~~ReAlIzAtIoN~~A VrUsHaN TS~~ PART 3 UP.. - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
it was amazing :D thanks for the update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
magii just get up...hav u forgot tht u hav to update this...
get up maggii..
n ha i m giving u open damkii tht if u will nt update this ill start spaming ur post...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
R E S E R V E D
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Aww. Cute TS.. I loved Shan and his blushing in this one.. It was damn adorable<3

Sneha: she luks like a convex lens while u luk a concave one..

Vrinda: thnk u.. and wbu?? U bifocal'

🤣 🤣
Reminds me of my class 10th physics textbook. Nice story. Update soon. Wanna see VruShan romance.. 😳
And obviously, confession too. 😳
Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
awwe it was such a sweet os yaar!
yippie vrinda playing cupid very good! taliya taliya👏👏
n shan likes sneha hmm yeh kab hua?😕
but then vrushan ko vrinda to saath laegi hi!
beautiful os dear thanks 4 scrapping me!
please do continue soon!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
oh the os is just superb.,...
first os no one can tell its just perfect...
ur mind blowing...loved it...😉😆😃
first time m reading vrushan os as u written...😃😛
loved it...just superb...
as u know i dnt like vrushika bt this os is just superb...
waiting for next update...do update soon...😳😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Perfect!!!
First time something not on the characters but on the actors!!!!
Vrinda Sneha we too good!!
VruShan awww!!!!
Plz plz plz continue!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

hiii guys i'm late na..

hell no!! m not..

itna jaldi updt kar rahi hun..

and m cnvrtng this TWO SHOT INTO A THREE SHOT..

SO HIT LIKE AND COMMENT WARNA BHOOL JAO..

PM'S LATER..


PART DEDICATED TO VRUSHAN AKA BHAVIKA..

bhavi.. enjoy kar.. once more u have 2 wait...


PART TWO'

At sneha's place..

Vrinda: vrush.. have u ever been bfre here'

Vrush: ummm nops..

Vrinda: well u know what.. me aur shan to pura din idhar padhe rehte the pehle.. waise abhi bhi hote hi hai.. par pehle toh bohot zyada hi.. and shaan to bhool bhi gaya tha ke uska bhi koi ghar hai'

Vrush[jealous]: ya.. obviously..umm he likes sneha na..

Vrinda: chalo chalo shaan aaraha hai' jaldi chalte hai'

Vrush: haan..

Vrinda[in her mind]: plan 2 successful..

Vrush: god I am getting jealous now.. control vrush control..

[and she took a deep breath..]

Vridna observed this and laughed in her mind.. "karlo jitni bhi yoga karni ho.. kkaamm nahi aane wali.. abh tumhe rula ke to rahenge vrush baby..

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At sneha's door..

As soon as the door bell rang she took a deep breath and promised herself..

"tujhe ye karna honga sneha.. shan ke liye.. vrush ke liye..

And kuch bhi gadbad ki toh I know.. vrids mera murder4 hi kardengi."

As soon as she opened the door 2 see all the three standing there with completely contradict expressions she knew it.. 'vrinda played her part successfully.. now my turn.." she thought..

Before any1 could say anything a big hiii came out from sneha's mouth as she marched forward and hugged shan and gave him a peck on his cheeks..

Shan din't know how 2 react.. he was not able 2 understand why these 2 besties were bhaving so weird and tht too 2gthr..

He weirdly and coldly replied back "umm' ya hii' how u sneha..?"

"me.. I wasn't so well but now tht u have cum I'm gonaa be better than the best.."

Shaan was double shocked bcos sneha was the most sincere, unflirty , and not so comfy with such mushy mushy things..

"ummm.. hmmm ya sneha.. watssup?"

Sneha: nothing.. jst busy with my institute.. thnks 2 this LBT strike.. atleast 2 din chutti toh mili'

Shan: ya r8.. LBT strike..

Vrinda: ahem ahem.. I think sum1's frgttng tht even I am here'

Sneha: how can I frgt u moti..

Vrinda: hell am not moti..

Sneha: u r!!

Vrinda: I'm not..

Sneha: u r!!

Vrinda: and wat is the degree of comparison for me being moti..

Sneha: vrushika..

Vrinda: what???

Sneha: she luks like a convex lens while u luk a concave one..

Vrinda: thnk u.. and wbu?? U bifocal'

Sneha: u smart huh..

Vrinda: I know that.. u dnt need 2 always keep praising me..

Sneha: huh!! Idiot.. chal dokka nako firwus(marathi)..[bheja mat fira]

Vrinda: mam.. do u realize we still on the door..

Sneha: oh ya .. cum in..

[and sneha started moving in with a playful vrinda , confused shan and hurt vruhsika.. i.e vrinda did not welcome vrush or exchange any pleasantries with vrush'

Vrinda: kaay re sneha.. Marathi.. ?? tar eyk.. tu jast shaanpatti dakhwu nako..

Uchlun patkil ayichya gawat' (marathi) [what sneha?? Marathi huh?? Then listen.. don't show ur over smartness' utha ke pakungi maa ke gaaw me]

Sneha: ho ka?? Rahu de..[haan kyan?? Rehne de]

Vrinda: {ws about 2 say sumthing when'}

Shan[cutting vrinda]: bass karo girls.. pakao matt.. already bheja fir raha hai..

Vrinda: abhi se..

Shan: matlab?

Vrinda: kuch nai..

[Then in her mind]:bacchu abhi se bheja fir raha hai... yeh to sirf trailer tha.. picture abhi baaki hai mere dost..

Sneha[in her mind]: sorry shaan..tujhe realize karwane ke liye ye karna padhenga.. warna tu WE ARE JUST FRIENDS ki hi mala jhapte rahenga.. poor u.. tu vrinda ke palle padha hai.. aur usne mujhe nahi.. par Sharon rai prakash ko apne plan me milwaya hai.. beta tu bass bhagwaan se prathna kar kit tu sehen kar sakee'

Vrinda: so guys.. how do v start...?

Sneha: what??

Vrinda: vrushika's training session!! Huh!!

Sneha: oh yes.. haan hii vrushika

Vrush: hii sneha '

sneha: first let me get u guys sumthing..

Vrind: sure.. pet me chuhe daud rahe hai..

Sneha: chheee.. tere pet me aur kyan kyan hai..? yuks chuhe..

Vrindaa: bara ka[han han]' paka mat..

Sneha: shaan do u mind helping me in the kitchen..

Shaan: no.. not at all..

Sneha: cum with me then..

And they both went in the kitchen'

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Vrinda and vrushika settled down on the couch..

Vrinda: andar romance karne gaye hai dono love birds..

Vrushika gave her a fake smile and said:hmm ya..

Vrinda din't miss 2 undrstnd her fake smile.. and she laughed in her mind and said..

Vrinda[in her mind]: beta romance to tera set ho raha hai.. just wait and watch darling..

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Inside the kitchen:

Shaan was doing sumthing hile sneha was removing bottles from fridge..

Sneha: shaan.. u like her na??

Shaan was taken back by this sudden shocking question.. actually the truth was tht he already was surprised by vri-ha 's behavior and this sudden question..

Shaan: who??

Sneha: ban mat' u know whom I'm talking about.. vrushika'

Shaan: NOOO.. WE ARE JUST FRIENDS'

Sneha: okk.. bol jhooth jitna bolna hai..

Shaan: sacchi.. WE ARE JUST FRIENDS'

Sneha: theek hai.. maine kahan na bola. Chal chalte hai.. bahar humara wait kar rahe hai dono..

Shann: yes..

Sneha while coming out[in her mind]: hmm.. vrinda was right.. ye toh we r just friends ki hi mala jap raha hai' she's smart huh'

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After a while..:

Sneha: chalo.. now lets get started..

Vrush: as u say..

Sneha: okk'. lets start with a fight thing'

Vrush: okk

Sneha: okk.. u have 2 fight with shan aka swayam..

Vrush: ummm'

Sneha: u have 2 slap him first and then show him the Sharon rai prakash attitude..

Vrush: SLAP HIM!!😲

Sneha: yess'🥱

Vrush: I cant!!

Sneha: why??

Vrush: hmmm I just can't..

Sneha: u had slapped him in one if the epi's..

Vrush: ya but then'

Sneha: no buts and wuts.. u have 2 matlab u have 2..

Shaan: maarde vrushi.. warna ye dono tujhe chodenge nahi..

Vrush: but shaan..

Shaan: no yaar.. u dnt know her.. wo nahi manengi..

Vrush: ummm k..

Sneha: so get set go..

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After some more time while:

Vrinda: scene 1' take 1.. start!!

Vrush tried 2 slap shaan but all in vain.. while she raised her hand 2 slap him she closed her eyes and bent her head..

Vrinda: cut it..

Sneha: what u doing vrush??

Vrush: sorry but I got scared'

Sneha: once more..

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After several tries also vrush couldn't slap shaan..

Sneha: urrghhh cut it!! What are u upto vrush.??

Hell are u doin???

Stop being a loser.. now I understand why D3 trp's are falling down..

Tht was it.. vrush could not take it any more.. but she is not a 'u tell me 1 I tell u 11 type girl' so she just ran away from there with tears in her eyes..

Shaan: HELL.. sneha'!!why are u guys insulting her so much..

And who on this earth gives u the authority 2 blame her for the falling TRP's'

Stop behaving like some bitchy bimbos'

Sneha and vrinda kept starring him with wide eyes and open mouth'

And after 2 minutes when he stopped..

Suddenly..

.

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.

.

.

.

.

Both sneha and vrinda burst out laughing like anything..

Sneha:look at him man' ye toh gabbar ban gaya..

Vrinda: gabbar huh!! Gabbar nahi mogembo..

Sneha: look at this puppy sick lover..

Vrinda: lucky vrush..

Shaan was now super shocked..

He wasn't able 2 understand what was going on?

He wasn't able 2 undrstnd what these 2 girls were upto??

Sneha: vrinda' y on this earth do u think a guy would f8 with his old very good friend for a new just friend?😲

Vrinda: ummm' kyan bolu snehu.. shayad yehi hai pyaar??😆

And they burst out laughing again looking at shaan's ANGRY WHAT expression..

Sneha: shaan.. apni shakal dekhi hai.. ??

Shaan: kyaaan?

Vrinda: uspe likha huwa hai that u love her..

Shaan: who?

Vrinda+sneha: U DONKEY..

Vrinda: who else/?

Sneha: vrushika..

Shaan suddenly started blushing hard.. which did not go from being noticed by vrinda and sneha..

Sneha: look sum1's blushing..

Vrinda: swayam shikhawat ka thoda toh asar honga hi na shantanu maheshwari pe'

And both the girls popped out of the seat and started tickling him..

Shaan:"girls matlab this was another of u'r pranks.. seedhe se nahi kar bata sakte the..

Sneha: maine toh pucha tha.. tum hi v r just friends ki mala jhap rahe the..

Vrinda: so sadhu baba.. finally u r in love..

Sneha: okk shaan.. tell me.. din me kitne time vrush ko yaad karte ho..

Vrinda: uske kitne sapne dekhta hai..

Shaan[blushing]: nothing girls.. shut up..

Vrinda+sneha: awww.w'..

Shan:urghh'

Vri+sne: now go..

Shan: where???

Vrin+sne:

Shaan: nw what??

Vrinda: humne aapki lady love ko itna jalaya hai taaki bhi realize ho ki wo aapse pyaar karti hai..

Sneha: aur isiliye hum dono ne itna rude aur weird bhave karke usse bohot dard diya..

Vrinda: haayeee'.

Shaan: tum log nahi sudhronge..

Vrinda: jabh tak tere jaise losers iss duniya me rahenge tabh tak toh nahi..

Shaan: me looser hun..

Vrinda: yes..

Shaan: to tu dumb hai..

Vrinda: me dumb hun.??

Shan: yess..

Vrinda: hoooww.. m dumb.. toh tu

sneha[cutting her]: basss guys...

sneha: shaan tu ja vrush ro rahi thi usko mana..

and vrinda tu chup reh samjha..

vrinda: haan haan.. humesha me hi chup rahu na...

sneha: vrindu... please baby...

shaan: theek hai sneha.. me jaata hun vrush ke paas.. tu is psycho ko sambhal..

and he ran away and bfre vruinda could catch him sneha held her so that there could be some peace..

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THE END...

PRECAP: SHER SAARI MASTI AND LOTS OF ROMANCE..

NEXT PART KE LIYE 7-8 PAGES COMMENTS..

WARNA UPDAT BHOOL JAO..

PM'S LATER..

Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yayy M first ! nd before ur pm...🥳
Lemme Read it bebe 😉
Res./Unres.

Oh My God...Mehek 🤣 me haste haste pagal ho gya ye padhke.. 😆
very nice..But Tumne Bahut Insult ki h meri vrushika ki ..Not Fair...i know it was necessary..but.. to bhi I loved Vrinda nd sneha They R too much..i loved innocent shantanu..but he is dumb...vrushika is so sweet yr why u insulted her...abhi iss update me jitna insult kiya h na next update utna hi VruShan Romance chahiye u get that ?? Heheh Samji na ? 😆 😛 I want Kisses..nd lots of lovable moments...bcoz meri vrushika ko aaj tumne bahut rulaya h..i love that vrinda nd sneha knok -jhok 🤣 That Marathi n all..ROFL... 😆 I just loved it totally...nd u converted this in 3 shots...Nice 👍🏼 This is something really very different...i loved it so much Nd i m ahppy that i commented on it first..nd that too without PM.. 🥳 Update Soon..Keep Rocking...
Edited by Karan_TaaRey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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finally read that full!phew!
it was amazing yaar!
waise pm se pehle hi update hua hai yeh dekh lia tha😉 but usse mai bahut araamse pad rahi thi
oohho vrinda-sneha marathi talk-kharach!😃 kai sangtes tu?😆
i really loved every bit of this ts
vrinda is just awesome miss bubbly kahinki!
and uparse simple turned naughty sneha kja tadka waah bhai bhai waah!
loved tanha's kitchen talk great!
lolzz n wo concave,convex,bifocal waala joke to too much tha!
please do continue soon!😊


Edited by nuckts - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Ok I know I didn't read the first part , so two posts for that.
Chapter 1:
Great, loved Vrinda Di playing cupid, Sneha Di was cute too, that blah blah thing * well almost every girl does that 😆 * was cute
And Shan bhaiya was also, what Vrushika Di thought , a sweetheart * 😳 *

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