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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#331

awwwieee the update was lovelyyy 👏

hehehehehe zaaine is unpredictable like viren 😛
and jeevika is normal 😆

awww zaaine again in toy shop i guess he bought something for his coming sister/brother 😳

jeevika is missing zaaine awww even m missing him too 😭😳

his cuteee talks and his 'Daa' 😳

cant wait for the next part
thanx for the pm 😊

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krystufan

@krystufan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Superb update...

the whole update of virika romance so cute..
bt really miss zaaine tooo...

each n every part such adorable...their walk remember abt past...ice sketching...n n carriage scene really brilliant...

gud job 😊

continue very very soon...
eager to read next...

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Charu

@-Charu-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

What??

No Zaaine in this update too? 😭

Me NO like it when Zaaine not with me Karina 🥺

Me miss Zaaine lots and lots 😭

Please don't do this ever again!!

As much as I loved Virika being so expressive, I miss my little munchin 😭

How can u even do that ? 😡

I want my Zaaine in the next updateee

At any cost!!

Each part was cute and adorable as always ❤️

The walk while they remembered their past, and the ice skating and the cherry on the top was the carraige scene 😳

Superb Job 👍🏼

Bang On!!!😳

Continue Soon

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Wara082007

@Wara082007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Now this is What you CALL A PERFECT START to A DAY

EARLY MORNING MESSAGE FROM KAYS ABOUT UPDATING HEARTBEAT...

I AM LOVING THE PORTRAYING OF VIREN AND JEEVIKA'S CHARACTER FROM BEING PARENTS TO PEOPLE IMMENSELY IN LOVE ...

ENJOYING YOUR IDEAS and EXECUTION to THE FULLEST..

LOVED IT

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808226

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Such a beautiful update ❤️

Love how Viren knows Jeevika in&out ...

He's just so Perfect!

And Zaaine back to Toys'R'us..awww..he's such a cutie pie

'Virika's Day out' was simply gorgeous...

With the ice skating and the concluding 'Carriage ride'...it was no less than a Fairy Tale ❤️

Its true that 'coffee' without Zaaine is not that fun 😆

Mesmerizing Update..Truly!

loved it ❤️ ...Virikaliciousss

Hope next update comes soon 😃

Thanks for updating 🤗

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millee18

@millee18

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#336

look...wht the first thing i got after waking up...
its keeni update!!!!
a grt start to a wonderful day...
the update is awsome...
luved how viren understand jeevika so well..
nd they having fun together alone after ages...
but one very imp thing is missing thts zannie...
we want him in next update at any cost...
cont soon!!!!

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Enigmatic_Charm

@Enigmatic_Charm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

It was a cute update karina di!!!!!

Wow virika enjoying the New york city...❤️

But i'm missing Zaaine sooo much...😔

Pls bring him back soon di...

Great update n thanx for the PM...😃

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veronica

@kashmirbeauty

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#338

superb!!

jeevs missing zaaine was too gud...!!

thanks for pm

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Surbhi Jain

@surbhi1994

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#339

it ws cute

virika missing each other

evn i mised zaaine in d update

5 years wow

loved it

mind blowing

superb

continue soon

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#340

awwwiieee cute n romantic updatee...realyy awesome as alwaysss... Viren knows perfectly everythingg for Jeevikaa... howw sweett <3 <3 OMG!!!! i realy cant believe 40 chpts...wowww... congratsss :D

keep contininggg...one of my favvv storiesss :D :D

eager to read moree...