taarey ss-- i am strong part 12 page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is a ss on the current track of DIl Dostii Dance...
i don't like the way cv's pertraying the charecter of Taani. At first it was Rey who was rude to her since she hurt him by being the Gf of Shivam even after he reject her brutally and now he want her to be normal with him after he broke her completelEven though she is hot headed at times she never blamed Re when he ws at his worst behaviour. Instead she just take the hurt and smiled outside.y. But now its just the opposite. and she didn't even have anyone to call as her's since the sharon fiasco. So i thught to write this story after the harsh word Rey and Taani exchanged after Swayam's injury and routine change.

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Taani looked t her reflection in the mirror and she cannot even recognize herself. She was a bubbly and cheerful girl but the girl in the mirror is depressed and defeated girl. Soon the realization dawned over her that she has changed herself for Rey and that is the main reason she is like this. Even though she can't stop loving him she decided that she will stop feeling for him. He has already broken her trust and heart but she will not allow him to break her more. This time she decided that she will be for herself. This will be the last night of Taani who changed for Rey. It's time to be back to my original self and tomorrow will be the day. Today she will cry for everything so that tomorrow she doesn't have any pain in her to cry. Soon she realized that she was kidding herself and the pain will never go away. But she decided that she will be herself all along and will not show anyone that Rey affect her anymore and will react anything with calm mind only. Instead she will show them that she has moved on in her life just like she did when Rey rejected her proposal in the beginning. But this time she will not allow anyone to take advantage of her naive and innocence.

That night Rey was happy that Taani has started to become serious about her carrier and she still has a feeling for him. Unknown to him was that the girl he was in love has decided to bury down her feeling inside her.

Taani spent the night crying her heart out while Rey was happy about her progress and the new day dawned slowly.

Swayam was at surprise seeing a cheered up Taani in the morning. She has already made their breakfast and was having them cheerfully. He can see the smile on her face and the smile is slowly reaching her eyes. At that moment Swayam has a doubt about the plan of Rey and has a feeling that everything is going to be complicated. Taani cheerfully went to the collage and started her work. So the gang too enters and she called them to the rehearsal hall. Everyone was surprised to see Taani happy and was confused at first. Sharon looked at the girl in front of her and admired her strength to move on. She was also doubtful about Rey's plan.

Rey was late as he has some work to do before he reached rehearsal hall. But the scene in front of him was a shocker to him owing that Taani was happily dancing with Swayam and the others were watching them. Rey can see the confidence in Taani and the fear in Swayam which soon turned into confidence.

Taani and the rest of the team were waiting for Rey since he has informed that he will be late the gang decided to practice. Taani was watching them when she saw that Swayam was also sitting along since he can't do the rehearsal due to his injury. Thaani can see the sadness in his eyes since he can't dance and she decided to cheer him up. She moved to him and kneels down to him and asked his hand for dance.

Swayam was sad that he has to stop dancing until he will be fine when he saw that Taani was kneeling in front of him and asking his hand for dance. He also saw that the whole gang has stopped rehearsing and was looking at them. He looked at the smile of his sister's face and gave his hand to her smilingly thinking that she is cutely weird.

Taani took Swayam to the center and started to do a couple dance without using his injured shoulder at all. In fact she was doing the moves with so much confidence since she knows that Swayam will be worried for her. Swayam who was a little bit nervous about hurting Taani becomes confident seeing her confidence. Soon they were dancing happily without the care of the world. Swayam was happy at the happiness of his sister where as Taani was happy that she made her brother happy. All the others were watching them intently and soon find their eyes wet seeing the love of the siblings.

Rey can see the happiness in the brother -sister duo and was happy for them. He saw that the other members have a sweet smile on their lips and tears in their eyes seeing the siblings. This one dance showed them the love and care between the brother and sister. Rey also have the sweet smile in his lips and tears in his eyes. All of them wiped their tears when they saw that the dance has ended and they are hugging each other.

Swayam felt really proud about Taani. He can see that her confidence has come back and she will be fine. He assured her with the hug that he will always be with her and will always trust her. Thaani was also happy that her brother will be always with her no matter what. Soon they are hugged by the whole team members starting from Sharon and Rey.

Rey saw that the team was walking towards Swayam and Taani for the hug. He immediately ran to them and hugged Swayam where as Sharon Hugged Taani which was soon followed by others. Soon the group hug ended and they decided to get back to rehearsals.

Taani explained to them about the new changes in the competition. She patiently gave answers to everyone's question and completed her duty. After that she went to Rey and talked him about some work for him and asked him to complete it after their rehearsal. She gave a humble smile to Rey and went to Swayam and they moved out of the RH.

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i hope yu like it... please comment..

index
part 1 - above part 2 - page 3 part 3 - page 5 part 4 - page 7
part 5 - page 9 part 6 - page 10 part 7 - page 11 part 8 - page 12
part 9 - page 13 part 10 - page 15 part 11- page 16 part 12 - page 17
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great one.. nicely written 👍🏼 welcome to forum :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loving this taani <3
Hope cv would have done the same
Btw it was superb
Loved it
Update soon
N pm me plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear nyc starting...luking forward fr the nxt parts... & welcome 2 this forum...😊 1 more thing plz correct taani's name... u wrote everywhere thaani bt the correct spelling would b taani...do pm me when u update the nxt parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice part
Love Taani's resolution and it will be nice to see bubbly Taani, miss that Taani so much.
Can't wait to see Rey do all the hard work this time, he needs to stop taking her for granted and chase her.
Cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful concept, I wish to see a Taayam scene like this in D3. Love that Taani decided to be strong and be her bubbly self again. And she dancing with her bhai to cheer him up was amazing. I love it, and u doing a awesome job. Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww ... That was Beautiful ... I really Missed Bubbly Taani in D3 ... I really Enjoyed The First Part ... Do Update It Soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to the forum :)
And very nicely written. Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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noce start...lookin forward to the next part...
update soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amaging ss love the strong headed taani

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