Arhi OS 'Did you just gri--' 'SHUT UP.' - Page 4

Originally posted by: mishti_17

Yosh.. Amazing.. 😆 Except for the ending, I knew abt it all but its always fun reading it again.. I wish the later part had happened in reality too.. 😎 What say?

Originally posted by: -3raser-

Firstly, I haven't read any of your previous work. I had just been extremely bored and was desperate to read a funny-comedy OS. So when I saw the title of your OS, I thought this would be something different as it sounds interesting.

I love the way you write!

Its realistic and just the way I prefer it. Not many people write like this and I have become a big fan of yours after this! The way you portray Khushi in this OS is hilarious, relatable and so down to earth. I can completely imagine all those incidents occuring with her and the reactions to those as well.
Except for maybe the cute guy bumping in to me someday I was all engrossed into it.
Arnav's character was a mystery but that quality along with the smirks and the raised eyebrows was what made him aimable. There little known about him but he was instantly likable thanks to the way you described him through Khushi's perception.

In the beginning I thought "OMG! These are all the things I would say!" but as I finished I realized that it was a real life story. And that is when I felt that yes! I also have someone similar to me. The dialogues remind me of myself as I have a tendency to blurt things out and get hyper like Khushi did when Arnav confronted her.
And the clumsiness...oh I love kissing the floor, walls and...the sewage system (yes the gutter of India) as well. Though I never planned that my trip to India would cost me a bath in drainage water but...that's just me.
So yeah..when Khushi fell into the garbage can I was rolling in my bed laughing and recollecting my memories.
Overall it was an extremely funny OS with a subtle romance in it.

P.S: Don't worry...who knows where you might find that man again 😉


- Vishwa-

Originally posted by: Dalmuthuya

Omg I loved your comment! LOL You see, writing like this is my favorite, but I don't always write like this. Many of my stories are very deep, but once in a blue moon I get ideas like this. :) I am glad you enjoyed this and we as the internet will conquer the art of clumsiness. (I think we are already there -_- )

PS: I really hope I don't find him anywhere again or I might end up in the hospital. LOL