Stranded On An Island... : Chap.6 UPDATE *COMPLETE* - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome chapter tasneem
Really loved it
Stranded on island that to scary one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very very interesting story and concept.

I love the idea of a mysterious island with Arshi exploring it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
thank u for the pm...funny story...lovely update...as for now let me go and read your other works...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*TEASER*

"What…?" he asked innocently.

"You're unbelievable you know…!" she said, hugging him to her.

Just as she was about to say some more, she looked behind, only to see a tall figure in black disappear into the island within seconds.

She looked forwards curiously, only to realize her heart was accelerating with fear. She broke out of her embrace and looked at Arnav's worried face.

"Arnav…I swear I just saw something move behind that tree over there…" she whispered.

Arnav turned around to look but was suddenly blinded by a sharp light coming towards their direction. He covered his eyes only to see Roy wave over at them, alerting them to come back into their little camp site.

Arnav nodded and tangled his fingers with Khushi's and pressed her towards his side and walked back over to their little tent.


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~Will be Updated Tomorrow~

Edited by epicperson7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am reading Tina's story..it is more like Kaho na pyaar hai situation while yours is like a Titanic situation.( I am saying only wrt how the problem starts and in Tina's case how they get separated).i am enjoying reading two stories simultaneously coz both have the same base line but are still different.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Thanks alot for this amaizing update:)
Really loved it:)
Awsome:))
Thanks alot for the PM:-)
Will be waiting for next update:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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TEASER UP NOW...! (First post on this page)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heyyy awesome teaser
Plzzz update sooo.
Love this story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 4 : Of Mysterious Islands & Jealousy...

*Not Proof-Read*
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Placing her foot on the smooth feel of the pristine white sand, Khushi stood staring at the reflected moonlight in awe. To think that the wide streak of clear light expands to various seas left her wondering how beautiful her view could get.

Just as she was about to close her eyes to smell that unique scent of the ocean, she felt warm arms embrace her from behind. She settled into the welcoming warmth, laying her head on his chest while he engulfed her into a tight hug.

"What are you thinking about Love…?" whispered Arnav, his husky voice sending chills down her back.
She shook her head and said "Nothing, just looking out towards the sea…look how beautiful the ocean is tonight Arnav…"

"Baby for me, there's nothing or no one more beautiful than you are…so don't even try to change my opinion…" he said while pressing a kiss on her temple.

Khushi giggled and said "Arnav…? Are you scared..?"

"About…?"

"You know, this entire thing, living on this deserted island for the next couple of days, with complete strangers…?"

"Nah…I have you…what else do I need…?" he breathed into her neck.
"Is it just me or are you just extra romantic today…?"

"Sweetheart, I think you need to understand the fact that I'm 'extra' romantic all the time! Unfortunately, my wife is too bust attending my family that she doesn't pay any attention to her poor husband…" he pouted.
Khushi turned around and looped her arms around his neck and placed a firm kiss on his forehead and whispered "Baby…! You know that I love you right…? And what do you mean; I don't pay attention to you…?"

He pecked her lips and pulled her closer to his chest and laid his head on top of hers and said "I was only kidding Khush…! What I meant was that it's nice spending time with you…just you…alone, without any interruptions…"

"We're not technically alone yeh know! We have around 15 other people with us…" she pointed out, pressing a kiss on his nose.
He kissed her fingers and said "Well, that is true but unlike our family, there not gonna bug us every 5 seconds, we can make out in front of them and not worry about getting interrupted…!"
"Arnav!"

"What…?" he asked innocently.
"You're unbelievable you know…!" she said, hugging him to her.
Just as she was about to say some more, she looked behind, only to see a tall figure in black disappear into the island within seconds.

She looked forwards curiously, only to realize her heart was accelerating with fear. She broke out of her embrace and looked at Arnav's worried face.

"Arnav…I swear I just saw something move behind that tree over there…" she whispered.
Arnav turned around to look but was suddenly blinded by a sharp light coming towards their direction. He covered his eyes only to see Roy wave over at them, alerting them to come back into their little camp site.
Arnav nodded and tangled his fingers with Khushi's and pressed her towards his side and walked back over to their little tent.

They noticed that all of their yacht mates were gathered around a small fire, cuddling up to their comforters.
They smiled over at Arnav and Khushi as they proceeded to sit beside everybody else.
As Khushi pressed herself closer to Arnav's side, he noticed that she was shivering.

He wrapped his arms around her and whispered "You okay baby…?"
She swallowed and said "Arnav…I'm scared…"

"Sssh…it's okay, I'm with you…I won't let anything happen…" he kissed her softly and let her snuggle into him even more. He wrapped their warm, fuzzy comforter around them and pressed a soft kiss on her forehead.

"Arnav…?"


"Hmm..?"

"Do you think it's true…?" asked Khushi.

"What is…?"

"That this Island is haunted…?"

"Oh come on Khushi! You really believe that…?"

"You never know Arnav…!"

As the continued to bicker, they didn't notice a peculiar man glance over towards them in pure envy, cursing his bad luck.

Roy looked towards the beautiful woman lying down beside ASR, her name was Khushi…his wife.

He had been very interested in her the whole night but when he found out that she was ASR's wife, he had to take a back seat; he didn't want to mess with ASR. Yet, he couldn't stop admiring her beauty.
The warm glow spreading across her face made his smile with joy. Oh how he wished she was his!

Roy liked the idea of getting stranded on an island with this woman. After all, he would do anything to have her. His only issue was the fact that she was married to Arnav Singh Raizada, get onto his bad side and be prepared to die. ASR also seemed very possessive of his wife, well then again, with a beauty like that, who wouldn't be protective…!

Roy Philips…the one man everybody dreamed of becoming. He was handsome, suave and successful. Everybody wanted to be him, well that is until they met Arnav Singh Raizada….

Roy was impeccably good looking yet the women craved for someone who was clearly taken. And that is exactly where Roy's plan comes into mission…

Born and brought up in the Bahamas, Roy was determined to succeed in life. He didn't believe in love and infatuation but then he laid his eyes on Khushi. Roy craved for her in ways he didn't know existed.

The only little fact he didn't know was that he was messing with ASR's property, and that meant bad things. But he was prepared for it all…!
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As they lay cuddled against each other, with Khushi's head pressed against Arnav's chest, she snuggled deeper into his arms popping a kiss onto his jaw.

Arnav sighed and whispered "Can't sleep too….?"
She giggled and nodded against his neck. Arnav turned her over so that they lay spooning each other. He moved her hair aside and pressed a warm, loving kiss onto the back of her neck and snuggled more into her.

"I love you…" he murmured.

She clutched his arms and pulled them more in front of her so that she was cocooned into his embrace and whispered "I love you too…I don't even care that there's a possibility of not getting back home…You are my home Arnav…I just don't care anymore…"

He tightened his hold on her and buried his face into her neck while she took pleasure in the welcoming warmth of his body.

"I wish we were alone…." He murmured.
"Hmmm…if we were, there would be much more things done than this…" she teased.
He grinned against her neck and said "Someone's getting naughty I see….Me loves a bold Mrs.Raizada…!"

"Shut up Arnav…!"

She turned around to face him and placed an effortless kiss onto his lips. What was once a soft, goodnight kiss soon turned into a passionate, warm, mind numbing kiss. Arnav moaned with the feel of her soft lips against his mouth. He nibbled onto her lower lip and plunged his tongue into her mouth.

She groaned at the heady feeling his lips were creating, he ran his hands all over her body, knowing just where to touch. It was passionate havoc being created…

She moved her lips down towards his neck and let her hands seep through his shirt, feeling his hard, well built abs against her hands.
She was desperate to continue but Arnav slowly pulled away smiling softly at the pout formed on his wife's face.
"I want you so much…" he mumbled, pressing kisses along her face.
"Take me Arnav…I want you so bad too…" she sighed.
He pulled away, grinned mischievously and said "Let's go then…"
"What…? Where?" she asked curiously.
"Do you trust me…?"
"That was the most idiotic question you've ever asked me…Of course I do!"
"Then come on..!"

Taking her hand, he quietly climbed out of their tent and helped her get out as well. Slowly tip toeing towards the trees in the background, he signaled her to hold his hand tightly and not let go.
Clutching his arm tightly, Khushi forced herself to forget about her fear of darkness but somehow, she just could not do it.

Arnav looked over at Khushi who was shaking with fear. Closing his eyes as he remembered her fear, he pulled her closer to him and picked her up in his arms. "Sssh…it's okay…just hold me tight and everything will be okay…"

Nodding at his request, she hid her face into the crook of his neck and wrapped her arms tightly around him and closed her eyes.

Walking quietly through the throng of various sized trees, Arnav smiled at the approaching view. He slid down carefully making sure Khushi was okay, and walked over towards the ocean.

He placed her down on the clear white sand and whispered "Open your eyes baby….look around…"
Opening her eyes cautiously, she glanced around her surroundings in awe and smiled triumphantly over at Arnav and hugged him closer to her. The clear blue waters shining beautifully towards the couple reflected the joy and peace they were at.

"Oh my god baby! This is beautiful…!" she whispered.

"I know right…!"

It was their own private beach…along the beautiful island…..

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-Tasneem :)

Edited by epicperson7 - 12 years ago

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