Ariya ss @hum kisise kaam nahi@ updt part 8 + VVI NOTE pg 16 04.12.13 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arjun:main tumhe chhorke kavi nahi jaunga.main toh tumse bahat pahele se hi pyar karta hu.per tum thi ki...ek baat puchhu?
Ria:kya?
Arjun:mujhe bahat ajib lag raha hai ki,meri sherni vi sharmati hai!!
Ria:kyun?ladkiyo ka alankar(ornaments)hoti hai sharm.aapko nahi pata?
Arjun:achchha,toh tum manti ho ki tum ladki ho.mujhe toh...
Ria:matlab?aap...aap humara mazak uda rahe hai?
She breaks the hug.starts hitting arjun on chest.running after him.after the tom and jerry game,they fell on the bed.arjun is on the top of ria.both r breathing fast.
Arjun:ria...
Ria:hmm...
Arjun:kya tum mujhse shadi karogi?mera sath hamesha dogi?
Ria:ha,hum aap ka humesha sath denge.hum apse bahat pyar karte hai.bahat.
Arjun:main vi.
Arjun comes closer to her.ria closes her eyes.arjun whisper,kya main...
Ria:hum apko nahi rokna chahte,hum sirf apke hona chahte hai,sirf apke.
Arjun takes her lower lip.then her upper lip.both were kissed each other madly.for signaling him,she throw her dupatta on the floor.arjun's hand roaming on her back.there was a single dori.he undone it.then he takes he all jwellary off.untie her hair.he make a line of kisses from her eyes to her chest.he kisses all her parts,to make her own.
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Edited by pankhuri96 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Precap:
arjun:ria,maine tumse ek jhut kaha hai.ise janke shayad tum kavi mujhe maaf na kar pao.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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VERY VERY IMPORTANT NOTE:-

agar aap logoko meri likhna achchha nahi lagta,toh plz apne cmmnt me bataiye.main apne padai me se time nikal ke updts deti hu.sabko pm karti hu,per responce bahat kam milta hai.isiliye,main sabko yeh batana chahti hu ke,agar iss me mujhe achchha responce nahi,mila.toh main ise continue nahi karungi.aur age koi aur story vi nahi likkhungi.i am very sad.

Sad pankhuri.
Thanks fr reading.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Neautiful my little angle
it was really nice
Precap is scary dear
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Super n compltly different concept dr...!!!!

Read it in one go...!!!!

Wow Prince n princess first meet was super dhasu...!!!

OMG riya single handedly fought with all those goons...!!!

Awww her parents choose Arjun for her but didn't told her...wht if she rejected...!!!!

Wow the sword fighting btwn Arjun n Riya was rocking n cute...!!!!

OMG riya got slightly injured on her stomach in the war with Sik...!!! Awww Arjun bandaged her wound n kissed her to soothe her pain...!!!

Yaaayyy finally Ariya together finished that Sik...!!!!

Ariya moments were so adorable... Wow finally thy confessed their love to eachother...!!!!

Precap looks a bit scary...!!!!

Thanks for pm dr...!! Continue soon...!!!

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Awsome update..just loved it...plz continue soon.. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
very nice update...
hmm finally they are one..
continue soon pankhuri...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwsssmmm part
loved it
Ariya moments was sooo... romantic...
cont sooon
thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb part...
Ariya confession and then ahem ahem...
Well written
Precap is scary...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nahi nahi...pankhu dnr discontinue...
i knw how it feels..bt mai to kr rhi hu commnt...
aqww.. tom n jerry ...si cute..
uske baad... ahem ahem... finally...
precap sounds cool... jaldi updt ..

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