i just read this ff from start till the last update and i am going to comment on it as a whole and not chapter wise.
there are just two people i like in this story one being lavanya, and the other being khushi.
lavanya because people like her are the people who make this world a better place, a place where ethics are if not valued at least are taught to the youngsters even if its just for the sake of teaching it. to me she is the women of strength of character, respecting the boundaries of marriage is not easy and not at all easy when these are the boundaries of you love's marriage to someone else. she defines that shame n character are not about the clothes you wear but about the acts you do. salute.
khushi raizada because she is trying to make the best of a bad condition without giving up much of what she is. the fact that this relationship is important to her yet only within certain boundaries is wht a women of today shld be as per me and khushi defines that.
and now coming to those who i dont like in this story, the family and arnav.
family because despite of living in 21st century are unaware the coercion is illegal. moreover tht nosy of the sister of his have the audacity of looking in to his room to check it out for any sign of intimacy. yeah sure miss it isnt two people having heart, mind and feeling who you got married to each other but just some harmonal animal who will do the deed because the can so they shld. why cant you people understand that its the feelings that define the relationship and not the realtionship tag that defines feelings.
arnav singh raizada when i think of wht i want in my man tht fact tht i want him to be actualy a man and not a spineless crawling insect is the essential underlying requirement. if you did not had the guts to stand up for ur love thn u shouldn't have loved. and dnt u dare give me this crap of "pyaar kia nahie jata ho jata hai" because darling "pyaar khud na bhud bach nahie jata, usey mehnat kar k bachaya jata hai"
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