31/01/14 new part 4 virman ss pyaar mein takrar

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AsadZoyaILU

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Posted: 12 years ago

<font size="6">i know i need to update my other story but this just came in my head so i am writting it i will continue my other story virman pehla pyar her is the update for now for this story</font>

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part2 -page3

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part4- page5

Edited by myvirman - 11 years ago

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AsadZoyaILU

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Posted: 12 years ago

I know i havent finished my other story and im starting a new one but the idea just came in my mind.the characters are same as in show

part1
10 months later after Virman marriage
K the story starts from were manvi virat in a room and manvi says she saw swamini picture in karan house.they are standing opposite each other
Manvi:virat bas ek bar meri baat to suno
Virat:kya suno mein manvi(irratated)
Jeevika come outside there room but stops and listen to what they r saying
Manvi:virat mein such kehrahi hu main swamini bua ka picure deka tha karan ke ghar mein. Tum hi socho mein jut q bolungi
Virat:manvi jut ho ya sach pur jis bath sa family mein problem ayengi use tum bath ko q dora rahi ho
Manvi:pur virat...
Jevika walks in and cuts off manvi
Jevika:mannu virat sahi ke raha hai tu q bara bara karan ka nam leti hai jub tujhe patha hai ke family main koyi bi.nahi karan ke bara mein bath kartna chahta
Manvi:pur dii...
Jeevika:bas manu (shouts)
Virat:manvi ek bar kehdiya na ke karan ko bul jao to.bul jao(angry)
Manvi:(looks other way has tears in her eyes becuz of the tone virat and jeevi r talking to her with)
Jeevika:manvi tujhe abhi virat ke or apne rishte ke bara mein sochna chahiye tum dono ki abhi abhi shadi huwi hai or tum apne rishte ko chor kar karan ke pecha par gayi ho.
Virat:q manvi tum asa q kar rahi ho
Manvi:now tears are rolling down her cheeks
Viren:jevika!!...jeevika!...
Jevika:ayi viren ji!!!!!!!
Jeevika leaves
Manvis back facing virat and manvi is crying.
Virat:manvi tumhe kuch samaj me aya hum kya lehraha te...
Manvi:no reply just crying silently
Virat:manvi...manvi
Virat doesnt get a reply so he goes in front of manvi
Manvi looks down to hide her tears
Viratt holds her from her shoulders
Virat:manvi
Manvi looks up and virat sees tears in her eyes
Virat gets panikes
Virat:manvi tum thik ho na tum ro q rahi ho(makes her sit on the bed) manvi bolo na
Manvi just crys
Virat gets up and sits beside her and side huges her
Virat:manvi kya huwa
Manvi huges virat and holdes hes shirt from were the buttons were open
Virat:manvi kya huwa batho mujhe ab bohat datr lag raha hai ...manvi kuch bolo
Manvi while sobbing:v...vi...virat...i...a..am..s...so..sorry..plez..mujhe ...maf..kardo...i...promise mein ...ab...k..ka..karan...ki...bath..kabhi nahi karungi...bu..but plez mujse gusa matho ...mein...bardash...nahi...karsakti...im..sorry pur plez mujse baat karna band math karna nahi to mein. ...mar...
virat puts his hand on her mouth and come out of huge cuppes her face
virat:esa mat kaho nahi to meein hi tumhe mardunga laughs. while crying
manvi hugs virat tightly :i am sorry...
virat:it ok pur pir uske bara mein baath muth karna
virat kisses her forhead
virat:i love u
manvi:while sobbing i love u too

precape
jeevika manvi argue
virat angry on manvi
manvi hurt

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome one...
Liked it...
Continue soon...
Wann read more...

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preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow Myvirman u started well, and u know only you can do justice to your own concept
beautifully forwarding the story

Let me know, when you update the next 😃

all the best 👍🏼

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AsadZoyaILU

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preity_d
Wow Myvirman u started well, and u know only you can do justice to your own concept
beautifully forwarding the story

Let me know, when you update the next 😃

all the best 👍🏼

thanks i. love ur comment and i will surlu send ua pm wen ii update