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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mmroyalkaterick

Main Rang Sharbaton ka

Tu meethe ghat ka paani...

Mujhe khud mein ghol de tu ,

to yaar baat ban jani.

Neend hai Tu,

Khwab hoon main.

Donon milein to...raat bane.


So Bhabiji jabtak aapke prem mein bibash ho ke aapke ore daurte huye na aye tabtak hum sab pratiksha karenge...Agantuk.😳

And My sweet bitter medicine Di..sorry for being late at everything.😳



thanks for your comment dear and haha @red😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks once again😳
Edited by foram. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

next morning, hiten came running with a bouquet and mithai ka dabba..he straight went to agni's room and woke him up...

hiten: oye, uthja abhi tak so raha hai... tujhe neend bhi kaise aa sakti hai????

Agantuk: wat???? 😲 I called you last night and you talk to me rudely.. now i dont want to talk to you...

now just go away, I want to sleep.

Hiten:are sorry yaar, I purposely did that, I wanted to talk to you face to face, wanted to see your expressions. tell na what happened??? wat did she said???

Agantuk: no.😡

Hiten: what!!!! she said no???? but why? how could she???...

Agantuk: stop baba, she didn't say no, I meant no, I won't tell you anything. m angry with you.

Hiten: will you say what happened or should i call meera and ask her???

Agantuk: ok wait just shut up and listen " we met near beach, we talked about her visit to her hometown, then about the stunts and movies, then ... Agantuk said each and evrything in detail... hiten was happy that atleast they were friends now.

soon Agantuk got ready and they both left together.

today Agantuk had to perform some difficult stunts, while performing one of such stunt he got injured as he fell from a height and his left hand got fractured... he was immediately rushed to the hospital where Dr examined him and advised him to rest for some days. director was unhappy with this but he had no other choice still he thought of getting those stunts done by body double coz he wanted to finish this project as soon as possible.

Agantuk was resting in his room wen his maid came and informed that some lady whose name is Meera has came to visit him. Agantuk immediately got up from his bed, but in a hurry he got a stroke in his left hand which resulted in massive pain so he settled back on his bed. and asked maid to allow meera to come in.

Meera entered his room, his room was neat and clean, she liked the wall paintings in his room... Hii, how are you? just came to know about your injury. hope its a minor one and nothing serious? she asked while settling down on a chair near his bed.

Agantuk was happy to see her, he replied oh i am fine nothing serious. m surprised to see you here, didnt expected.

Meera: dosti ki hai nibhani to padegi hi, so i came here to know your hal chal😃 i know you are super hero but still as a human i was worried about your injury😆
and you live alone here?

Agantuk: no, no i live with my family... my mom-dad and my lil sister.

Meera: oh nice, i thought you live alone and there is no one to take care of you ??coz i didnt saw anyone out there?

Agantuk: hmm dont know may be they have gone out. ok so tell me what will you like to have.. tea coffee??? anything?? i will ask my maid to get you something. he calls his maid and ask Meera that what she will like to have?

Meera: no nothing, m fine...

Agantuk: no wait and he turns towards his maid and ask her to bring coffee...

but his maid says that she dont know how to make coffee.

Agantuk felt embarrassed and said ok i will make one for you. he tried to get up but Meera stopped him and said you sit down i will make coffee for us, just tell me where's the kitchen. Agantuk said: you are my guest and how can i ask you to make coffee, but meera insisted and went to kitchen and brought two cup of coffee.

Agantuk loved the coffee and they both chatted for hours, while talking meera noticed that it was 8.00 pm and she was here from evening and now she needs to go home.

she asked for leave and said good bye and take care. will meet you tomorrow.😃

while she was stepping out of his house, his mom and sis who were outside saw her coming out from their house and were surprised to see a unknown girl.

Agantuk's mom asked about that girl to her maid? maid said that she came here to meet Agantuk sir rest i dont know anything.

his mom came in his room, he was lost in some other world... his mom was sat beside him and asked about his health and about his hand and then asked about the girl whom she saw leaving.

Agantuk said: she is my producers friend and also a well known choreographer and recently we both became friends, she came here to meet me. she is a nice person😳

Agantuk's mom had a big smile on her face she looked at her daughter who too was grinning. they both noticed some changes in agantuk wen he was talking about meera.


Edited by foram. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i know this one is a boring update with less of momo
but will give a momolicious update next time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
oye priyanshi tujhe kaise pata chala???
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Posted: 11 years ago
It is not at all boring yaar!!

You did an


Loved the hiten-agantuk convo! And my agni was blushing...!!!! ufff...he must have looked sooo damn cute na! And that's sooo sweet of meera to visit him!

I especially loved that line "dosti ki hai nibhani toh padegi" I was thinking...sirf dosti ya... 😳

She made coffee for him...wow! And while drinking agni must be looking at meera all the while na? 😉

The last part...his mother n sister already understood that their son is in LOVE!!! 😳

All in all LOVED it!!
Can actually visualise each n every scene!!

Thank you yaar for such an awesome update! Eagerly waiting to know what happens next! And tune mujhe already restless kar diya hai ye kehke that next update will be momolicious!!!!😳 Jaldi kariyo!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.

oye priyanshi tujhe kaise pata chala???


Muje sab pata chal jata hai madame! 😉
Tere pm dene se pehle hi pata chal gaya tha!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyanshi_

<font size="3">It is not at all boring yaar!!</font>

<font size="4">You did an</font>


<font size="2">Loved the hiten-agantuk convo! And my agni was blushing...!!!! ufff...he must have looked sooo damn cute na! And that's sooo sweet of meera to visit him!</font>

<font size="2">I especially loved that line "dosti ki hai nibhani toh padegi" I was thinking...sirf dosti ya... 😳 </font>

<font size="2">She made coffee for him...wow! And while drinking agni must be looking at meera all the while na? 😉 </font>

<font size="2">The last part...his mother n sister already understood that their son is in LOVE!!! 😳</font>

<font size="2">All in all LOVED it!!</font>
<font size="2">Can actually visualise each n every scene!!</font>

<font size="3">Thank you yaar for such an awesome update! Eagerly waiting to know what happens next! And tune mujhe already restless kar diya hai ye kehke that next update will be momolicious!!!!😳 Jaldi kariyo!</font>

what a fool I am imp baat to bhul hi gayi ki how he was staring at her and was happy. and thanks for liking this update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyanshi_


Muje sab pata chal jata hai madame! 😉
Tere pm dene se pehle hi pata chal gaya tha!!

I know maate.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.

what a fool I am imp baat to bhul hi gayi ki how he was staring at her and was happy. and thanks for liking this update.


Koi nahi! Samajhne waale samajh jaate hai! 🤣
You're always welcome! Aur jaldi update nahi kia na to mein salmon se keh dungi ki tu unki fan nahi hai!!🤣🤣

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