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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...khushi really stuck now and will be forced to marry arnav...and once shez married..i dnt think arnav is gng to leave her...but who cares..i want them together😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
very touchy update, loved it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sad sad sad sad!!! Thaey meet after s0 many years and p00r Arnav d0esnt even get 0ne happiness he deserves!!! It is all s0 frustating!!!Argghh!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update... Feeling so sad for Arnav...He is so lonely
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavbarun


Great update!

But I have a few points to raise!! Hope you don't mind

why didn't arnav react on finding out that the millionare gupta was working for him for peanuts! Kuch reaction to banta hai!

I dnt know if u are aware but kalsarpa dosh is no big deal. A small puja is all it takes to get rid off it. And in anyway its effects are not this drastic.

Hope you are not offended! Just that read all the chapters together and got too involved with the story!


No Offense taken...

You are right. I initially wrote a chapter explaining his reaction and the way Khushi came to know that she is indeed working for Arnav. But I felt it as a drag and didnt wanna focus more on that.

Secondly, I did research on Kalasarpa dosham. Believe me, I had this dosham and I know how many temples my parents visited to eliminate its effects.
But there is one type called Padmakala Sarpa Yogam which is pretty effective. And we have to remember in our story that it all happened 27 years ago and the awareness to eliminate its effects back then would have been minimal. We have all alternate routes these days but back then, pretty much every one is religious and orthodox.

I hope I justified my thoughts..Feel free to discuss. Thanks for pointing it out, which means you are seriously giving it a read...

Thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...
waiting for their wedding...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW
wat a twist
loved it
the last line khushi asked
so emotional
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice dear😊

arshi engaged frm childhod😃

arnav only wants property😲

last line khushi said fab⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow he wants to marry her not only for money...once married he will not let her go i think loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
GREAT UPDATE...I PERSONALLY LOVE ASR MORE...!!!!!!

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