ArHi FF: Desert Heat#7 *Ch13, pg1 NEW Thd pg150!*

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divyansha

@div...

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#341

lovely dovely

go girls!!

let asr see uor heat in desrt 😉😉😉

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Great update as always. I like Sia she seems fun.

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Nkayani

@Nkayani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Loved the update.
Feel bad for zara hearing imrans story. I hope they get back together.
I cant wait to see what kushi has planned for arnav.

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

awesome update tina👏 👏 👏..absolutely beautiful...i loved it...and loved how this features not onlyaround arhi but also throws light on each and every member of the group...whether it's aman-maya...or sia-raj or imran-zara..loved reading about them...i hope those thick-headed men soon realize their love for their other half😆..and i hope imran and zara meet up soon..poor them...five years..my heart went out to them...and find someone for taj too😃...i'd love to see him in love😉..

as usual the best scene for me is arhi always!! their love, care, willingness to sacrifice for each other...the first part was so touching..👏..and it felt even more real with ur superb writing⭐️

khushi was running away from arnav because she thought she was responsible for arnav's life in danger..awww...and arnav was broken hearted because he thought khushi was afraid of him...and the way they tried to console each other😊..it was so so beautiful..👏

karnav wants khushi but still tells her that she's a child...and now khushi's all riled up and ready to show him that she's a woman😆..this should be fun!!😃..

and i love the bond between khushi maya and sia...hopefully zara will join the girl gang too...😃..

btw..do the last lines indicate that the singhs will no longer feature in the story? or will khushi reconsider keeping the promise given by her parents?

can't wait for the next update..update soon..😊

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

That was awesome! Aww she ran because she couldn't bear to lose him and too because of her! They are both more comfortable with eachother now they hve realised and accepted their feelings.

I'm totalling loving the new characters! Each have their own story to tell. Imrans story is so sad. That picture of Zara totally suits the character as the shy sweet girl. I cant believe she is still waiting for Imran. I hope they do meet eachother soon. Imran does deserve someone. It seems like all the others had their fair share of girls but he kept away for the sake of his first love. Awww

Khushi all dressed up will kill Arnav! I cannot wait for his reaction! He hasn't seen her dressed up so beautifully yet. He will be blown away!

Seems like they're might play a game of truth or dare maybe. Boys vs girls. Now that wil be interesting.

Anyways thanks for the pm and do continue soon.

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Wonderful, awesome and fab update.
I Absolutly adore this story...you will notice that i love all your work equally. You are one brilliant writer.

Poor Khushi got scared for Arnav and she blamed herself imagining all sorts of things could have happened to him but Arnav eliminated all her fears and showed her how much she means to him and he wants her as a man wants a woman...now that was sooo hot...their position, the heat in his eyes, hus husky voice and the passion all around, how could Khushi resist the pull they have for each other.

All the other characters sia, maya, raj, Aman, Imtan, taj and Zara they all have their own story to tell which will be interlinked in the story as the story progresse, zara and imran's story is so sad but I am sooo looking forward for these particular characters to make their proper entry in the story.

Khushi is not a child and she is going to prove it and she is preparing herself with all the immunition...ASR is definitely going be knocked off...can't wait to see his reaction when he sees her all decked up.

Will wait for the next chapter eagerly.
Thank you for the PM.

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shan68

@shan68

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Hi Tina. What a update yaar. That was awesome.

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Awesome update...
I simply loved it...
Oh khushi...he meant innocence of a child...not literally a child...
U really dont have a clue how much of a woman he considers u...
Just wait for his control to let loose n ull suffer...blush blush**
im soo curious...y does aman dislike or just shows so...maya...she really loves her...n moreover she can tell her their future...
Sia n raj r cute...potatoes huh...
Imran...that was unpredictable...poor zara...lol

simply amaizing...
Thanx for the pm...^_^

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ritzzzii

@ritzzzii

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#349

wow amazing amazing amazing update...i loved sia n raj...n was sad listening to imrans story...n hopefully maya will also get her love...cuming to arshi...finally khushi has let go of her past...n so excited about the precap...
so all in all simply loved the upadte...

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#350

res *unres*

Omg... tinaji awesome update👏

I knew that khushi was not only scared of him.. she was afraid of him and don't want him to be in danger because of her

Aww… such a sweet confession though of not love but their wants😳… gosh that was superb

Arnav wants her as a man wants woman and ah khushi's wide eyed.. I was just imagining that at that moment after his bold statement😆

Ooh arnav just called her child just to provoked her😉…. Coz he didn't kiss her that means he still keeping that promise he made that next time only khushi will initiate their kiss or act 😉

Let see what khushi will do as she is already in action by dressing like that

Like sia's nature and loved when she throws veggies on raj…. Oh so he is also not ready for marriage

Felt bad after hearing about Imran and Zara… indeed right girls or woman are more strong for their love then boys but Imran also must be suffering😭

Want to know what's going on khushi, the little minx mind😉

Continue soon😃

Edited by jas0308 - 12 years ago