Virika FF: Written in my heart (Chp 8 pg 56) - Page 12

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Chapter 4

"Are you guys serious? We're gonna play cricket?" She said sitting on the chair of the dinning table.

"You doubt?" Vikram(Viren's father) said.

"OMG!! How much I love you all! You have made my favorite dishes! Eekkss!!! Common now please lets get done with the lunch fast!" She said picking up a spoonful of rice.

"Jeevika, we aren't going to play just after lunch! We'll start at 4! First you and Viren have to go and pick up Nira from the airport" Janvi said.

"No! Don't say that she's coming here! No way!" She said keeping the spoon back in the dish.

"Yes way!" Viren said smirking naughtily. Nira's father was a partner in business. They were family friends. Viren knew how much she hated Nira! The fact that she was Viren's best friend was not known to her yet. She knew that they used to study in the same law college but not that they were besties. He used to treat Nira like his sister, but Jeevika never liked that girl. And that's why he didn't tell her about it. The hate she had for this girl was known to everyone in the room. They could smell the troubles coming on their way as they saw Jeevika's face turning red with anger.

"Why the hell are you doing this to me?" She said irritated.

"Dear! Its my wedding if you didn't forget! And her father wanted to send her early so that she could help us in preparations." Manvi said.

"Ugghh!!!" She said the marched out of the room leaving everyone burst out into laughter.

"Viren, what will happen when she gets to know that Nira is your best friend?" Virat teased.

"Bhai! Please! Don't even say that! I have imagined the scene before hand! She'll kill me! Lol! If not that, she would definitely throw me out of this country!"

"Yup! Its better that she doesn't come to know! Else this whole wedding will turn out to be a huge mess." Jeevika's mother said trying to control her laugh.

"Ya! Now I better go and pacify her!" Viren said as he got up and went to her room. Everyone started laughing again remembering the earlier encounters of Jeevika and Nira. Viren hushed them as he was going to open the door.

He saw Jeevika sitting on the other of her bed blabbering things in anger. He picked a book he found and went to her. He knelt down and offered her the book. She accepted it, opened it and started tearing the pages. She kept muttering while ripping off the pages ruthlessly. He just smiled at how cute she looked even when she was angry. She was still a little kid.

After tearing like half of the book, she calmed dawn.

"Done?" He asked leering at her.

"Ya!" She said letting out a sigh.

He got up and sat on the bed holding her hands.

"Viren, why does she have to come?"

"See Jeevika, there's a marriage in the house and her father is close to ours. And its just the matter of a few weeks! And she's not that bad!"

Jeevika gave him a death glare and acted like clearing her throat.

"Ahm Ahm! You're my boyfriend or hers?"

"Yours!"

"Then support me! You get it!"

"Ohkay! I will! But ya, I have a condition!"

"what?"

He spread his arms indicating her to hug him.

"Aww!" She said and hugged him tighter.

"And…" He said pointing his lips.

"What?"

"I didn't get my good night and good morning kissie!"

"Nope! You're not getting it! Wait for night!"

"No!! I want it now!"

"Nope!"

"As if I'm going to listen to you!" He said coming closer to her. They were just inches apart from a kiss, when Viren's phone rang. It was non other than Nira. They parted and he whispered a sorry as he picked up the phone. Jeevika was hell angry now! She would have killed her through the phone that very moment.

"She's at the Delhi airport, she'll be here by 4 now!"

"And that's the reason she disturbed us? Ughh!"

"Why? You wanted kiss me?"

"Of course yes!"

"ooo! Then do it now!"

"Nope! I'm not in mood now! Ha ha ha!" She turned and was about to leave when he pulled her by waist and back hugged her.

"I'll make your mood then!" He said as he nuzzled her neck. He kept on giving wet kisses there as she moaned in pleasure. She turned and caressed his hair looking into his eyes, which were full of love, true love and desire for her. She pulled him in for a kiss. She moved her hands through his hair messing them up as he his hands roamed her back, unzipping her dress. She kept pulling him and hugging him tighter. They and kissed till they were both breathless. Viren moved away the hair from her shoulder and went on dropping soft kisses there while Jeevika kept digging her nails in him. She was completely lost in him. Her hands wildly went on unbuttoning his shirt. He picked her up in his arms and placed her on the bed, caressing her face touching and feeling her lips. He went closer to her, staring at her lips and tucked the strand of hair coming on her face behind her ear, plating a wet kiss there. He moved to her jawline and then kissed her gently on lips. The gentle kiss kept getting wilder and deeper with each passing moment. He moved on to her nape, giving her love bites as her grip onto him tightened. She moaned a little but loved it. She loved to love him and to be loved by him. He pulled the blanket to cover them as they were half undressed by now. Jeevika tried to get up but he pulled her causing her to land on his bare chest. She moved her hand through his well built torso and adjusted her head on his shoulder.

"Viren, did you miss me when I wasn't there here?" She asked with her eyes glued on her fingers playing with his.

"I didn't miss you! I missed myself! You dwell in my heart Jeevika! You dwell in me!" He said glaring at her intensely.

"Oh boy! Not that intense look again please!"

"Why?"

"You make me fall in love in love with you all over with that look of yours!"

He just smiled at her remark and pulled her closer to him, holding her hand in his and kissing them. Their love session was disturbed by a knock on the door. Jeevika tried to unravel herself from his arms but Viren was reluctant to leave her. He was crazy, crazy for her. He didn't care of what would happen if they got caught. The only thing he now cared about was her, and of course, their romance.

"Viren! There's someone on the door. Let me go!" She said trying to shove him away. But it didn't work! He was still clung to her.

"Jeevika!" It was Manvi! Again!

"Coming Di!!!"

"Viren!" She said glowering at him. She seemed angry now. He thought it would be better to back off. Both of them got up from the bed as fast as they could.

.Jeevika set up her tousled head so that it no longer looked messed. She also adjusted her dress and sent Viren to the washroom.

"Yeah di! Say!" She said peeping out of the door she had opened a little so that the mess could not be seen.

"Its nothing! Just wanted to know if Viren was here with you!" Manvi said grinning at her.

"Di!!!!" Jeevika said, heated.

"Ohk! Ohk! Bye! Enjoy! But remember, you both need to go and pick up Nira from the airport in an hour."

"I know! I know that we need to go and pick up that b****"

"Bye now! Enjoy!" She said still smirking evilly.

To be continued…


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Edited by KtYammie13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res ❤️
Unres 😃

hurrayyy first of all victory dance m at No 1 yayyy

yammiee cutiee 🤗

awww the update was amazing dear and sooo romantic 😳

OMG jeevika doesn't like Nira m sure she'll create problems b/w virika !!

i loved how viren calm down jeevika's anger 😳
he knows her soo well !!! 😊

and then the romance b/w Virika ☺️ myy gosh m dead 🤢 it was awesome 😉

m soo looking forward to next part 😃
u r an amazing writer my cutie 👍🏼

thanku for the pm 😊
Edited by -Latty- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES!!
UNRES!! 😊
SUPERB UPDATE!! 😃
Start To End AWESOME!!
I So Wanna Read The Next Update!! 😆 What's Gonna Happen When Nira's Here! 😆 And When Jeevs Will Know That Viren & Nira Are Best Friends!! 🤢 😆

And Viren & Jeevs Can Never Get Enough Of Each Other!! 😆 😳
HAHA!! The Way Maanvi Teased Jeevs!! 😳 😆 😉

SUPERB!! 😆 😊
Edited by RiddhiTacker - 12 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!!!
ANOTHER PIECE OF AMAZING WRITING FRM YOU 😊
I LUV IT...ITS REALLY GUD...!!!!!! ⭐️
U R AN AMAZING WRITER..!!! 👏
DIS IS ONE OF DA BEST I'VE READ 😉...ESP DIS UPDATE 😳
THNX 4 DA PM😃
ND DO UPDATE SOON🥱
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GF JIII 😳
This is superb!
I need to rush but leaving a small comment!
THE BEST UPDATE EVER 👏
Continue Soon before I haunt u in ur dreams!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...
Poor viren how can he handle jeevika and nira...wanna see that...
Plz update soon...

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