ARHI FF: Strings of Illusion:T5|LINK 2 T6 - PG 1**

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

im wishing like arnav, wish he could punch that creep shyam!

poor shashi! i really think the detective was going overboard with this investigation and all!

loved the way arnav and khushi are slowly making small progress in their new found relationship

very nice written update

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Arati!! read 25 and 26 in one go!!

Too good! awesome going! but .. this Arun Mehra's case is getting on my nerves now!

too many angles being covered here ... difficult to make if its delusive or not!

will wait for the story to unfurl itself!! :)

Thanks for sharing it darling! :)

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oopppsss

@oopppsss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

awww...the last part of the update I simply loved...Arnav does not want her to leave.The story is moving rather quickly...will there be romance in south of France as well??pls update soon

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

great update

why I have this constant feeling that there is more to Shashi's character than what meets the eye

once I even thought that he killed shashi

Is the mystery man with monica someone from the family??

love the way arhi are progressing

may be the right time wil be in paris!!

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Edited my comments on page 49 😊

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Nice update...

Loved how Arnav understands khushi sooo much n how khushi finds peace n solace while being with Arnav

Their bond has definitely grown strong beyond words...

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Its wonderful that they hav so much understanding btwn them...Arshi ki gaafi Kaise shuru hyi thi,ab kya hain...wow,,this is marvelous..

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A_BA

@A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Great chapter😊

You have me excited about their impending trip to Paris, and maybe even south of France (Will they be in Nice?)...I know you have promised a lot of passion in this story, this would be a great place to start it off!

Loved their little chat at the penthouse, shows how much they both want each other...but if they want a long term thing, they are wise that they aren't rushing things.

Akash is setting himself up for failure, because when Payal finds out about his little tricks, she will be mad, and this Payal isn't taking crap from anybody!

What is the reason for the inspector questioning Shashi...wonder who sent him there? As it was, Shashi was in a different city, working for a different company. Interrogating him doesn't seem to make much sense.

Shyam is a creeper, as usual...wonder what his motive is...maybe he's trying to extract revenge from Khushi because of the auction incident?

Lovely story, waiting to find out what happens next!

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

thiss is simplyyy superrrb :D <3

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Poor Khushi and the Guptas...how many people are out for their blood? Her father betrayed her, short of killing her, her stupid stepmother is hatching a plot to kill her...???

And the detective...how dumb is he following up on Monica's little sob story?