#3:Arhi FF-Making You Mine,ch 10-13, #4 link pg 1

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

that was the perfect update for such a looong wait..I was missing Khushi n here it is full of her...

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Swati

@Swati_

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Gosh you updated after such a long time...
Awww...poor Khushi...
Urrgghhh...Why did you do this to her Arnav...
Poor gal...you have depicted her emotions perfectly...
Wow...Arnav is here...
I hope Khushi doesnt forgive him easily...
Waiting for the next update...
Please dont go away for such a long time...

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Interesting and funny story. Please pm me when you update. I would love to be a reader of this story.

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

was waiting for khusi's pov... you have explained her feelings very well.

The way you said she was back to square one... the same way Arnav is also back to square one

Now Arnav is here ... cannot wait for them to have a chat face to face

please try and update sooner, if possible😊

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

After such time you updated... Welcome back!!!

Amazing update!!!

My heart was bleeding for Khushi, for the pain she is feeling...😭

She is suffering so much and she has no one to confide to, all her emotions are being bottled up..

So finally Arnav has realized that he can't stay away from her? What excuse will he have? How is she going to react?

Too many question...well expressed with the emotion!

Thanks for the pm...

Update soon please...

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

amazing update...

poor khushi... 😭

and arnav has come to take khushi back?! 😕

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Vaibhavi Mane

@cookie-lover

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Haye finally your SOON update came...

First of all thank you for the pm...

I loved the update... especially Khushi's emotions were awesome.. her point of view of all events...

I loved the sentence.. "smile is way better than explaining why you are sad"
so true and so appt for the situation...

Now waiting to see what Mr. Charming Raizada is doing here...

Update soonish... :)