Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15

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itsfate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

awesome update

excited for next part

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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bluebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

really? thanks! these updates are going to be a shorter than my other stories but i will try to update frequently..thanks for the comment again🤗

Originally posted by: GayathriKKB
I just saw you username and just jumped in! 😛 I am so much in love with your stories all soo virmanish!! Ok now here goes another good one! Now this concept is really rare! Ohh mine and maanvi's behavior is just too cool! Hilarious too! 😆 Virat was married to maanvi's sister...hmmm... I can sense the formula going wrong somewhere! 😛
Ok now i cant wait for the next part!! Continue soon anu!! 😃

Ok the moment i posted this comment u posted the next part! You know i just did a mini stage perfomance here! 😆 I was so excited to read!!
Oh mine!! Maanvi!!! She is just tooo cuteee!!!! She is very direct and doesnt hide things! Its like she really wants to give virat all those happiness he have been deprived of till now in his life. And virat...Awww he is hurt and sad! This whole thing is just too exciting!! I wanna read and read and read more! Ok i am being greedy! 😛
Will wait for the next update!! 😃

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roshreb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

so finally virman is married 😃

but still i don't like the fact that he was married before aur woh bhi mannu ki behen se 😔

but im sure u'l bring some great twist into virman life ..

but im loving this concept... loving the contrast of manvi n virat's character

waiting for next update..but before that i want addicted 😛

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bluebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

yep! okay! aapka hukum sir ankon pe 😉

Originally posted by: roshreb
so finally virman is married 😃

but still i don't like the fact that he was married before aur woh bhi mannu ki behen se 😔

but im sure u'l bring some great twist into virman life ..

but im loving this concept... loving the contrast of manvi n virat's character

waiting for next update..but before that i want addicted 😛

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome..~!!!

Part 1: Maanvi leads a smiple theory to accept things as it comes, rather then cribbing...Which is WOW..~!!! I was shocked for some time...Virat and Simmi...but then I was glad her exit has already happened...n now Maanvi is ok getting married...being honest is very nice...u get good things if u ask for it...so she did it...Which Superb..~!!!

Part 2: Lovely Once again..~!!! Parents actually got them married.. Maanvi is on the face..which makes her more lovable..but at the same time..Virat going through a turmoil..which is quit obvious he was already married...but reading the description carefully...Can we actually get a good surprise...😆

But Maanvi wouldn't give up shez full of life,..which he wouldn't be able to ignore for long...in short Awesome ...!!! Thnks for the PM Anu..~!!!

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Anu dis was fab.. I just loved it.. read both parts togthr. Omg.. Cant wait for next update.. plz continue soon..!!!

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SNTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

again awesome update...i m loving maanvi more and more and this story is really different...waiting for next...:)))

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virmanhus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

when part one was filled with hillarious moments,, this one carried alot of sentiments..

i becam a duffer along with mannu, poor virat he had been thinking of simmi...

''Virat is a sweetheart'' ofcoz he is.. i just loved his sweetness, calmness & love for the one who left him.. he lost his family & is seeking love, a person who deserved to be loved,, how can someone leave him for their ambition?? i wonder wat has got to dat simmi..

''Small little things like eating together, celebrating birthdays, festivals, small little rituals and customs that people of this super-sonic-jet-fast generation forget mean a world to him.'' dat was so sweet dii,, i love this virat equally like i love manvi.. when ur last update spoke about manvi, this spoke alot about virat.. & yeah my queen of description,,''super sonic jet fast generation" so true & damn applicable.

i have the opinion he loves mannu,, ur butterscotch example revealed so.. is he hiding something??

'' I didn't think twice about it, I readily agreed. Not out of sympathy or guilt or anything, I genuinely like him and I was nothing but selfish to be 'his' when I did have the opportunity'' i liked this frank manvi,, she doesnt love him,, she has a crush on him & she likes him,, she has adored the way he has been a husband to her sister, has studied his history & gained the fact that he is craving for love,, she wants to give him the love & warmth but still dere's a kid version hiding in her for which virat is unable to accept her, he's trying to be protective, is judging him wrong as a not so gud husband dats y he told dat he tried to ba a gud husband to manvi's sister, he feels dat manvi deserves someone better & must experience love.. dats lovely.. dey are kind of equally adomant & stubborn souls..

u revealed manvi's kiddish behaviour by giving her mom's advice to call him viratji,then again where she pulls her veil on her bhabi's instruction, wen she questions her mom for how long she has to stay like this,, her every move & question is from her heart, she doesnt find it weird or kiddish, she doesnt get it that she is supposed to be shy & blushing,though she's married she still behaves like a kid, thats so awesome.. u are in track not to spoil her bubbly character dat u showed in part 1. WOW!! for that..

typical wife's possessiveness was there with mannu wen she looked for the photo frame thinking of him as hers now..

& yeah manvi reasoned in a childishway why she got married to virat thru the following dialogue was sweet & adorable ''He says and shows me how to, like I have never seen how an AC work before. This is why I married this guy, inspite of all this non-cooperative movement of his, he doesn't forget about small little things about other people."

i mean her thoughts are so PURE & carries alot of innocence,, heavenly diii great characterisation (OMG im admiring ur flow,, how come u are managing different characters of manvi, i mean addicted, umbrella, sacha pyar, two left feet & now this,, they are poles apart, i will faint now!!)

and the last part mahnnn,, u must be awarded!! what was dat???? typical bad mind of us,, dat convo between the couple,, goddd i was like, ''lady, u can be childish but u shudnt be so stupid enough to blurt out nonsense,, u are being too frank,, u are embarassing & shocking him'' BUTTT diii wat a moment,,,, she was talking about mehendi???? & the most interesting part is, she didnt get why he was so shocked at her questions???

wen she said

''Well, mom said, we should do something today…more like you should be doing something'' &

'"oh come on..you have been married once, don't you know?"

i was laughing like thinking dat she was too bold

i was able to see the shocked virat,, mann u turned out all the situation opposite,, master brain!!!! u are damn creative, full of surprises & twists,,, unbelievable!!

my evil mind says simmi to come back & give a bang to all 3 persons life..😡

i never expected a hillarious, fun filled & emotionilled update from u at this time,, i mean handling other stories in a row,, but felt awesome in reading this,, lovely concept, or i shud say very Different one.. again perfect, flawless characterisation!! do continue soon, thanks for two updates in a day..

love u loads..❤️

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Afshan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Omg amazing anu!
Tis piece is really out of the blue
lovd it

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Ur name is enough to drive me crazy to read the story at this hour of night, and guess wat? M superbly satisfied with the whole concept and excited about manvi's next step.. Come on girl update asap.

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