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Sorry for the late comments

Chapter 36

Fabulous update & thanks for the PM 🤗

Part 1

Loved the way you portrayed the thoughts of both Arnav & Khushi

Arnav not wanting to rush since he felt that she must be nervous as it was new & the first time to her shows how understanding he is & how sweetly he gives equal importance to his wife's comfort & feelings……he's admirable 👏

Khushi not stopping Arnav allowing him to do as he pleases though she felt shy & all new to her since she wanted to share her beautiful night with him was well framed

Khushi complimenting his eyes reminding him about their first sweet blooming kiss was lovely 😊

Arnav asking Khushi's permission was sweeet ❤️

I enjoyed the whole update but the most striking & funniest line was "No privacy in this house. I have to get her married soon"

Arnav chiding the tailor for inefficiently 😆 😆 😆 stitching the blouse was hilarious

Arnav moving to the next level of pleasing his wife thinking that she turned cold since she was shy & scared but then stopping it immediately once he saw her in a state of fright & putting her to sleep in a comfortable position was sweet of him. He is so understanding

Khushi enjoying the sight of her husband sleeping like a baby & his possessive hold over her was beautifully written…..ASR like a lazy toddler 😆 😆 😆

Portrayal of Khushi trying hard to get things to work in a modernized bathroom with controls for everything, frustrated with the trial & error methods, looking out for help but trying once again, panicking when things worked in the opposite ways in totality & finally her dam breaking down when Arnav said that she broke the system was well framed…..hats off, you structured the scene so well that while reading it , I could feel the anxiousness of what a girl new to such luxuries would feel…….sooo real 👏 👏 👏

Arnav tricking her & playing with her for a while & slowly opening the topic of the previous night's incident & assuring her that they could take things slowly & that she needn't explain anything to him was so adorable 🤗

Anji realizing a little while later that she popped up with an embarrassing question was funny

Arnav astonished that even his Di took the fact that Khushi was unaware of whom she was getting married to so lightly & Khushi on the other hand taking control of the situation & thanking Anji for her surprise & telling Arnav that it was all her fault since she was adamant in not giving her father even a chance to reveal the groom's name was well written

Wow!!! Arshi getting married for the 3^rd time…….lovely…………….tight bond hain na 😳

Chapter 37

This chapter was mind blowing 👏

Part 1

I couldn't stop laughing………..the bro-sis duo are adorable whether while picking on a fight between themselves or while teasing Khushi or while pulling each other's legs or while supporting each other ❤️

Arnav overwhelmed on seeing his clothes placed on the bed ready for him since it was the first time that someone had left his clothes ready with so much of care & affection was beautifully framed

Anji teasing Khushi since she didn't allow her to taste the Sheera, playing a prank on Khushi as soon as she noticed Arnav nearing them, pleading God to show some mercy on her starving stomach & complaining to Nani was hilarious 😆

"Kya? Chote ko bhi? Nani was surprised to hear that Chote is denied. Her nayi naveli bahu denied the man who gets what he wants and when he wants."

This line was amazing

Nani telling Khushi that she had given the greatest thing to the Raizada family by making Arnav smile deep down from his heart & asking her to take her place beside Arnav as she wanted everyone to be treated equally in the house was well framed………Nani's dialogues were simply superb……Nani happy on seeing Arnav emoting so prominently for the first time & also smiling so contentedly, feeling blessed for having got such a bahu in their lives was amazing

Arnav amazed at the way Khushi didn't even screw her face even a bit while tasting the sugar free sheera & overwhelmed on her sacrificing her all time desire of satisfying her sweet tooth for his sake & then Khushi's reply to Arnav when he asked her not to sacrifice her desires & ambitions for him was outstanding…...….Khushi's reply was brilliant..…...so soul touching ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Arnav asking Jai to accompany Anji to a safe place & telling him about Shyam was thoughtful. Jai fuming over Shyam shows how much Jai has turned protective over Anji

Part 2

Anji whispering into Jai's ears that she missed him was cute. Arnav fuming & asking Jai to take his Di from there so that he would get to spend some peaceful time with his wife, Anji telling Nani of Arnav's thoughts of sending her to the ashram followed by Anji & Nani teasing Arnav that they planned to cancel his honeymoon surprise was way beyond fun to read 😃…..…..loved it

Naughty Anji is so adorable 🤗

Khushi happy on Anji's thought of arranging for the maalas & Arshi bowing their heads giving access to the other while inwardly promising to love forever was amazing

Arnav staring at NK for blabbering to Khushi when she kept questioning about his & the other employees' absence at her wedding was well laid down

Khushi worried as to why Arnav was rushing all back home while he stayed back & surprised to see him speak angrily to her was well framed

Wow! boss that was a superb move of threatening the snake making him feel as if his skin was ripped off without even being touched……the last scene was fantastic 👍🏼

Love to read more...W A I T I N G

Originally posted by: fleurs

Sorry for the late comments

Chapter 36

Fabulous update & thanks for the PM 🤗

Part 1

Loved the way you portrayed the thoughts of both Arnav & Khushi

Arnav not wanting to rush since he felt that she must be nervous as it was new & the first time to her shows how understanding he is & how sweetly he gives equal importance to his wife's comfort & feelings''he's admirable 👏

Khushi not stopping Arnav allowing him to do as he pleases though she felt shy & all new to her since she wanted to share her beautiful night with him was well framed

Khushi complimenting his eyes reminding him about their first sweet blooming kiss was lovely 😊

Arnav asking Khushi's permission was sweeet ❤️

I enjoyed the whole update but the most striking & funniest line was "No privacy in this house. I have to get her married soon"

Arnav chiding the tailor for inefficiently 😆 😆 😆 stitching the blouse was hilarious

Part 2

Arnav moving to the next level of pleasing his wife thinking that she turned cold since she was shy & scared but then stopping it immediately once he saw her in a state of fright & putting her to sleep in a comfortable position was sweet of him. He is so understanding

Khushi enjoying the sight of her husband sleeping like a baby & his possessive hold over her was beautifully written'..ASR like a lazy toddler 😆 😆 😆

Portrayal of Khushi trying hard to get things to work in a modernized bathroom with controls for everything, frustrated with the trial & error methods, looking out for help but trying once again, panicking when things worked in the opposite ways in totality & finally her dam breaking down when Arnav said that she broke the system was well framed'..hats off, you structured the scene so well that while reading it , I could feel the anxiousness of what a girl new to such luxuries would feel''.sooo real 👏 👏 👏

Arnav tricking her & playing with her for a while & slowly opening the topic of the previous night's incident & assuring her that they could take things slowly & that she needn't explain anything to him was so adorable 🤗

Anji realizing a little while later that she popped up with an embarrassing question was funny

Arnav astonished that even his Di took the fact that Khushi was unaware of whom she was getting married to so lightly & Khushi on the other hand taking control of the situation & thanking Anji for her surprise & telling Arnav that it was all her fault since she was adamant in not giving her father even a chance to reveal the groom's name was well written

Wow!!! Arshi getting married for the 3^rd time''.lovely'''''.tight bond hain na 😳

Chapter 37

This chapter was mind blowing 👏

Part 1

I couldn't stop laughing'''..the bro-sis duo are adorable whether while picking on a fight between themselves or while teasing Khushi or while pulling each other's legs or while supporting each other ❤️

Arnav overwhelmed on seeing his clothes placed on the bed ready for him since it was the first time that someone had left his clothes ready with so much of care & affection was beautifully framed

Anji teasing Khushi since she didn't allow her to taste the Sheera, playing a prank on Khushi as soon as she noticed Arnav nearing them, pleading God to show some mercy on her starving stomach & complaining to Nani was hilarious 😆

"Kya? Chote ko bhi? Nani was surprised to hear that Chote is denied. Her nayi naveli bahu denied the man who gets what he wants and when he wants."

This line was amazing

Nani telling Khushi that she had given the greatest thing to the Raizada family by making Arnav smile deep down from his heart & asking her to take her place beside Arnav as she wanted everyone to be treated equally in the house was well framed'''Nani's dialogues were simply superb''Nani happy on seeing Arnav emoting so prominently for the first time & also smiling so contentedly, feeling blessed for having got such a bahu in their lives was amazing

Arnav amazed at the way Khushi didn't even screw her face even a bit while tasting the sugar free sheera & overwhelmed on her sacrificing her all time desire of satisfying her sweet tooth for his sake & then Khushi's reply to Arnav when he asked her not to sacrifice her desires & ambitions for him was outstanding'...'.Khushi's reply was brilliant..'...so soul touching ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Arnav asking Jai to accompany Anji to a safe place & telling him about Shyam was thoughtful. Jai fuming over Shyam shows how much Jai has turned protective over Anji

Part 2

Anji whispering into Jai's ears that she missed him was cute. Arnav fuming & asking Jai to take his Di from there so that he would get to spend some peaceful time with his wife, Anji telling Nani of Arnav's thoughts of sending her to the ashram followed by Anji & Nani teasing Arnav that they planned to cancel his honeymoon surprise was way beyond fun to read 😃'..'..loved it

Naughty Anji is so adorable 🤗

Khushi happy on Anji's thought of arranging for the maalas & Arshi bowing their heads giving access to the other while inwardly promising to love forever was amazing

Arnav staring at NK for blabbering to Khushi when she kept questioning about his & the other employees' absence at her wedding was well laid down

Khushi worried as to why Arnav was rushing all back home while he stayed back & surprised to see him speak angrily to her was well framed

Wow! boss that was a superb move of threatening the snake making him feel as if his skin was ripped off without even being touched''the last scene was fantastic 👍🏼

Love to read more...W A I T I N G

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Dil khush kardiya with your comments...I was waiting for your feedback...I am now at peace and can work on the next chapter...

You always make my work special. Honestly I dont read my chapter after posting it, because I love the way you summarize it with your comments.