Arhi FF: The Storm Thread 2--LINK TO THREAD 3 PG 147!

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

loved both the updates..
this update us really emotional..
u know I feel khushi should stop being so cold towards arnav..
she should give him a chance .
I feel bad for both of them

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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

loved it
khushi spemt her time with her family.
arnav is not taking care of himself
waiting for the next update

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

wonderful and emotional update...

loved it...

arnav has started to understand her true self...but some times some-things could not be undo even if u try ur best...

khushi became overwhelmed when she realised tht arnav called her buaji and amma for her only...and on plus she has seen frm last somedays he has been working soo hard so tht he could be with herat her need in hospital...but when ever she remember the truth of her marriage and his cruel treatment, his inhuman words for her...she understand tht may be he is doing all this in guilt, not out of love...

and this is where arnav hav no control of his self...his mistakes will keep on haunting him even if khushi forgive him for the things he did in past...

thnks for the PM dear...

m really surprised to see another update in 2-3 days...thnks for surprise...

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akaps

@akaps

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

A very emotional update. I liked the way Khushi thinks about them in the bathroom and her cold behavior towards Arnav is understandable.

Thanks for the PM

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mbobby2012

@mbobby2012

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

too emotional. I actually had tears in my eyes.

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

It's so heart breaking! Loved it!

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Shayzmin Ahmad

@Sugar_PlumXD

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

The end made me feel a weird sort of surprise... If that's what it is exactly :'-( feeling really very sad for Arnav .. Update soon

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

its difficult to forget bad memories which always hurt u, torture you. But when person who hurt u ready to,redeem,himself, then why not get a chance

how much we live in past...its may be easy but discomfort u get its hurts u everytime

arnav wants to redeem himself whole heartedly where he hurts her, he's one who always who saved her

I m always craved from Asr redeemption which never come...

but in ur story its too,difficult

both are hurting, ignoring their feelings

solace which they get with each other

they need time to think,abt their feeling...he hurt her no doubt but now he ready to amend things

with her he also suffering more than her now

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Your story can be best described as heart wrenchingly beautiful. Arnav is facing his redemption in the cruelest of ways, and Khushi is once again fighting the world to survive, but this time Arnav will be by her side to support her like he should. I can understand and empathise with Khushi who is quite rightly reluctant to forgive Arnav, but my heart goes out to this guy who always loses everything he loves dearly. He needs to work hard to prove his love, and I am hoping that Mumbai is a promising turning point in the relationship.

The pace of the story has been beautifully set, and you never fail to present an honest depiction of emotions and turmoil that the characters must be suffering, and although this story fills me with sadness, I have complete faith that this will get a happy arhi ending, and that we will get a beautiful rainbow at the end of the storm. As a soppy romantic can I please request that Khushi makes it through and you don't torture your readers with an untimely death?!

I look forward to reading more

Manreet :)