap kehana kya chahati hain mom..kahin aap ka matlab...
.
Her mom-yes vo bhi apni maa ke tarah shadi se pehale hi maa banane vali hai..

(in mind-pata nahi us acp ka bachha hai bhi ya kisi or ka,
or pata nahi, usane usase shadi ke bhi hai ya bus..
vo dono ehase hi ek dosare ke sath..chhiii mujhe to sonchate huye bhi sharam aa rahi hai..)
.
(I hate her loll how dare she...?)
---
SCENCE Shift-
Noo pehale kiss karo..phir udungi..
.
Riya ye drama band karo..jaldy se dinner karo,usake baad tumhen medicine bhi leni hai,
.
(But she is to stunborn even in her sleep)
.
Arjun starring her ..
she looking so innocent,
n her demand is just a kiss...
.

She again wishper-pehale ki...
she didnt completed her sentance..bez arjun placed his lips on her..
TBC-precap same+
Ariya first day in shimla...

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Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago