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Another interesting story eh, nice work Khushi's character reminded me of the time I was obsessed with reading books. Found the Mr. Mud-cake reference hilarious! And something tells me that this Mr Mudcake will be there for her when she needs him most ;). Another reference that made me😆 was Shyam's and when she said how could anyone find those snake eyes attractive. So with her there you have a knack for picking your characters and attracting a sudden liking or dislike towards them. In this story it was like "hate at first sight" this is exactly the feeling you created for me ok maybe not hate but being creeped out. Shyam is so damn good at being a creep that it is not hard to imagine him like that!😆 Great chapter, thanks heaps for the email! You have said stay tuned for more so I am all tuned in hehe bring it on!😛
