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Today is my double treat! First u updated like back to back n gave meee the parts I wanted!!!! I'm doing zoobi doobi... Pam para ... Zoobi doobi parampaaa...
Thank uuu!!!!
Now coming back to critic
I'm so freaken in LOVE with the naughty boy inside the good boy!!!
HE SPANKED HER ON HER BUTT!
R u serious??? Did I just readdd that??i was like hawww... Re read it just to make sure I read it rite.. N then Burst out of laugh...
She was about to do the same but u bad writer! Screw u hahahahha
Best part!!!!! His teasings eeeksss I LOVEEE themmm u wrote them perfectly..
The cafe scenes u described I literary felt like I was being manvi.. I was sooo connected to the story that I went inside n just visualized everything...
"don't bite ur lips... It's very distracting!!!!!" u know what I'm thinking??! He'll ya u do know Wat I'm thinking SO BETTER FULFILL IT SOON!
He is on the track jut need a little push so he can show his emotions cuz he was very much mesmerized at her attire!!! VERY HOT!!!!!! Hahaha
Love the stage performance...
N the kisss HE DID It!!! DId it... Yes he did...
"asexual"?? I died laughing at that word!!! Oh god my stomach hurst so bad!!!!!!!!!
Just a confusion did she vomit on him??? Or outside the window? If on him them ewww kaminiii ceee
Now desire list! Speaking of desires u said dreams r secret desire cool yes it's true so virat better fulfill the desire!!!
Want virat to get jealous like very very jealous hook up manvi with a hot boy!!!! Bring a old friend or watevaaa stipper will work tooo! Let her go wild...
I want drunk angry furious virat!!! He will drive fat n stuff!!!
I want manvi's dream to come trueee
She better be in bikini lmafoo
Oh yes I want manvi to screw the project of viraaat so it can bring a extra effect to the angry man... She will plead but he won't listen therefore she will be mad tooo cuz it was by mistake...
U have showed virat understand her... But I don't want that show the other way around make her feel bad n mad toward him
Like I said I want a powerful entry!
When he will be frustrated enter simmi n pacify virat
Maybe on same bad hahaha but it will e a trick' break manvi's heart'nn
I want manvi to take him to shopping where he will have a meeting but she will keep the phn on silent n he won't get any notification u know masala...
^ First stage of getting angry at her!! Make it extreme...
And tenn lastly... Calm that roaring tiger with alll love j passion n satisfy our besharam mind'n
Deal? Now update soon ok
When I will find something else thn I will add till thn see yaaa
Thank uuu!!!!
Now coming back to critic
I'm so freaken in LOVE with the naughty boy inside the good boy!!!
HE SPANKED HER ON HER BUTT!
R u serious??? Did I just readdd that??i was like hawww... Re read it just to make sure I read it rite.. N then Burst out of laugh...
She was about to do the same but u bad writer! Screw u hahahahha
Best part!!!!! His teasings eeeksss I LOVEEE themmm u wrote them perfectly..
The cafe scenes u described I literary felt like I was being manvi.. I was sooo connected to the story that I went inside n just visualized everything...
"don't bite ur lips... It's very distracting!!!!!" u know what I'm thinking??! He'll ya u do know Wat I'm thinking SO BETTER FULFILL IT SOON!
He is on the track jut need a little push so he can show his emotions cuz he was very much mesmerized at her attire!!! VERY HOT!!!!!! Hahaha
Love the stage performance...
N the kisss HE DID It!!! DId it... Yes he did...
"asexual"?? I died laughing at that word!!! Oh god my stomach hurst so bad!!!!!!!!!
Just a confusion did she vomit on him??? Or outside the window? If on him them ewww kaminiii ceee
Now desire list! Speaking of desires u said dreams r secret desire cool yes it's true so virat better fulfill the desire!!!
Want virat to get jealous like very very jealous hook up manvi with a hot boy!!!! Bring a old friend or watevaaa stipper will work tooo! Let her go wild...
I want drunk angry furious virat!!! He will drive fat n stuff!!!
I want manvi's dream to come trueee
She better be in bikini lmafoo
Oh yes I want manvi to screw the project of viraaat so it can bring a extra effect to the angry man... She will plead but he won't listen therefore she will be mad tooo cuz it was by mistake...
U have showed virat understand her... But I don't want that show the other way around make her feel bad n mad toward him
Like I said I want a powerful entry!
When he will be frustrated enter simmi n pacify virat
Maybe on same bad hahaha but it will e a trick' break manvi's heart'nn
I want manvi to take him to shopping where he will have a meeting but she will keep the phn on silent n he won't get any notification u know masala...
^ First stage of getting angry at her!! Make it extreme...
And tenn lastly... Calm that roaring tiger with alll love j passion n satisfy our besharam mind'n
Deal? Now update soon ok
When I will find something else thn I will add till thn see yaaa
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
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