Bo Hoo! 😭I missed resing... was out travelling!!
Will read through and comment shortly! 😊
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Wow!! Such a beautiful update Afya... I am a total fan of your writing...
The story flows so so smoothly... its so simple, honest and beautiful... hats off!! 👏
Well to begin with, the first scene is one of my favorites...
Arnav reminiscing over what wrong he has done with Khushi...
They way he has shattered her dreams, her hopes of a happy future...
Loved the way you have described his uneasiness about ruining Khushi's life...
I felt bad for him, thinking about his past and what Lucknow had done to him and his family...
All the hurt, pain and betrayal of his uncle... and even with that he felt at home now...
The Guptas had welcomed into their warm house and warmer hearts...
They had made him feel extremely comfortable...
I loved his introspection of what he is actually doing to Khushi...
How he questioned his moms intentions about his marriage to Khushi...
I like the fact that he now knew for sure that she did not marry him for money...
They way he thought of setting her free... to live her life... to choose a future...
And his decision to stand by her side when the truth of their marriage will be revealed...
Arnav has changed so drastically!!
He himself volunteered to company Payal and Babuji??
Loved his concern for her family... and her surprise to find him there...
Loved how Arnav supported her father during the physiotherapy session...
it was truly beautiful...
I can totally understand Khushi's unhappiness of going back to Delhi...
I feel that every time I have to leave my moms place...
Her grumbling about how Arnav was happy to go back was really cute...
I can totally relate to her shock to find out what Arnav has done for her family...
I understand her confusion, her questions of his motive behind it...
Loved the scene where the family notice the change in Arnav...
He truly is changing... and he himself does not realise it...
I hope he does before its too late...
Also like Arnav's brotherly concern about Akash's marriage...
And finally Khushi has a break down... the pent up emotions flow...
She questions him about his reasons for his every action about her...
And runs out... Runs away from Arnav, away from his answers...
His crazy concern for her is so amazing... his desperation to find her...
And offcourse Anjali does not miss anything...
Loved the last scene... just beautiful...
I love this headstrong Khushi... who refuses to listen to Arnav...
And Arnav does not have a choice but to pick her up in his arms...
Awww I miss Barun and Sanaya... and I miss IPK!!! 😭
This was a perfect update Afya... Mazza aa gaya!! 😊
Ohhh and ya I almost forgot... thank you for such a sweet dedication...
especially to the three musketeers!!
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