Piya aaYe NA KR os - Page 6

Originally posted by: kriyaanshfreva

You Killed kria! Gandi! :P Great os! But last mein :( .

Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

aww sorry dear but next os mey happy wlaa but upar dekho piya aaya na i thought tum log samaz gye hogey i worked on this whole 2 week .still sorry but har story ki happy ending nhai hoti na

Originally posted by: kriyaanshfreva

Chill baba . Mereko pata tha end mein kuch aisa hi hoga! And mein bhi toh ek story likh rahi hun jiss mein meine pehle hi bol dia no happy ending 😆 . But ek question what happened to rey?I mean usska reaction? Isska koi aur part hain kya?

Originally posted by: dazzlingmanavi

super awsm

got really emotional while reading this

actually really didnt liked rey in this os...selfish person

beautifully written

Originally posted by: Luvkriyansh-anu

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Firstly me second yuppie *dhink chicka dhink chicka*...

🥳

Now coming to the update...

I am speechless...

I so freaking love this update...

It's beautifully written...

Loved the beinging she they entered... It was very well described... 👏

The terrace scene was amazing... Loved it...

I was damn sad when she died... But ... He realised his mistake... Which is more important... Because if that didn't happen he would have never realised... And she would have suffered all her life which would have pained her even more...

I love this update di... ❤️

I love all your works... ❤️ you're an maxing writer...

🤗

😊

~Anu~

Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya

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Aro bahut sad ending diya re tune
But awesome tha
Bura iss bat ka lag raha hai iska next update nahi milega
Chal koi baat nahi
Well come back

Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

<font color="#0000CC" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">ki kro song he esa tha ashiqui2 song m loving this movie song , movie also
then hwww already itney work hey to main kya kroo
iskey 2 part he decided they to done os hey
but soon new os ley kar augi
and thnku for welcome back hee
aroma</font>