Taarey OS- Tune mujhe pehchana nhi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys... This is ananya... I m writing this OS as a dare by neha... Thank u so much neha for this dare...!!! I hope i reach upto ur expectations!

I, Neha, being a dare-devil,
give a Dare to rockanyaa,
on the song Tune mujhe pechana nahin
(from Raju Chacha)
which shall include Taarey and any
others if you want.
Situation: Taani is angry at Rey for
some reason and doubts his love (you
can choose the reason) and he is
trying to convince her.

Taarey OS- Tune mujhe pehchana nahi! :)

Rey and taani had broken up 3 months ago..! Taani had proved herself as d best GS...! She had got NDC back and proved that the judge was not fair... Everything was going on well but there was something no one knew about...
Taani had applied for MBA in d bangalore university... And she was leaving after 2days.. Still no one knew ab it..

Next day in college...
Gang is in rehersal hall (Taani has still not come)
Aashi enters
Aashi- guys! Problem types go gayyi hai..
Gang- wat happened?
Aashi- Taani bangalore types jaa rahi hai... Vp sir ne abhi abhi mujhe bataya.. Woh MBA types karne jaa rhi hai!
Gang- what!????
Sw- how is it possible? I didnt know ab it..
Aashi- taani nhi chahti thi ki kisi ko bhi pata chale.. Aur koi sad types ho...

Rey was shocked... He just wantd to stop her...! Was he responsible for her leaving? -was the only thought in his mind..
He rushed to taani's house... He decided to go thru d window..
He climbed up and saw taani packing her bag.. His heart broke into many pieces... He calmed himself n went inside.

Ta-aap yahaan kya kar rhe hai?
Rey- Tum kyun jaa rhi ho??
(moving towards her)
Ta- kyun? Main yahaan raho ya na rahoon... Aapko kya faraq padta hai...
( Tears welled up in her eyes..! She couldnt control herself.)

Aap hi ne toh bola tha... That i irritate you... Mere dreams stupid hain... Nhi Mr. Reyaansh Singhania .. Mere dreams stupid nhi hai... And main yeh aapko prove karke rahoon gi!!!!

Rey- taani.. Mera
(but taani cut him)

Taani- meri life ki sabse badi galati yeh thi ki maine aapse pyaar kiya.. Aapke saath apni life spent karna chaha!

(Rey culdnt take it anymore.. He held her by her shoulders.)

Rey- Just shut up!!!! Tumhara pyaar koi mistake nhi tha... Get tht!!! Yeh sab maine tumhare liye kiya... Jisse tum mere bina apni life jee sako.. Apna career bna sako...
M sorry ... Please mujhe chod kar mat jao... Main nhi jes sakta tumhare bina...

Taani just removed his hands..
Ta- No rey... Main bangalore jaa rahi hoon... And thtz final...
N went out of d house crying... Rey followed her...

She ran n sat on a bench near d road...
Memories started playing in her mind.. all dat he said to sharon in Rh... Everything was a lie... In these 3 months she died evry second.. But for him it was all fake..! How culd he do this..? Did he really love her!???

Somewhere she heard someone singing... It was rey.. He was on his knees holding his ear wid a cute puppy face..

hmmm.. hmmm... hmm... hmmm...
Tune Mujhe Pehchaana Nahin
Jaana Main Koyi Anjaana Nahi
Aashiq Hoon Main Tere Naam Ka
Deewana Hoon Main Deewana Nahin

He moved to taani n sat beside her.!!! She turned away...
She culd never forgive him for wat he did..!! Never..!
He again came in front of her n sang..

Tune Mujhe Pehchaana Nahin
Jaana Main Koyi Anjaana Nahi
Aashiq Hoon Main Tere Naam Ka
Deewana Hoon Main Deewana Nahin


She just started walking...!! He continued singing..

Naam Batake Tu Kehti Hai
Tu Woh Nahi Koi Aur Hai
Tune Di Thi Yeh Anguthi
Yeh Kehti Hai Tu Hai Joothi


He removed a ring frm his pocket wich taani gave to him in goa..! Taani remembered their moments in goa! Her eyes become teary again...
He wipes d tears... Taarey have an eyelock.. But then taani remembered wat rey had done... She again moves away... This tym really fast...

Kaata Na Tha Joh Nikal Gaya
Kaagaz Na Tha Jo Kho Gaya


Rey had to run behind her.. But something prick his legs..
It started bleeding a bit...
Rey- *Ouch*
She turns bak n saw rey hurt.. She culdnt see him like that she ran to him n caressed his wound.. He was smiling at her... But she had tears in her eyes...
(rey continued singing... )
Likha Hai Dil Pe Yeh Tere
Tu Hai Meri Main Hoon Tera
(Rey hugged her tightly... never letting her go..)
Tune Mujhe Pehchaana Nahin
Jaana Main Koyi Anjaana Nahi
Aashiq Hoon Main Tere Naam Ka
Deewana Hoon Main Deewana Nahin

Rey wiped her tears...
N said to her-
M sorry taani.. Maine jo bhi kiya tumhare liye kiya... M really sorry.. Please mujhe chod kar mat jao ..!! Please..

He had tears in his eyes.. Taani just smiled n said... I love you rey... I m sorry mujhe aise react nhi karna chahiye tha.. N i'll try ki main mumbai ke kisi MBA college mein admission le loon .

Rey- I love you too.. 3 month tumse dur raha hoon.. Ab ek aur second door rehna pade nhi toh main mar..
Ta- rey please aisa mat boliye...
She just hugged him...
He hugged her bak...
The broke the hug n were pulled into a LLHH.. Rey came close to her... She closed her eyes knowing wat was coming next... Rey put his lips on hers... Giving her a soft kiss... N in between said.. I love you taani now and forever!!! :)

************ END ********



I am so sorry if this was a total waste... Please let me know how was it... This being my first OS i wuld really wanna know ur comments.. Neha i hope u aren't disappointed! Please tell me how is it.. Like n comment! :)

Edited by rockanyaa - 12 years ago

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Karan_TaaRey thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay me first 😃 Res. ** JINGA LALA
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice os ananya.. i luvd it.. smhw i imagind the situation lyk this bt nt wid a happy ending lyk u did..so u gave an happy ending to my imagination.. thnx 4 d pm.. i really luvd it alot.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita_95

really nice os ananya.. i luvd it.. smhw i imagind the situation lyk this bt nt wid a happy ending lyk u did..so u gave an happy ending to my imagination.. thnx 4 d pm.. i really luvd it alot.. :)


Thank you...!!
I like happy ending maybe!😛
Glad u liked it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is a really Sweet OS and I liked how you related it to D3 current situation !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Super duperr awsum di
It was emotionl but I luved it
Then taarey milan was heartouching
Thanx for the scrap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Super duperr awsum di
It was emotionl but I luved it
Then taarey milan was heartouching
Thanx for the scrap



Awwwh... Thank you!!!I am so glad you liked it..!!!! Ur comment made my dayy!!! thank you sooo much! :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey awesome os...
loved it...
the way u write is awesome...
ur very gud writer...
i loved the os..
really it was superb...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajkumaripari

<font color="#330066">hey awesome os...</font>

<font color="#330066">loved it...</font>
<font color="#330066">the way u write is awesome...</font>
<font color="#330066">ur very gud writer...</font>
<font color="#330066">i loved the os..</font>
<font color="#330066">really it was superb...😛</font>



Thank you so much!!!! Your comment means a lot... Glad u liked it! :)
Edited by rockanyaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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1st bl me hi sixr
kya bat
kya bat

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