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Posted: 11 years ago
Ye start kaha pe hua...nd fir khatam kb hua...mene kuch miss to nai kia na...not fair dii...
Anyways swaron part or i shud say sharon's part was fantastic today...
The way she was fighting...maza aya...jo bi buddhe ne wo last line sahi boli..
Kriyaansh part kafi km tha...bt jo bi tha..i loved it...specially rey ki realization...beautiful...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Deetha itna chato kyu...

Pitegii tu
But I loved it...
ha ha the way he felt how girl feels moving to new house mastt thaa
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He was watching her from a long time resting his palm under his head, Still she wrapped in his one arm and her face hid almost in his chest. He felt ticklish when she used to adjust herself and her nose used to brush his skin. She looked so beautiful. He smiled when he felt her hands sliding off him. She sat up stretching still eyes closed. His eyes had the free treat roaming over her curves. And all thanks to his loose tee, which made her look extremely inviting. He want to kiss her badly!! He was about to grab her hand when she gasped loudly and jumped off the bed cursing herself.



"Universe Ji !! Mai late hogayi! " and before he could recover and call her she ran into the washroom. He sighed.



Ab aur nahi!! aap na meri jaan ke dushman ho !!



He looked at her Universe Ji and spoke, and went back to get his sleep. He had been gaping at her from nearly 2-3 hours. He yawned and slept pouting cutely!! She came out as he drifted into deep sleep. She thought of waking him up but thought to do it a bit later. He is working so hard now a days. Continuous rehearsals is draining him out . She immediately got ready and walked to him. Its 8 already. Breakfast time. So she bent down and called him slightly shaking him. He shrugged and slept still that sad pout on his face. She found him extremely cute. She stood up and fidgeted with her fingers. Taking deep breaths she slowly bent down and pecked his lips softly and left in a jiffy.



And the poor soul slept there deep in his sleep , rubbing his lips together once along with wetting them as he felt something on them.😆



****





They were having a breakfast shouting for swayam to join fast when swayam came buttoning his full sleeves.



"Bhabhi!! aap abhi tak aise hi ho??? " swayam narrowed his eyes.

" bas do min , tum breakfast karlo " kriya worked fast serving all. Rey frowned and gave a confused look.

"Bhabhi!! abhi jao !! "swayam said sternly. Kriya sighed and ran upstairs.



"arey kya hua?? " Rey asked taking a bite of his sandwich.

"kuch nahi! mai bhabhi ko date pe leke jaa raha hun " swayam said grabbing a sandwich , with a straight face , controlling his laugh.

Rey coughed hard soon after swayam spoke those words. Once he is normal he looked at swayam shocked and asked.

"kyun?? "Shocked

dammit maine khud apni wife ko date pe nahi leke gaya !!



"ye achi baat hai.. apni bestie ko lunch pe leke jaate aur mei leke jaun toh kyun? " swayam mocked.



Rey was about to answer when he heard a hyper

"I am ready!! " Kriya came down running adjusting her hair. She looked cute in that plain grey saree.

Swayam grabbed another sandwich for her and before Rey could understand the situation they are out.

Rey looked at his parents pouting sadly and shocked. All they did was giggle and leave the table. Rey pouted more and looked at the door . He thought of spending this sunday with her. But no she had other plans. He made a angry pout and left to their room.

*********

"Bhabhi!! "swayam , poor baby whined.

"bas do min aur swayam " she said never looking back. Swayam was helpless. from last 3 hours they were roaming from mall to the other and she took nothing.

" Bhabhi please!! mai thak gaya hun!! aaplog thakte nahi ho?? " he walked back of her as she walked one place to other.

"nahi !! kyun ki hum dil laga ke choose karte hai, tum log interest nahi lete ho " she said searching for the perfect dress.

" isme kya interest lena hai?? "he made a face.

" bola na.. " she looked at him once and moved front.

" Perfect " she stopped at a shirt. She took it and looked at swayam.

"khatam . ab chalte hai. Khush?? " she beamed.

"ufff... bohut!! " he grinned back.



****



He frowned and looked at her. But still she is silent. She is never one to sit all silent. Especially when she is with him. He frowned. She was sitting silent looking out as the cool wind hit her face. They had a delicious lunch and now on way to their next destination. He was about to break the silence when she started humming lost in her thoughts.



"haaye mera dil .. chura ke le gaya , churane wala... mera kaatil. " she sang all lost and paused. Swayam smiled and looked at her for a second before turning front.

" haaye mera dil.." he paused and saw her come out of her trance. She realized and blushed .

" chura ke legayi " swayam looked at her and winked.

" churane wali... meri kaatil " he pointed at her and acted as she killed him . Kriya laughed hard.

"kitna pyaara hai ye pyaar , pyaara pyaara " she continued looking out and blushing.



"hua hai pehli, hota hai ek baar, fir na hoga !! ye dobara "swayam completed her line and both laughed hard looking at each other .



" kaash meri jagah bhai hote.. aur bhi sahi hota "kriya laughed hard for this.

"waise , dil , churana and all.. chakkar kya hai?? "swayam teased looking ahead.



"kya chakkar ?? kuch bhi toh nahi " she blushed looking away.

" ahan?? maanliya maine "he chuckled. She sighed. She was caught long back.

" tumhe pata hai toh fir kyun pooch rahe ho? " she admitted indirectly.

"arey mai aapki mooh se sunna chahta hun " he grinned at her.

"theek hai!! yahi sunna chahte hona .. toh haa .. mai Rey se pyaar karti hun " she said her cheeks totally turning to red.

"wohooo !! bhai bhi karte hai?? " he asked excited and she nodded a shy yes.

"matlab !! CONFESS KARLIYA?? "he shouted all shocked.

" nahi!! confess nahi kiya!! I know .. ek hafta bhi theek se khatam nahi hua aur mai bol rahi hun ki mai unse pyaar karti hun, par " she was cut



"woah!! pull the breaks hard !! Pyaar hone keliye mahine thodi lagti hai.. wo toh ek pal mei hojata hai.. its nothing weird about it. Infact you are late in that sense. "he chuckled.

" waise batayiye.. bhai ne kaise propose kiya?? " he teased and she made a annoyed face.

"maine kab kaha unhone confess kiya?? unhe toh abhi tak nahi pata ki wo mujhse pyaar karte hai !! " she made a face.

"kya?? par bhabhi aapne abhi toh kaha"



" mai jaanti hun wo karte hai!! par unhe lagta hai ye husband aur wife mei commom feeling hai.. ab mai unhe kaise samjhaun yahi pyaar hota hai "she pouted.Swayam laughed hard.

"bhai bhi na!! par isme itna kya problem?? aap jaake boldo. wo realize karlenge " he smiled.

" KYA?? mai .. unhe confess karun?? nahi baba.. mujhe dar lagta hai !! " she said quickly.

"dar kyun?? " swayam giggled.

"arey!! unke saamne aate hi nervous hojati hun aur ye bolun?? nahi nahi " she said thinking about it and got hyper even thinking about it.



"aap ladkiya itna nervous kyun hojate ho?? "

"tum nahi samjhoge " she said sighing.

" kyun?? " he frowned.

"kyun ki tum ek ladke ho ladki nahi " she said .



" toh kya hua?? " he made a face.

" ye baat sirf ek ladki samajh sakti hai !! " she said with a irritated look.

" toh ab mujhe ye samjhne keliye ladki banna padega?? " he laughed. But stopped on seeing her "not funny "look.



"okay!! toh kya karoge aap? "



"wait !! aur kya karun? " she pouted sadly and looked out.

"Hey!! Kriya!! chill.. bhai jaldi hi realize karenge!! " he placed a hand on her shoulder. She smiled.

"tum mujhe Kriya hi bulaya karo!! acha lagta hai !! "she smiled.



"nahi nahi!! mujhe toh meri bestie se jyaada meri bhabhi pasand hai! mai toh bhabhi hi bulaunga " She laughed at his cuteness.

"acha dewar ji !! ab jaldi chale?? ghar mei aapke bhai jalke raakh hochuke honge!! kaam khatam kare jaldi? " she asked and both laughed hard thinking about Rey.



******

He peeped from the paper once again and pouted. Its 8 already in the night and still they are not back. He stood up and walked to grab some water when he saw her entering yawning and stretching. For sure she is tired. And back of her came swayam giving a self massage to his neck and shoulders. For sure he had a long drive today. She smiled at Rey and ran up , to quickly change and freshen up.

" Tu theek hai?? " Rey asked seeing swayam. Swayam smiled. He knew till now rey cursed both, for leaving him alone. But Rey can never change.

" haa bhai theek hun!! bas jyaada drive kiya na aaj.. back pain hai thoda. " he smiled.

" toh mai kuch lagaun? "

"nahi nahi! hot shower lunga toh free hojaunga. " he said and Rey smiled.



"jaldi nahake aaja.. khana khalete hai " swayam nodded and left.

...



" aap? " she breathed hard with the sudden closeness. She just came out of the washroom and he blocked her pinning her to the wall.

" mujhe akele chod ke chaligayi? " he glared at her.

"wo "

"wo kya?? " he stepped closer increasing the heat around them. She gulped down slowly and breathed hard but words failed to come out of her throat.

" bolo " he whispered and without waiting for her response he dug his face in the crook of her neck caressing it with his nose and lips. All she could do was clutch his shirt and close her eyes tight as he drilled himself into her pecking her shoulder.

She tried to speak but he gave a deaf ear to her. She shivered at the intensity of his passion. Rey stopped for a minute to look at her and she immediately ran out of his grip . She thought, not atleast today. She has so much work to do and in no way she should loose her senses. Everything is planned and anything gone wrong she will die of embarrassment . Rey got annoyed with this act of her. Here he missed her the whole day and she is not even ready to spend some quality time with him. He was quite annoyed with her this act.



Agar tumhe mere saath time nahi spend karna toh mai kyun paagalon ki tarah tumhare peeche ghumun?



He just walked down irritated. The whole dinner he didn't speak or look at her. She felt bad but what can she do? Isn't everything planned. She sighed. She have to face it.

" aur kuch chahiye aapko?? " she asked hoping he would look at her.

"nahi!!! " he said bluntly not looking at her and dashed to their room.He waited for her. He is expecting her to come and apologize , but there is no sign of her's . He walked out and peeped down and saw her working , and she is so busy working in that damn kitchen forgetting totally about him. He got more annoyed. He simply walked to the bed and slept. Let her come. He won't even glance at her. And soon waiting for her his heavy eye lids closed and he drifted to sleep.



It was 11:45 when she finished her work . She beamed at Priya who patted her hair. Swayam and she hi-5 ed and she ran excitedly to her room. As she opened and searched for him she saw him asleep already. She felt bad, but cheered up herself . She quickly washed her hands and face and stood beside the bed rubbing her hands nervous a bit. She looked at the clock. It is 11:55 and she took a deep breathe and before she could move she heard his mobile ringing. She frowned and grabbed his mobile. Her blood boiled and she gritted her teeth soon after seeing the name flashing on it. She walked into the balcony and lifted the call .



"Happy birthday Rey!! " she chirped excitedly.

" Reyaansh!! " Kriya said sternly.

"tum?? tumne kyun uthaya?? " shilpa flared up.

" FYI !! Rey mere husband hai.. and ye question mujhe poochna chahiye.. tumne call kyun kiya? " she said with attitude.

" tum phone Rey ko do.. mujhe usse wish karna hai " she said boiling Kriya's blood.

"Pehli baat , mai tumhe dus baar nahi bolungi , its Reyaansh for you and tum abhi Rey se baat nahi sakti ho .. "

"what?? par mujhe usse wish karna hai "

"kal subah 8 baje ko wo breakfast karenge .. free honge .. tab call karna "

she was about to end when she heard shilpa yelling



"what the hell.. " kriya interupted..



" don't you dare raise your voice at me!! "

" kya karogi?? "

" dekho , ache se samjharahi hun iska matlab ye nahi ki I will take every crap yours. Ek baat yaad rakhna.. mujhse panga lene ki koshish bhi mat karna... mujhe theek se jaanti nahi ho " Kriya warned her and ended the call. She took a deep breathe and thought she shouldn't spoil her mood now. So she quickly went to him and sat on the bed.

"Rey " she shook him slightly . He opened his eyes and looked at her, and turned to the other side and slept . Suddenly he felt her palm cup his cheek and she turned his face towards her. He frowned and looked away but was astonished when she gave him a long kiss on his cheeks pressing her lips totally on his cheek.

"Happy birthday Rey!! " she whispered and he immediately looked at her. She looked at him and smiled. His hand involuntarily caught hers resting on his cheek and he kissed her palm as she blushed looking down.

He felt so special hearing wishes from her. He felt a totally new feeling . it felt so good. But then he got the fragrance and frowned at her.

"tum kuch banarahi thi?? " he asked surprised.

She nooded cutely and said "aapko fruit cake pasand haina .. isiliye, wo bana rahi thi " .



" itni der wahi kar rahi ho?? " he asked getting why is so busy.

Shit !! She was doing this for me !!



She nodded her head sadly !! His heart suddenly felt guilty for misunderstanding her. He pulled her onto him in a swift motion and her face banged into his chest. She was about to get up when he wrapped his arm around her waist and pulled her up closer to him.

"Rey wo " she was about to say something when his lips touched her forehead. She rested her hands on his chest and closed her eyes. He rubbed his cheek with hers and planted a sweet kiss over there making her blush more.



"Time up bhabhi!!! hum aarahe hai !! " they heard swayam shout and she jumped out of the bed adjusting herself. Rey was left baffled. Its like she wanted to wish him first and they had given a whole of 15 mins for her to wish , but she wasted half of it in scolding shilpa.



"Happy birthday bhai!! " swayam entered and back of him all his family members even sharon came.



Rey was confused. He didn't understand what is going on !! First he was angry on her and was sleeping , she suddenly woke him up and when he is still so much into sleep she wished him making him feel special and he drowned in her, and suddenly she jumped back and he is all alone, which for a second don't know why pricked him and now he see his family around him smiling , his head is too heavy to realize the quick happenings around him. He once again looked around to see what is actually happening. And saw swayam grinning and wishing him !! Ahhh wishing him!! He was supposed to thank. He shook his head once and spoke,



" thanks chote!! " He said finally understanding the situation. His parents wished him and left . Swayam was about to hug him when sharon popped up in between and sat in his lap. Kriya's mouth went wide immediately.



" arey.. mujhe bhai ko hug karna hai " swayam pouted. From the time sharon entered their life and became Rey's bestie, she came in between everything to grab that special first position he had.



"nahi!! last year tune first hug ki.. aur yaad hai tune kya bola?? try hard next time !! Lo karli maine " she laughed .



" Happy birthday bestie "she hugged him . Kriya smiled but still, just now she shouted on shilpa, so she felt a bit bad. To see sharon that close to rey.



" sharon kuch jal raha hai.. uth jao " swayam teased and kriya looked away embarrassed of getting caught.

"ooohhh!! jealousy!! " sharon teased and wantedly hugged rey tight making him laugh hard and Kriya pout.



"ab tum hatogi please?? " Swayam made a face.



"alley baby ko bura laga?? " Sharon totally lost in his cute face pulled his cheeks and kissed on his cheek. The trio are left shocked when sharon froze.

Ohhh !! DAMN!! maine ye kya kar diya!!



*ahem * ahem* kriya coughed hard. Sharon turned all red and Rey raised his eyebrows at swayam. He inturn nodded a "I don't know please don't tease me " look.



" Rey!! mujhe lagta hai , ab hume , humari hi room chodke jaana padega, kisiko privacy jo dena hai " Kriya said teasing when Sharon turned away blushing hard.

Swayam closed his eyes and covered his face with hands listening to it. They are not gonna let them live happily. Swaron are too much into themselves and embarrassed to even look at them. Rey took this as chance and walked to her back and wrapped his hands around her waist and pulled her into him . She tried her best to control the moan escaping . He snuggled more into her and kissed her in the crook of her neck making her shudder.

"Thanks " he whispered in his husky voice sending shivers down her spine. She looked at him confused.

"Sabse pehle wish karne keliye aur mujhe special feel karwane keliye " he spoke in her ear making her hold her breathe for a second.



" tum donon aise hi sharmate rahoge?? " He suddenly spoke hugging her tight and his chin placed on her shoulder. She got tensed and looked at him. Tried to come out of his grip but failed. Swaron looked at them still feeling embarrassed. And seeing kriyaansh Sharon spoke .



" mujhe tease kar rahe the.. ye kya public mei romance kar rahe ho? " she just don't want to become the victim here.

" ye toh meri wife hai!! mai ise kahi pe bhi hug kar sakta hun " rey smirked and sharon pouted.

" arey chill baba!! chalo aur tease nahi karunga " Rey walked towards her. He was about to hug her and Sharon went on her toes to hug him happily when swayam came in between and hugged him.

"Tit for tat " he stuck his tongue out irritating her. Rey couldn't help but laugh at these two who behave like kids at times.



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He opened the door and froze. He was asked to wait outside till she gets ready. And he decided , in the meanwhile he would complete his work due for that day. As he entered he was shocked at the sight in front of him. There she stood in a black tassel off shoulder one piece . He was used to her sarees, salwar's and even pyjamas and shorts. But she never looked this hot and sexy like now. He was surprised, how can one girl fit into so many styles?? He couldn't stop but walk towards her. He frowned as he walked to her. Her hair was tied into a loose side pony tail . But he found something weird. As he walked closer he saw her reflection in the mirror. Seeing him she blushed and also grinned looking down a bit and still searching for the ear-rings she is gonna wear.

" Kriya!! you can remove these " he said looking at her reflection. She frowned and looked at him confused. What is he talking about?? She realized when he pointed out.
" Par mai nahi chahti hun "she gave a small smile and again started searching.

"par!! I mean iss dress pe mangalsutr aur bangles?? odd nahi hai?? I mean koi baat nahi , mom kuch nahi bolegi" He frowned as he heard her chuckle.

" Rey wo toh mujhe bhi pata hai!! Infact mom ne hi mujhe ye dress gift kiya aaj ki party keliye, but mera mann nahi hai nikalne ka.!! I prefer being myself. Agar kisiko odd lagega toh wo mujhe dekhna band kardenge " she stuck her tongue out and picked up silver long ear -rings to give the final touch. Her small things pleased him to no extent and made him feel so special. He hugged her and kissed her cheek when she clutched his hands on her waist.

" I feel so special when you are around. "he felt the need to say his feelings.
She turned towards him grinning. Wrapping her hands around his neck she spoke " wo iss liye kyun ki aap special ho " she smiled and kissed his cheek.


"Happy birthday once again rey!! " she hugged him resting her face near his heart. He wrapped his arms around her with all love and held her close looking with a wide grin at the reflection they made.

"PERFECT!! " he mouthed and hugged her tight.

*************

Its his third cup of coffee!! She rolled her eyes and walked into his cabin. He was so engrossed in his thoughts that he was startled and threw the cup back when she banged the file on the table.

"WHAT THE HELL!! "he looked at her and sighed.

"Sharon!! Aise koi darata hai?? " he asked annoyed.


" ohh Mr. Bhatakti aatma ko maine dara diya!! ?? kya baat hai?? "she mocked.

"What?? bhatakti aatma?? "he made a face.

" haa ... tab se bula rahi hun but dekho teri atma kabhi yaha kabhi waha bhatakti hai "she pointed at the sides he was staring into . He looked at her as if she has gone retarded.

Kya mai aaj ise confess karunga??

he thought and chuckled at his own thoughts.

"Swayam tum paagal hogaye ho!! Tab se dekh rahi hun coffee pe coffee peete jaa rahe ho, kabhi haste ho akele mei toh kabhi apni nails khate ho!! tumhe ho kya gaya hai? " she asked irritated.

"tumhe yaad bhi hai aaj hume gaana launch karna hai aur humne dhang se practise bhi nahi ki?? mai already itni tensed hun aur tum ho ke apne khayalon mei khoye hue ho. " she said nervous.

" Sharon why are you tensed?? "he held her by shoulders and made her look into his eyes. He can say she is hell nervous.

" aur nahi toh kya?? tum bohut baar gaa chuke ho swayam. I am tensed, ye mera debut hai singing mei!! And wo bhi recorded nahi live release kar rahe hai pehle. I am so tensed swayam. What if I spoil everything?? Tum bohut acha gaate ho swayam, I don't wanna spoil your image. Mujhe bohut darr lag raha hai, agar meri aawaz acha nahi laga toh?? " she looked away tensed/

"sharon!! meri taraf dekho " he said and cupped her face as she looked at him. He slowly bent forward and pressed his lips over hers. She closed her eyes taking in the moment. He didn't kiss her, neither she did. After few minutes he parted and looked at her who is in turn looking at him totally blank.

" I am there with you always sharon!! Tumhe itna tensed hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. Pehli baat.. you are amazing sharon. Secondly, jab hum saath hote hai toh kuch galat nahi ho sakta!! Trust me Sharon!! Nothing goes wrong when we are together, ...for each other." He said looking deep into her eyes. His words soothed her, gave strength to her heart. And a blush crept on her cheeks. He leaned in and kissed her forehead.

" Sharon just think that tum ye sirf bhai keliye kar rahi ho. We planned this as his birthday gift aur hum wo de rahe hai, and you know right?? bhai ko tumhara besura aawaz bhi bohut acha lagta hai ?? " he grinned a naughty grin. Sharon is till now blushing and smiling narrowed her eyes and looked at him.

"mera aawaz besura hai?? " she asked glaring at him.

" wo.. umm.. haa " he tactfully walked back and laughed at her.

"how dare you swayam!! " she took the file and threw at him. It fell directly on his face making him stop his laugh immediately!

" Sharon!! " he groaned.

"Swayam !! " she whined dramatically and ran out showing him a thumbs down!!

"Chodunga nahi tumhe aaj " he ran behind her. The whole office looked at them amused. Swayam grabbed her by waist from back and walked to his cabin as she struggled to get out beating his hands on her waist and moving her legs but laughing hard.
She fell silent as soon as he closed the door and pinned her to the wall beside crushing her back into his front.
"ab bolo!! " he teased her.

"swa.. swayam!! let me go " she controlled her emoticons and asked him.

"arey nahi nahi.. has rahi thi na haso tho!! " he said with a smirk. But it vanished when she pushed him a bit and in a swift moment she pinned his back to the wall and she was in front of him face to face. He was too shocked to react. She smirked this time and went on her toes giving a peck on his lips.
" don't you dare order me today!! Aaj tum wahi karoge jo mai bolungi !! " she said with attitude and he like a puppy nodded his head. She winked and left messing up his hair. He saw her retreating figure and once she left he spoke to himself.

"kya mai confess kar paunga?? Swayam aur koi nahi mili tujhe?? kahi ye sabke saamne meri haddi na thod de. You know how she is swayam, ache ache darte hai isse aur tu usse pyaar kar raha hai? beta teri shamat aagayi ! " he said pulling out the chain he had bought for her from his pocket.

Once she was in her cabin she took a file and covered her face. What was she doing?? She kissed him???

No no , it was just a peck.
She said to herself .

But you pecked him!! :O

Her heart again shouted and she couldn't help but blush hard.


CONTINUED IN THE NEXT POST





Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago
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Oo-Ree Piya Mujhe Yaad Teri Tadfaye
Tere Bina Ab Chain Kahin Na Aaye
Oo-Ree Piya Mujhe Yaad Teri Tadfaye
Tere Bina Ab Chain Kahin Na Aaye

She walked to her chair and sat on it thinking about what just happened. She is feeling so different . Is it love?? this is the only thing roaming in her mind.


He walked to the window and looked out as the wind soothed him and he looked out aimlessly. All he could remember was the first touch of her lips on his. It felt so heavenly!!

" I love you so much sharon!! " he said into air smiling.


Mannte Muraade Maangi
Rabb Se Dua'n Maangi
Aise Mile Yeh Do Yahan
Tere Naina Haan - Tere Naina
Tere Naina Haan - Tere Naina

He looked at her constantly. She looked away blushing. But again turned to him and signalled him to look away as all were seeing them. But he ignored her those efforts and grabbing the mike from the holder he walked to her and kept singing and she too joined him .

She asked him to stop with her eyes as he nudged her. From the time they are here and Sharon and Swayam started singing the song, he started behaving differently. His hands are refusing to stay off her. She glared at him and pushed his hands silently making him understand that they are in middle of all and being the birthday boy the whole attention will be on him which in return implies attention on both. But now he is nudging her continuously pleading her to let him hold her by waist.

Behta Hue Rango'n Ko
Khwabon Kee Chudyio'n Mein
Tunne Hay Fhir Se Bhar Diya
Soyi Hui Pallkon Pe
Honton Se Deke Dastakk
Appna Mujhe Hay Kar Liya
Pyaar Ke Makaan Mein
Yaad Kee Dukaan Mein
Bassne Tu Lagga
Hoo Gili Gili Aouns Ki
Mithi Mithi Boondoon Se
Rasne Tu Lagga

Mannte Muraade Maangi
Rabb Se Dua'n Maangi
Aise Mile Yeh Do Yahan
Tere Naina Haan - Tere Naina
Tere Naina Haan - Tere Naina

Her eyes went wide as he held her hand stopping her from going away. She just wanted to go and check the food section but he held her hands. She looked around and realized they have already grabbed all the attention. Swaron looked at each other and smiled seeing this. They wanted to make them feel the love around them and they felt they have almost succeeded . Kriya pleaded him to leave her hand with her eyes but he was determined and in a blink of eye he pulled her banging her into his frame making her gasp and all hooted. She was about to move back when he held her close with his one hand wrapping her waist and the other on her back. She blushed knowing there is no way out and shyly wrapped her hands around his neck and he started swaying slowly taking in her fragrance. Her bangles made sound and he love it right now.


She stiffened singing as she felt his hands on her waist. He is now by her side and holding her by waist !! She looked at him shocked and all in return she got was a smile. He slowly walked to her back and sang hugging her from behind and showing her the view in front of them. The musicians smiled seeing them. Sharon looked up to see many couples swaying to the beat feeling the love around them.


Dil Se Nikaah Dhadkan Ka
Saansoo Se Padh Liya Ha
Mehram Hamme Hay Kar Diya
Tode Na Toote Kabhi
Lamhon Ke Dhoriyon Se
Jo Naata Tumse Judh Geya

Beegi Beegi Raaton Ke
Kosse Kosse Pal Main
Dhadke Kiyu Jiya
Aa Kirano Ke Jaal Mein
Panioo'n Ke Shaal Mein
Hilne Tu Lagga

Mannte Muraade Maangi
Rabb Se Dua'n Maangi
Aise Mile Yeh Do Yahan
Tere Naina Haan - Tere Naina
Tere Naina Haan - Tere Naina

He caught her hand and took it and played with her bangles. She smiled at him and he looked at her with all love. That holy chain in her neck took his attention! It was swaying with all the freedom in the world. He grabbed it slowly and examined it. This is the only thing which actually tied him with her. He had seen her being so emotionally connected to this. This simple chain of black beads and a small golden locked meant a lot for her. In the morning she said with that in her neck she feels his presence around her every second. He never believed in marriage and its bonding. When his parents said it will become the most sacred and important relation to one he never believed. How can one forget all other relations and give importance to that one relation which forms last?? He can't ignore his 26 yrs of relations and give importance to that. But he now understood. This relation is different. Its about you better half. Its about that person who makes you feel completed or literally completes you. He smiled and hugged her as she peacefully hid in his arms.


He turned her to him. They are singing. He caressed her cheek and she sang all lost in him. He was mesmerized by her. She sang brilliantly!! She is so beautiful and talented and all he can think of is how it would be to own this beautiful soul.


As the song ended all applauded loud for them!! She grinned looking at them . But all he did was stare at her. Everyone fell silent seeing no reaction from him. Sharon frowned and looked at him!!


"swayam kya hua??? "she whispered looking in front and smiled at the audience. She heard everyone gasp and saw Kriya's jaw touching the ground. She followed her gaze turning to her side. And she went numb. There he was on his knees in front of the whole crowd. She thanked God , no no Kriya for banning the Media in this party.


" Swayam ye tum " her voice betrayed her when she heard him


" I have always loved you sharon. The day I saw you I liked your attitude. Later I fell for you Sharon!! Badly! You know right I suck at giving speeches?? Dammit galti teri hi hai, kyun ki hamesha meri har speech tum hi likhti ho, dekho mere confession pe bhaari padgaya " he made a face and she was shocked and narrowed her eyes.

" Dekho I can't say poems or anything out the world. All I can say is I love you and will take care of you till my last breathe. Will you be my girlfriend?? " he asked .


"awww!! " kriya clasped her hands and looked dreamily at them. Rey was amused to see her like this!! She looked too cute !!!He smiled and pulled her close by waist. She held his arm and awwed placing her head on his shoulder.

Sharon looked around. Everyone was waiting for her reply. But she panicked. What if she couldn't handle the relation wisely??

"swayam!! wo.. mai.. " she looked at him. The poor soul is dreaded to death. She remembered his words in the morning. Didn't he say everything will be alright until they are together and for each other?? He asked her to trust him with utmost honesty and she would do that. And without a second delay she said a clear bold yes. The crowd hooted and Kriya acted as if she has stepped onto spring. Rey had a hard time holding her. For God's sake she is in some freaking 5 inch heel.

"Come again!! " swayam stood up immediately and asked her curiously!! She blushed and said a yes this time slowly and only audible to him. His happiness has no bounds. He hugged her immediately expressing how happy he is. Sharon first hesitated but soon joined his hug.

Everyone had their dinner. All were happily chatting and deserts were supplied . Kriya excused herself and left to check if anything is required when a waited came to her offering a drink. She smiled at him and took the drink and walked to the caterers.

Rey looked at his watch again. Its been nearly 15 -20 mins but she is not yet back. He frowned and wished she is here soon. He just want her beside him today, every second. He sighed and joined Swaron's convo when suddenly the song was stopped. He heard some slurred tone in the mike.

"Happy birthday to you!! Happy birthday... ohh " she handled herself from falling down and looked at him back . " tooo youuu!! " she sang loudly into the mike.
Rey frowned looking at her. She didn't look well. Something is wrong. A screeching sound made everyone close their ears. Rey looked at her who dropped the mike and was now walking unsteadily to the DJ . She ordered him something and he simply followed what she said.

" Ohh mere bhole naath!! This is for you !! " she shouted into the mike and all laughed and Rey got embarrassed.

[PS: Song-Lat Lag Gayi!! I am not describing.. I will be dead If I do it now !!]

As the beats started he was shocked to see her. She started dancing in her heels and her steps made him burn with jealousy. Every single gaze was on her.
" Haawww !! "Even swayam had his jaw dropped. Swayam caught Rey's eye and teased him raising his eyebrow. Rey was feeling so conscious. He loved it. She is dancing fab , and more over for him . But all he could think of right now is the number of eyes on her. He walked to her and was about to grab her wrist when she placed her palm on his chest and stopped him . Her one look straight into his eye , he knew he lost the battle. His body refused to oppose her. She pushed him back slowly moving front slowly with all the ease and ability God has given her to seduce. Her other hand on her side above her waist drew his total attention. God those fingers. He was so lost in checking her out that he didn't notice when she stopped. He was stunned when he found her finger making circles on his shirt and her fingers playing with his shirt buttons. His eyes went wide!! What is this girl trying to do actually?? She walked two steps back and moved gracefully turning him on . Her constant gaze on him is neither helping him. She walked to him and wrapped his arms around her waist and held him close circling her hands around his neck and moved her hips in the most sinful way!!

"Swayam I am taking her home " he quickly said to swayam who nodded and he swept her into his arms.

Through out the ride she kept on singing all stupid random songs, which made his thoughts more sinful and the constant touches of her's is not helping either. As he carried her to bed and made her lie she laughed hard for God knows what reason and spoke.

" aapko pata hai , mumma ne humesha bola hai ki har ladki ke life mei ek prince hoga , aur wo aake use lejayega " she said looking at him longingly.

He was about to move back when she clutched his collar and pulled him dangerously close.

"aur phir... aap aaye !! " she looked deep into his eyes. He felt a sudden rush of blood in his body. She stated him as her dream boy. Another moment where she made him feel special. He was surprised. This birthday is indeed very much unpredictable. He cupped her face and looked deep into her eyes. So much of trust, so much of love in them for him. He suddenly felt emotionally too weak. His insides shuddered with the amount of care and love he found for himself in her eyes. He leaned in to kiss her for life. He pressed his lips on hers caressing her cheek. He was waiting for her reaction so that he could proceed further but he frowned looking up. He glared at her Universeji. She passed out. The alcohol took its toll totally . He badly wanted to kiss her, but only when she is in her senses and she too enjoys the moment as much as he does. But God seemed against to his that "FIRST KISS "moment!! Sighing he made her lay and went to freshen up before going to sleep.





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"aaahhh!!! " she held her head and walked down. Sharon came to her help when she descended the stairs. Once she sat in the couch comfortably priya bought lemon juice for her.

"ye peelo beta , you will feel better ! " thats when Kriya remembered what all happened last night. She broke into tears.

"Arey ! Kya hua Kriya? " Priya caressed her hair tensed. Kriya hugged her by waist and cried loud.

"kya hua??? Meri Kriya aisi kyun ro rahi hai?? "ranvijay who just entered the house walked to them and sat beside her . She hugged him crying hard and chanted


"sorry papa!! Maine kal jo bhi kiya wo wantedly nahi kiya, I am so sorry!! Aapko meri wajah se kitna embarrass hona pada hoga I am really very sorry " she cried hard. She never wanted to let their fame at stake.

"Kriya!! meri baat suno!! Pehli baat!! Hum tumse bilkul naaraaz nahi hai , aur dusri, you make us proud beta, aisa kabhi mat sochna ki you will bring bad name for us. " he explained her. But she kept on crying. Finally after lots of effort Ranvijay , priya and sharon successfully calmed her down. Sharon bought a hot coffee and Kriya silently started sipping it.

She was lost but calm. Sharon is reading the newspaper munching on the cookies made by priya last day.

PS: Once again I say, DO NOT call my sharon bhukkad. She loves food. donon mei bohut farak hota hai !!

Rey and swayam walked in after jogging. They saw Kriya and thought of teasing her.

So they started singing "lat lag gayi .. mujhe toh teri lat lag gayi "
They thought she would take it lightly but least they knew how seriously she took this matter. Her tears didn't leave her eyes but in turn her eyes turned blood red. Anger filling every cell of her body.

" Bas karo guys tum log, abhi abhi bohut mushkil se chup karwaya aur tum log fir se rulana chahte ho!! " sharon hissed. Rey frowned at this. Is she crying?? and he ran to her and sat on the table in front of her, grabbing her hands he spoke tensed.
"Kriya kya hua ? tum ro kyun rahi?? hum toh bas mazak kar rahe the!! itna seriously mat lo isse !! " he spoked restless. She is quite and looking down. Dammit he can't even see her face. He pushed her hair back and cupped her face when he heard sharon saying that she is hurt and saying that she embarrassed his family in front of everyone.

"Kriya!! meri baat sun rahi ho?? Tumne kuch nahi kiya!! Aur hume kuch farak nahi padta " he stopped as he heard her furious voice. Never ever he heard her this voice.

"par mujhe farak padta hai !! " she gritted her teeth and looked up with her blood shot eyes!! Rey shivered seeing her in this state. She looked so furious. He was about to speak something when the servant walked in and spoke.

"Kriya beta, aapse milne koi aya hai !! Bol raha hai ki caterer hai aur aane paise dene keliye bulaya. " he said and left as Kriya nodded a yes and asked to send him in.

" Good morning mam!! " the poor caterer said to her with a smile.

" Not so good for you!! batayiye kiskeliye aaye hai ?? " she walked to him rage filling her every cell. The man feared a bit looking at her look.

"mam aapne hi kaha na aaj aake paise lene keliye " he said with a small smile.

"haa aur shayad maine ye bhi bola ki koi bhi gadbad ho , I won't give you even a penny!! " she gritted her teeth. The poor man feared, is he going to loose his money??

"par mam kuch gadbad toh nahi hui na "he said nervous!!

"Nahi hua??? Maine aapse strictly bola na , NO ALCOHOL? "she raised her voice

"par mam "

"Yes !! Or NO!! " She shouted making everyone flinch. None expected the matter would go this worse.

"yes!! "he looked down.

"then kaha se aaya kal?? and how dare you give it directly to me?? Guts haan?? "the poor fellow walked back seeing the woman heading towards him.

"mam!! I promise, maine khud sab check kiya, alcohol nahi tha " he kept his point , shivering though.

" matlab , mai jhoot bol rahi huh?? " she was cut..

" usne kuch nahi kiya kriya "sharon spoke in between. Kriya looked at her raising her eyebrow.

" Your drink is spiked and I know who it is. "Sharon gave a evil smirk. Seeing sahron Kriya smiled and payed the poor man a bit more for bearing her anger. He thanked , and apologized if at all it was by him and left.

ReYam got alerted at the evil look and smiles of the girls. These two together , and now in their evil best implies only one thing ... trouble.

" Sharon!! Come with me !! " Kriya said and sharon happily joined her upstairs and boys looked at each other.
"Bhai ye log soch kya rahe hai? " swayam asked tensed.

"pray karo that we won't end up as their prey!! " rey said looking upstairs.

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ReYam grabbed the keys and followed KriSha !! They frowned as they stopped in front of their dance academy.

Shilpa turned around as she heard someone snapping. She is doing stretching and the students too!!

" Bacho!! I know how it feels when someone who is with you for years leaves you. But hum usme thodi na kuch kar sakte hai?? " she said confusing all!!

" tum ye kya bakwas kar rahi ho subah subah!! " shilpa was too annoyed at her for not letting her wish Rey that day!!

"You!! Bloody middle class ladki!! Mind your tongue before you speak!! Tumhari aukaad nahi ki tum mujhse aise face to face baat karo!! and haa let me clear it to you!! You are quitting this academy right now!! And bechare bach tumhe miss toh bohut karenge na !! " she said .

"Not at all bhabhi " one of the girl commented and hid and all laughed. Kriya smirked at her. Rey was shocked .What is she doing??

" Who the hell are you to say that I am quitting?? " shilpa shouted back.

"don't force me to change my line from quitting to you are thrown out of the academy!!! Izzat se nikal jao!! " Kriya crossed her arms.

"par bina koi reason tum mujhe nahi nikal sakti!! " she countered back.

"Oh really??? Kal kisine mera drink spike kiya!! And I don't want such person's in the academy!! I don't want these kids to learn all those dirty tricks. " Kriya gritted her teeth.

" tum.. tum aise kaise bol sakti ho ki wo mai hi hun ? " she tried to defend.

"Oh come on Shilpa! Kriya keliye ye naya hosakta hai!! Bhool gayi?? Sharon naam ki ladki ke saath bhi tune wahi kiya ? just because wo rey ki bestfriend hai aur tujhe kuch aur laga??? Now don't force me to search your bag and show the proofs." Sharon smirked. Ahh how much she hated this girl.

" Par tumhare paas koi right nahi hai!! Mujhe nikalne ka.!! " she said with attitude.

"sorry shilpa!! " All turned around as Rey spoke.

"I can't believe you did this!! Mai tumhe hamesha ek friend ki tarah dekhta tha shilpa. I am totally dissapointed and sorry to say Kriya is right. Mai apne bachon ko aisi surroundings mei nahi rakhna chahta hun!! Kindly leave Shilpa. "He said hurt.

He did see her as his friend. But never knew she was the one who spiked Sharon's too.. and now Kriya and this time he won't tolerate. He had seen how broken she was, her red eyes still playing in front of his eyes. !!

Kriya just left and Sharon too was leaving when Reyam called her as Kriya gave a deaf ear.

"arey tum donon humse naaraz kyun ho?? " both asked cutely like kids.

" naaraz?? nahi toh... tum log bohut busy hona?? gao gao .. aur gaana gao!! Lat lag gayi na " she glared at them and left.

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He is restless now. The whole day she avoided him . Never met his eye. He is gonna burst out now.

As he walked into the room he saw her sitting on the bed and looking at the ceiling and silent tears flowing from her eyes!!He quickly reached her side

"Kriya!! kya hua?? tum ro kyun rahi ho?? " unknowingly his eyes watered. He had been away from her the whole day and that pained him a lot.

She broke into tears crying hard .She hugged him and chanted sorry.

"Sorry rey !! Please .. wo intentional nahi tha.. I am sorry!! Kitna shame feel kar rahe honge aap kal " she went on chanting when he pulled her back and said

"Kriya trust me !! aisa kuch nahi!! " but he was cut..

"nahi mujhe ache se yaad hai, sab has rahe the!! " she sobbed hard.

"Kriya nahi!! I swear!! Infact I loved it.. I enjoyed it!! " he said honestly!!

"nahi aap jhoot bol rahe ho.. mujhe bura na lage isiliye jhoot bol rahe ho!! " she cried hard. He tried to calm her down but failed in every attempt.!!

Rey was fed up with this. He pulled her close and pressed his lips hard on hers shutting her mouth!! She held her breathe. And after few seconds started breathing high. She tried to move back but he wrapped his hands around her and pulled her close finally kissing her. She shivered in his arms. His lips caressing hers sent shivers down her spine. With each passing second he turned wild. He slowly made both lay on the bed and kissed her to the earnest crushing her underneath him when all she did was close her eyes tight and writhe under him surrendering herself to him and responding to his kiss as he wished. When both were out of breathe he pulled back and spoke over her lips.

" Trust me !! I enjoyed it, haa maanta hun sabke saamne kiya.. but mereliye kiya!!! And that made me feel so special!!! I Loved it Kriya!! Did you get it??? I enjoyed it. aur tumhe mere alawa kisi aur ki feelings ki farak nahi padna chahiye!! " he said sternly looking into her eyes.

" It kills when I see tears in your eyes!! " he said looking deep into her eyes.

She drowned in him. How can he be so good. And she without thinking twice clutched his hair and meshed her lips with his pulling him close and kissing him passionately!!.



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So here ends the update!! Hope its worth a read!!

And yeah!! Didn't proof read yet.. kal karungi! :D

Have a Good Day!!

Stay safe and be healthy!!



PRECAP: Swaron moments!! Rey not talking to Kriya!!


-Deetha!!😊





Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago
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grrr this spamming error!!😡

you people can res now !!😆
Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago
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resss 🤣


unressing saath saath...


okay now..shuru se start karte hain...


shuru kahan se tha... haan... Rey seeing her sleeping peacefully.. again he was about to hold her..but she got hyper for getting late and left..leaving him pouting sleeping again.. 😆


but...heyy...one sec... this time Kriya pecked him over lips... like really???? 😲


okay and aagey what was that... when swayam said he is taking kriya on a date..and badle mei his reaction... 🤣 🤣

ny godd.. and his pout..goddd..he wud have looked tooo cute poutinggg.. shitt yaarrr..i can imagine...eeekkksss.. feel like pulling his cheeks and kissing them... :*




Kriyam singing haaye mera dil.. aawww...

matlab Rey feels its not love??? 😲 ... nahi yaar...woh toh bht pyaar karta hai usse...


but jo bhi kaho...kriyam moment was super cute... :*



bechara Rey wanted to spend time with her..and woh phirse bhaag gayi... and he slept.. taras aagaya mujhe toh is update mei Rey ke upar.. 😆


Kriya ne kya mast jhaad lagayi shilpa ko..hahahaaa...maza aagaya... 😆

I love the way she fumes when she sees shilpa calling Rey late night or whenever she hear her name from Rey's mouth 😆


and I loved how sweetly she wished Rey...


poor soul felt so bad when he realised everything...



then Swaron fighting like kids just for hugging Rey..hahahaa...that was supercute... 😆


And Kriya ne kya taang kheechi sharon ki... 🤣

udhar rey being besharam..hugging and kissing her dono ke saamne... but i loved that... 😳


That hug moment when Rey mouthed perfect..also said somthing like... "i feel special with u" ... OMG... i was awestruckkk...

i really really loved that...



Then came SS moment...

Swayam is goikg to propose sharon...woh bhi sabke saamne...???? 😲

sacchi juta padega usko 🤣

but...they pecked each other...woh bhi 2 times... 😲

nahi padega juta... 😆




then came the highlight...

Swaron singing...and Kriyaansh dancing... by god that was the perfrct combo...:D


then swayam finally proposed her.. eekkksss... that too sabke saamne.. hailaa...sooocutee...

i lovedd how kriya awed...and rey holding her from behind... that was indeed a cute moment for both d couples...


Kriya ko chadh gayi... and der she was dancing on latt lag gayi...hahahaaa... 😆


I loved that moment when Reyam thought of doing masti but when they saw kriya crying...they were shocked...especially Rey...

that shilpa..by god...heights...such a chaep... huh... :@

acha kiya usko nikaal ke..huh..




And Then..FINALLY THAT MOMENT JISKA MUJHE KABSE WAIT THAT...

"THERE FIRST KISS"

OMG...How much i have been dying to see this moment... ufff...

There kiss left me breathless...

Intense... Passionate.. and with Full of Love they posess for each other...

especially when he said.. ki it kills me to see u in tears...then she took him in a kiss... goshhh... *dead*



I loveddd this super lamba update... A mixture of cute moments..innocence... Romance... Love... Passion.. Everything... mwaah... 🤗
Edited by akanksha_arsha - 11 years ago
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Beautiful updt
Loved it
N sorry for short cmt hell lot busy yaar
Karna toh baadha cmt tha isiliye itne din se unres nahi kiya
Par time nahi sorry
Edited by zina.92 - 11 years ago
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Reshh
unres
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*bows down*
deetha tu dhanya hai sachii 🤗
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aise bigg bigg and fatang updates sirf tu hi de sakti hai :p
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har baar me sochti hu ab kya hoga next update me...and har baar u come up with something new and surprising things
you are indeed super talented
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NT updates has always gaved me all sorts of emotions together
one moment i feel #aww seeing swaron the next moment #gussa (shilpa) then #shy_blush seeing rey #rofl when the besties scenes comes #proud seeing attitude kria has #happy seeing their bonds I Mean everything
every damn emotion you bring out from the readers...hattsoff to you for that ^_^
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Coming to the update
it was yet another commendable work of your
so so amazing
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I loved the start
swayam and kria date pe 🤣
rey ki toh puri jal gayi hogi 🤣

hehe birthday ke ek din pehle husband ko ignoring :p sahi hai :p

that was such a sweet surprise by kria awww <3

hadd hai vo shilpa pura time khagai inn love birds ka huh
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And i loved all the awesome KR moments u showd be it the mangalsutra one or the bed pe peck wala ;) they were so superb
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And happy to see swaron track is proceeding ahead...great
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Eeepps finally swayam proposed her woh bhi sab ke saamne...<3 haaaye <3
and kria's reaction to it was worth reading :p
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i hope rey ko bhi akal aaye and wobhi jaldi confes karde
haha talli kria seducing him was treat to read really
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and thank u that tu lat lag gai ki detail me nai gai warna rey ka toh pata nai par hamari band zarur baj jati 😆
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haayo rabba
i cant see kria like this
kyu aise rulati hai usse :'(
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bechara caterer bhi dar gaya :p
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hehe bacho ko bhi nai pasand wo chudail :p
great job kria dhakhe mar ke nikaalna chahiye tha usse...saste me nipta diya :p
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and again i would say kriyansh make me blush blush blush ^_^
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keep updating this :)
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res
ps wen will u be upgrading
unres

atlast aapne upgrade kiya
hayee maza aa gaya upgrade pad kar
luved it😊
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Chalo.. after that status, tumne ek hi din mei update to diya.. 😳 Kaan pakad ke maafi if i was harsh 😳 You know how much I love NT.. 😳

Ye lo.. pehle scene mei hi bichara Rey.. Vo toh hadbadi mei chali gai 😛 But not before giving him a quick kiss, haha. Cute one, DD!

Swayam can give a stern face?! 😲 😲

DATE?😲My reaction.. same as Rey. LMAO. Ye ho kya raha hai? What is this bhabhi-devar duo cooking? Kaunsi khichdi pak rahi hai? 😛 BUT, Rey's expression are worth it ❤️ Bichare ne kya socha tha.. aur kya ho raha hai

BTW, after Rey's monologue.. when do I get to see their date 😉

Oh my!! SHOPPING?!

This time, I support Swayam.. bichara.. poora din shopping karna pada.. "Isme kya interest lena hai?" Exactly what I say 😆

Haye mera dil...

YE HO KYA RAHA HAI?!!!

You know my love for KriYam DD. Aisa mat kar mere saath.. dil tod diya!😛

But the questions Swayam asked at then end😃

Pehle to, I thought it was Swayam and Sharon singing... as you know.. they're singers.. phir I read Kriya aur dimag ki batti jali.. ki it's KriYam singing the song.. aise aise song inse na gawa please!




What Kriya said.. I completely side with her! At this point, Rey DOES think that it's normal and it should be like this between hubby & wife.. he has yet to realize that he does truly love her. I'm waiting to see how Rey makes that realization😊


And you know what? I'm REALLY glad you put that convo! I was waiting for something like that.. pehle se hi lagta tha ki R feels that it's common.. I was waiting ki dono mei se koi to ye bole.. K finally did😃


"Hey!! Kriya!! chill.. bhai jaldi hi realize karenge!!

WHAT? HE CALLED HER KRIYA? REALLY? HE DID? EEEPPP!!!!!

Yea.. bhabhi is more cute coming from him😆 Still... first time he said it😃😃😃



AWWIIIEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rey is angry.. but yet, cannot ignore his brotherly feelings. So cute when he puts everything aside and asks Swayam if he should give him a message.

Much loved scene!!





" mujhe akele chod ke chaligayi? " he glared at her.

Aate hi..😛 Swayam pe pyaar aur ispe glaring.. not bad Reyansh 😛😛




Ye lo.. bhag gai.. She always runs only, right? *tries to recall past moments..*

Bichare Rey.. I can understand his frustration lol.. pehle subah bhag gai.. phir poora din gayab.. aur aab raat ko b😛Aab to iss pe rehem karo, DD?



Agar tumhe mere saath time nahi spend karna toh mai kyun paagalon ki tarah tumhare peeche ghumun?

Does he realize what he just said? He needs to😎


Gai bhes paani mei... Shilpa😵Humesha K ka mood off kar daal ti hai.. Itni dhamkiyo se b kaam nai hu?

I'm glad K picked up the call😛We've only seen her giving threats.. I want to see some action from K's side😉




Next scene where she makes him look at her.. aww! I could clearly imagine it.. him angry but yet, she pulling his face and very softly and lovingly wishing him.. so very cute!!

...and he feelts guilty ._. Rey and guilt have quite a strong connection, don't they? 😛

Once again.. interrupted! Chalo, at least this time she didn't run off voluntarily XP



Rey! Rey! Rey! Iska mai kya karu? Ever-confused Rey!😆

Who takes this long to realize everyone is there is with him?😛


Swayam was about to hug him when sharon popped up in betwen and sat in his lap. Kriya's mouth went wide immediately.

MERA B YAHI REACTION. Then I'm ROFLing now 😛

Inke reactions are one of the best part of NT. Always worth it ❤️


And she did what? She kissed him on the cheek?😲😲😲
I'm dreaming, right?

Ye Sharon b na.. moment me aake sab kuch karke b kuch nai karti 😆




R-O-F-L

I freaking love their teasing sessions!!

I don't know what blush is.. so I won't say blush.. but I'm grinning like a fool right now =))


"Tit for tat " she stuck his tongue out irritating her.

1. Awesome dialogue.
2. Proof read kar DD! XP




There she stood in a black tassel of shoulder one piece .

Koi picture hai? Ye language meri samaj ke bahar hai 😛 *don't judge*



DD??? DD!!!!

Oh my! I cannot tell you HOW MUCH I loved that scene.. where she refuses to take off the bangles and nuptial necklace..

It's pure & I completely feel the same.



Swayam & Sharon are hilarious haha!

Pehle, vo nervous. Then Her.

Then, liked how he calmed her down.. his words, what he truly means ❤️



What? He corners her? Kabhi nai socha tha I'd see a bold Swayam😛

And then.. baazi palti, lol. she did what? ? ? ?

Bachi badi ho gai 😛




Am I really seeing this? The whole song incorporated in the update? EEEPPP!!

Chapter 15 has to be the BEST update of NT yet! I freaking loved ittt!!

BTW, isko tadpaye kar de instead of tarfaye 😛

Oo-Ree Piya Mujhe Yaad Teri Tadfaye (1st line)




I could imagine it all!! Khushi ke aansu 😭

Swayam & Sharon.. Rey & Kriya.. together, they is beautiful 😎

he proposed!! She had the courage to accept 😃 😃 I liked how you first put the hesitation.. if you hadn't, it may have not gone down well with me.. seeing that until now, she questioned.. even just few hours before nightfall.. achanak accept kar leti to fishy lagta..

Aur RK ke baare me kya kahu? K shy and R not leaving a chance.





From what by the end of song even Rey realized about marriage.. DD, perfectly penned down 🤗




O teri!! Kriya talli..

aab to ho gaya kaam😛




HER Prince 😎

Ugh.. you're right.. feeling bad for Rey.. but he's right too.. in her full senses only 😊

You are killing your readers DD... killing them sweetly😛





Ye lo.. boys b na!! Kya zarurat thi phir se gaana gaane ki? :X sigh.. thande dimag se soncha to i udnerstand.. vo sirf mazak kar rahi the.. didnt know what happened in their absence



I was waiting for her to say she cared!! Even if others didn't she does.. Everytime, one can't just stop caring because others say it doesn't matter to them.. sometimes, its just a self thing.. liked this part😃



OMG!!! Jhansi ki rani is here?! 😲 😲

Haha, I so love the next scene.. Shilpa ki kya band bajayi.. Poor ReYam must be shocked beyong limit seeing this side of her :X

Perfectly described.. those who are the sweetest.. unse panga nai lene kya.. dimag garam ho gaya to sabki shamat aa jayegi😛





HAHAHA! Rey ke wait ki limit khatm.. sachi mei bande ko fed up hona hi tha =)) =)) =))

F.I.N.A.L.L.Y.





" It kills when I see tears in your eyes!! " he said looking deep into her eyes.

Can I go yell at him please? So he can realize it, already? Sab bolta hai.. par jo realize karna hai voh nai karta.

Kya karu mai iska? 😳

DD, jaldi se realize karwa de? (getting greedy) Confession mat karwa na karwana ho to.. par he needs a self-realization 😛



PRECAP: Swaron moments!! Rey not talking to Kriya!!

Sigh.. tere naina kaatilana.. maar hi daalenge.

Aab aur kya bolu? Khush hou ya dukhi? Pehle 'Swaron moments' de ke khush karti ho.. aur phir last mei bomb phoda..

aab kriya ne kya kiya? or is he just teasing her?
Edited by -Araina- - 11 years ago

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