Arshi FF |*|Crack In Stone Heart|*| *UPDATE* CH 12 Pg 63 13/6

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arshina223

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Hina69
Awesome!

I am sure lavanya is only going to bring them closer as Arnav is not going to buy any of her accusations or claims now cos his mind is clear of what he wants now...He wants khushi back at any cost...Thats why he is ought to woo her back by building the trust again which he shattered once by losing control over his desires.

AWW thank u for posting this GIF file.
I sooo liked this promo!!! 😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Arshina ji -- you writing style has changed. And I am LOVING the change. Fantastic chapter! That is my fav promo too, and you have used it well. Loved the last scene. Lavanya saw it!! 😃 Great!!

I have two complaints - The chapter is too short! And me want the next update soon! B/c of the time gap between the chapters, it's hard to keep track. Can u update this quick pileej? This is my fav among ur stories.

I'm late, but still --- Happy new year!

Edited by aruni50218 - 11 years ago

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arshina223

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: aruni50218
Arshina ji -- you writing style has changed. And I am LOVING the change. Fantastic chapter! That is my fav promo too, and you have used it well. Loved the last scene. Lavanya saw it!! 😃 Great!!

I have two complaints - The chapter is too short! And me want the next update soon! B/c of the time gap between the chapters, it's hard to keep track. Can u update this quick pileej? This is my fav among ur stories.

I'm late, but still --- Happy new year!

Happy new year to u tooo..
I will try to update soon. promise!
My writing style has changed! How? please elaborate. just curious! 😊

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Nice update. Poor Khushi is a confused soul right at this moment. I wish Arnav talks to her directly. It might help them both. Loved Arnav's care for her. I know Arnav will be there for Khushi if lavanya tries to harm her. Hope the next update will come soon. Thanks for the PM :)

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Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: arshina223

Happy new year to u tooo..
I will try to update soon. promise!
My writing style has changed! How? please elaborate. just curious! 😊

Just felt that way. In the latter half of the chapter... it has more narrative feel, rather than reporting what u see. U can feel what Arnav is feeling without you directly saying it in words.

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing
thanks for the pm

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Loved the update beautifully done i to loved that promo the Asr in it was untouchable their was a hint of cruelty on his face and pain wanting you to run your hands and try to wipe it away loved the update Khushi watching him walk away not knowing it was her at his foot and then her not understanding what she is feeling and what to expect of him and her fainting in the office loved his reaction when he realized she had not eaten and then him feeding her with his own hands loved it and the witch la watching them awesome update thanks for the pm.

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Hina malik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: arshina223

AWW thank u for posting this GIF file.
I sooo liked this promo!!! 😊

Yup Me too, You mentioned na that you love this lift promo and that office scene where he put foot on the paper...Hayyeee me tooo love 'em sooo much!!!!

Your welcome. I am glad you liked it..Btw credit goes to google😆

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

amazing update

thanks for the pm

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kamtokdin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

I have always felt that the collapsing building episode was one of the most important scenes in ipk. Glad that you took it from there n make it your own.