ARSHI OS: The Suited Man - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: -Shobhu21-

I dont mean to sound rude, but I love the OS the way it is ! Not that Im gonna complain if you write more, but Im not gonna pester you to write more either !

And as for the OS, I loved it. One from Khushi's perspective are always different and nice to read.. And the way she notices everything about Arnva, how could she have missed that he has been noticing her all along ;) And I loved their conversations in the life, the little one line from Arnav and then Khushi's emotions that you describe. wonderful ! And the end, couldnt have been any better !

Loved the OS !

PS: I might change my opinion on a continuation... how about one on similar lines, but instead of Khushi's perspective we get what Arnav's perspective is ? Pwease ?


I disagree. That's not rude at all! I'm very happy you feel that way. Some stories should end just as how they were intended. But I shall think about writing a continuation. We'll see! ;) Thanks for your lovely comment!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Wow...that was quite beautiful ya... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Oh my God.

Arnav akash's driver **let me get over that**😆
But such a beautiful OS simple and sweet.

I loved it BAS...had a big smile at the end of it.
You should do this more often and surprise us..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Awww tho cuuuttteee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Am swoooning here... <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: gungun24

Its really nice!!!

Really good Os



that was a really good OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Adorable os
thanks for the pm
Twinkle
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
hun this was awesome from start to finish had to read the last part a couple times to get his occupation then it clicked he's Akash's chauffeur haina or am I still in an illusion please do continue this however you like adding this to my My Favourite OS's
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
a new concept indeed
i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
The Arnav we are used to has always been the rich, suave hero. Nice to see a different take on him... Where his clothes are probably similar but definitely without the bank balance. And he still finds his true love... Khushi kumari Gupta. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Lvd it
thanks for d pm

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