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Posted: 12 years ago
correction ms.betab
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oh kk par ye hai kaun
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uaan plz ab nxt pg pe sparm na krna isko mei cvr krti hu
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here's the last update...😛

a chotu one...😉

enjoy...😃

nxt morning kriya came down all ready to go for work...she chckd dadi's room bt didn't find rey

there as she came in the hall he saw rey sleeping on sofa..she kissed

his forehead n left...as kriya left rey got up n follow her as he wasn't sleeping at all..he was really

curious to know y she came so late..wen others dn't..ya rite

he realy had a doubt is she the only one to over work in the ofice while others come early then

her...one of his frnd was wrking in the same place where kriya was...

n he always told rey dat he n his wife visited here n dere as they get free early..rey didn't ask or tell

abt kriya as he didn't trust his frnds intentions...he

followed n sighed wen she reached her ofice ...bt then he saw that inspite of going in she went to

the nearby jungle..he too folowed her n then he saw that she went

inside a miror..he was shocked seeing dat bt he followed her n was quite sure where she was

going...bt y? he wanted to know..as per rey's thought they reached heaven

n he saw kriya greeted everyone n started working...he was realy shocked frstly y she came n all

of now he is doing the same maid work ..his heart always winced in

pain seeing her doing the work whch she dn't wont too..he can very well read her face...rey was

the best face reader but only for kriya's face he too became upset

seeing her gloomly...he hided himself behind a pillar as she saw some faries were cuming

towards his side ..he was about to go back the same wen he heard faries

talking about them...

fairy 1:i'm feeling realy sad for kriya...look how her glow had gone...she was so naughty n fun

loving at tyms..bt not anymore..i wish rey apna task ek din aur kar

pataa oh kriya ko in buri pariyo ki orders n maid ki tarah kaam nhi krna pdta...

fairy: yaa bt it was so tough n waise maine suna ki angel is going to be full human by tommorow

as universe ji bi usse aise nhi dkh paa rhe n uski task bi khatam ho gyi...

fairy 3: realy ..omg wow datz the great news...

fairy: ya par abhi ye baat kisi ko pta nhi chlna chahiye...vrna koi angel ke liye nayi prblm na khadi

ho jaye..

fairy 1; yaa n stop calling her angel rey ko pata chala toh hume chodega nhi

(n the faries laughed heartly..)

while rey was confused n shoked knowing kriya was't cmplete human yet..he somehow hiding

frm everyone went back throgh the same miror..he didn't went to the office

n jst waited for nite in his room locking himslf nt responding to any of calling of his home

members...

on the other hand;

kriya was informed about the good news by universe ji..she was very happy n as universe told

she too decided to tell rey everything..she completed her work hapily

bid bye to everyone n went back home hapily..

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she reached home n saw everbody at dining table exept him..she greeted li'l kriya wid a lite kiss n

hugged him n asked abt rey n on getting rply she went towards

there room saying she wasn't hungry...

she reached outside the room n knocked bt he didn't open..she again knocked..

k: rey..open the door na plz..

on hearing her voice ..he immediately opened the door pulled her inside suddenly n closed the

door...he was realy angry..she cn sense even if he didn't show...

k: rey muje apko ek bahut achi news deni hai..

she held both his hand in her's...bt he didn't say anything n kept luking at her...while she narated

everything to him...about the task n decision n y she dn't like

aniversary with tears in her eyes..all..n he just listened luking at her expresionless...

k: and atlast i'm completely a human..

she said grabing him in a hug...he was about to respond bt declined his own thought...

r:i know everything..by earlier...

she broke the hug n luked at him...in delima...

k:wht? how? i mean maine toh kisi ko btaya bhi nhi...aise kaise pta chal gya..aap mujse gussa

ho..sorry plz maaf krdo..mei apko sad nhi dkh skti n na hi apse baat

krna chod skti hu plz rey...plz..kisi ko btana..agr kisi ko pta chal gya apko phle se pta chal gya

toh..

she was speaking continuously...he was angry frstly bt it flew away seeing her back in her

baatcutter state whch he was missing..he tried to speak bt she never alowd

..he stared at her for a while n get lost in her bt soon cum back as she was still blabering..he

moved his head twice the oposite side n pulled her towards him...

with this sudden jhatka n the clossiness she becum quiet...n lukd at him..his hot breath at her

lips..

r; now listen baatcutter...let me explain my part now...

n he tell her everthing how he followd her n all..

while she poted angrily..he held his ears pouting too..

r: sorry..

k: huh..u dn't trust me...

r:neither do u..so 1 n 1 cancel..dono ka equal ho gya...

kriya luked at him in disblief n then they both laughed...n kriya moved towards almirah to get her

clothes for changing wen rey hugged her frm behind n held her clothes n whispered in her ear...

R:let me dress u...

while she blushed n wid dat they shared a kiss in the same position...


finally done...

thank u for u'r suport..

though i know this part was nt that good...

bt my exams,suprise test,coaching tests e.t.c n 10th board result is about to cum..

so realy tired of all these...thatz y nt matchd it...sorry..

bye take care..have completed my works finaly...

do leave u'r views...

for pm's buddy me

Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 12 years ago
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res for everyone...😉
Edited by Riyaluvka2s - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
but end ho gaya ye story
mujhe bura lagraha he
but update is really good
finally kria full human bam gai n wo angle mat bulao wala part was so funny
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Originally posted by: Riyaluvka2s


a lady doing aarti in front of god...aftr aarti...

lady: rey...rey uth ja subah ke 10 baj gye hai...

still no response frm other side...

lady:hey bhagwaan iska kuch nhi ho skta...(she saw a grl) tanadi...idhar aa..

aab tak toh sab pehchan gye hoge ye rey ki dadi hai 😆n abhi dantna mat phle aage padhlo..fir bolna..

t:oh god...itz tani u old (cut by)

dadi: kriya..

t(tensed): nhi nhi...(sweetly)haan boliye aunty...

dadi:jake choti aur uske papa ko jga..

t:ji..abhi jati hu...

she faked a smile n went upstairs to wake pari n his dad..without knocking

she went inside the room...n started laughing seeing the scene in front of

her...rey was hugging kriya tightly n sleeping whispering sweet nothings n

kriya was trying to free herself as she was suffocated the loud laugh made

litle kriya embaressed + his dad wake frm his sleep n saw y was she

laughing..he immediately left kriya n wore his shirt while tani was still gawking

at him n laughing hard ...whereas kriya sighed in relief..

r:tum knock krke nhi aa skti thi(to kriya) n kriya tumhari mummy kha hai..

t: tumhe aunty ki awaz toh sunayi nhi di toh mere knock ki kya zarurat thi..

r;u..

k: rite dad..mei kab se bol rhi hu chode muje..bt aap hai ki pta nhi kya bole ja

rhe the..dinner..romance e.t.c, e.t.c..n mumma toh kabh ki chale gyi apne

work pe...

r; chup..n usne muje uthaya kyu nhi...

t: tumhe sone se fursat mile tab na..

r: tum chup nhi reh sakti...problem kya hai tumhari...mind it...ye tumhara ghar

nhi hai so just out of our matters ok...

he yelled upon her..while she didn't say anything further n just left...aftr that

incident..rey never talked to tani properly..if it was in his hands..he had

thrown her out of his house...bt it was all b'coz of his sweet wife..that he had

to bear her..as his wife ia the only'good n adarshvadi' woman...even frm

wht they both had gone frm she still want tani to be in there house..aftr solving

everything with kriya ...rey wanted the criminal of his father's death behind the

prison bt alot of insistence frm his wife that she hadn't done

purposely..moreover she was alone...everybody left her...even shivm.. when

he came to know about her real intentions left her..it was his wife who saw

how guilty tani was for her work..n treat her like her sister bt there was a strict

no frm her side to 'sali aadhi ghar vali' word

😆 Dadi to agreed as she can't deny her bahu..

dn't get iritated i'l disclose soon who is rey's new wife...

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litle kriya,dadi n tani were having there dinner on the dining table...when rey

arrived...seeing him tani stood up n was going inside when sumone intrupt..

v; ruko...

k:muma...

she hurriedly went towards her n hugged her tightly...she too responded

equaly n went towards everyone n greeted them...

w:chalo baitho n khana khao..

t: kriya mei (cut by)

r(nervously): suna nhi usne kya kha...

all were trying hard to control there laugh as only in front of his wife sher rey chuha ban jata hai 😆 n follow her every commands...yup kriya rey's wife n her daugter too as kriya mostly remained busy in her job even for months n many more so on rey's insistance they named there daughter as kriya ...litle kriya..aftr having there dinner everybody went to there room... i.e 2 kriya's with one rey😆 in there room n tani n dadi in there rooms respectively...
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wifey kriya went to change her dress aftr making the daughter kriya sleep

peacefully..when she came outside...n a pair of arms grip her waist resting

his chin on her shoulder...

k:kya hai...

she said making a stern face..

r: tumhe yaad nhi..

he make her all hairs fall aside on the other shoulder n pull the strap of her

nite dress a litle down n start kissing her shoulder...while she tried to be

normal..

k:n..nh..nhi..

r;sachi...

he still didn't leave her...n turned her towards him n looked dirctly ino her

eyes...n hugged her...

r: kya hua?

k; kuch nhi..kriya kha hai...

r: meri bahon mei..

n he rubbed her ack..

k: rey..mei litle kriya ki baat kr rhi hu..abhi toh mei usse sula ke gyi thi..

r: vo dadi ke pass soyegi aaaj..

she broke the hug n looked at him..

k: kyu..

she pouted cutely...

r:aab vo uski marzi..

k; acha muje sab pta hai..apne hi bheja hoga usse..

r; nhi maine nhi (cut by)

k: sachi..

r;aa..vo na..vo (cut by)

k: dekha..jooth bola tha apne tabhi chup ho gye..aab bolo kya baat hai...

n she started adjusting there bed...n some other last tym works..

r:tum bhool gyi na..aaj humari aniversery hai..

listening this she stopped in her tracks..remembering what all happened the

day when they were oficially married n she was turned half human..whch she

lied frm him..as if he came to know he had to struggle more that will cause

him more pain n even can lead to his death...


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~flashback~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

aftr having a talk with kriya n telling her everthing about y he behaved so

rudely..rey confessed his feelings for her..she too gladly exepted as she

thaught atleast aftr death they can be one...still unware that rey was still a

human...they were caught expressing there feelings by some fairies..whch

were kriya's enemy...they immediately went to universe ji n tell him about what

happened...as it was against there rules that a human n angel can never be

together...universe ji got angry n they called them in there palace...everyone

were just luking at both of them while kriya doubted that they got to know

about them being togther n it got cleared when universe ji asked them..she

had never seen universe ji in that much anger..

u: tumhe pta hai na ki ek insaan aur ek angel kbhi ek nhi ho skte toh kyu

todhe tumne yha ke rules...

he yelled at her...while she got scared while rey squeezed her hand..to

assure her that he is with her...

k(nervously):vo..o..universe ji rey vo aab insaan nhi hai...

r: ye tum kya bol rhi ho?.

k: kya..aap yha tbhi toh pahunche na..

r; nhi vo toh mei ouija board ki help se pahuncha...

n he told her how he used it n came here...she was shocked to hear it n now

came to know y universe ji was so much angry..

k:sorry muje pta nhi tha..(looking at rey)mei aapse ke sath nhi reh sakti...rey

(cut by)

r: aise kaise..

k: kyunki aap ek jeevit insaan hai aur mei ek...ek mari hui

she tried to complete her sentence bt wasn't able to

r; mei tumhare liye kuch bhi krne ke liye tayar hu...

r;chahe marna hi kyu na ho..

u; par aisa nhi ho skta...hum kisi insaan ko uski likhi hui maut se phle nhi

maar skte...

k: haan rey...aap jao...aap dadi ka khyal rkhna...

n she turned to other side..bt he was stuborn he didn't agree..turned her

towards him n wiped his tears while he was too crying...

r: mei tumhare liye kuch bhi kar skta hu...

he said deeply luking into her eyes...aftr dat he tried alot to manofy universe ji

as kriya was standing by side as she knows this tym universe will nt agree to

her...seeing him doing so mush just for her she felt realy happy..bt wht if they

didn't agree?how will he react? he'll be shaterd...seeing him doing so much

some fairies started approving there love n demanded to give them a

chance..aftr seeing such responses rey had to pass an exam with 100%

marks...for the test rey had to do all the works of kriya...bt not only

this..he'l get food only one tym a day that two half the amount whch

he eat daily one tym...he had to walk on the path of cactus daily with

naked legs..he had to bear the pain of 20 hunters on his naked back

daily..for almost 50 days..n if he got sucessful then only kriya will be turned

into a human n they can live hapily...n nobody will help him..he agred bt kriya

protested bt seeing the confidence in his eyes n his demand to give him a

chance to prove his love..he got sucessful in making her agree...frm the

same day he started doing all the works n bearing all the pains..wen it was

his tym to rest kriyaa will cum n fed her n ried to soothe his pain n he mostly

slept in her lap...it was the 2nd last day of his exam bt he got fainted while walking on cactus path..he was taken to the hospital

(arre chinta mat karo mere story mei fairyland mei bhi hospital hai..😆)

everyone was informed about it n the doctor declared his condition

serius...while kriya kneeled in front of universe ji to help them...seeing her

most fav angel in this condition he agreed...bt he told her that she can only be

half human now n that too if she completed the task given to rey..n he'l be fy9

if she agreed..she immediately agreed n completed his task wih a lot of

dificulty n finally rey was fy9 ..she didn't want rey to blame himself for not

completing his task completely n requested universe ji..it was decided that

rey'l nt gt to know until she tell him her self n she had to continue her jobs

she's still half human...frm that day she started to be upset on there aniversery

as it was the day wen rey was b?w life n death b'coz of her..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~flashbacEnds~~~~~~~~~~~~


r:kya soch rhi ho?

k;haan..vo kuch nhi chalo so jate hai..muje kal office jaldi jana hai...

r:wht?nhi atleast kal toh mat jao kal sunday hai..tum sunday ko bhi ghar nhi

rhti pta hai mei kitna bore ho jata hu..

k(breaking his grip): rey plz...

n she went n lay on the bed n tried as drifted to sleep...rey was sad n iritated

too as she mostly behaved like this to him..he took his pillow n went

downward to her dadi's room..aftr he left kriya opened her eyes n just said a

'sorry rey'
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he went to his dadi's room n saw his li'l kriya n dadi sleeping ..a smile crept

on his face..as he don't want to disturb them he went in the hall n slept on the

couch...




It was awesome loved it till core amazing update 👏😳👏

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nxt morning kriya came down all ready to go for work...she chckd dadi's room bt didn't find rey

there as she came in the hall he saw rey sleeping on sofa..she kissed

his forehead n left...as kriya left rey got up n follow her as he wasn't sleeping at all..he was really

curious to know y she came so late..wen others dn't..ya rite

he realy had a doubt is she the only one to over work in the ofice while others come early then

her...one of his frnd was wrking in the same place where kriya was...

n he always told rey dat he n his wife visited here n dere as they get free early..rey didn't ask or tell

abt kriya as he didn't trust his frnds intentions...he

followed n sighed wen she reached her ofice ...bt then he saw that inspite of going in she went to

the nearby jungle..he too folowed her n then he saw that she went

inside a miror..he was shocked seeing dat bt he followed her n was quite sure where she was

going...bt y? he wanted to know..as per rey's thought they reached heaven

n he saw kriya greeted everyone n started working...he was realy shocked frstly y she came n all

of now he is doing the same maid work ..his heart always winced in

pain seeing her doing the work whch she dn't wont too..he can very well read her face...rey was

the best face reader but only for kriya's face he too became upset

seeing her gloomly...he hided himself behind a pillar as she saw some faries were cuming

towards his side ..he was about to go back the same wen he heard faries

talking about them...

fairy 1:i'm feeling realy sad for kriya...look how her glow had gone...she was so naughty n fun

loving at tyms..bt not anymore..i wish rey apna task ek din aur kar

pataa oh kriya ko in buri pariyo ki orders n maid ki tarah kaam nhi krna pdta...

fairy: yaa bt it was so tough n waise maine suna ki angel is going to be full human by tommorow

as universe ji bi usse aise nhi dkh paa rhe n uski task bi khatam ho gyi...

fairy 3: realy ..omg wow datz the great news...

fairy: ya par abhi ye baat kisi ko pta nhi chlna chahiye...vrna koi angel ke liye nayi prblm na khadi

ho jaye..

fairy 1; yaa n stop calling her angel rey ko pata chala toh hume chodega nhi

(n the faries laughed heartly..)

while rey was confused n shoked knowing kriya was't cmplete human yet..he somehow hiding

frm everyone went back throgh the same miror..he didn't went to the office

n jst waited for nite in his room locking himslf nt responding to any of calling of his home

members...

on the other hand;

kriya was informed about the good news by universe ji..she was very happy n as universe told

she too decided to tell rey everything..she completed her work hapily

bid bye to everyone n went back home hapily..

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she reached home n saw everbody at dining table exept him..she greeted li'l kriya wid a lite kiss n

hugged him n asked abt rey n on getting rply she went towards

there room saying she wasn't hungry...

she reached outside the room n knocked bt he didn't open..she again knocked..

k: rey..open the door na plz..

on hearing her voice ..he immediately opened the door pulled her inside suddenly n closed the

door...he was realy angry..she cn sense even if he didn't show...

k: rey muje apko ek bahut achi news deni hai..

she held both his hand in her's...bt he didn't say anything n kept luking at her...while she narated

everything to him...about the task n decision n y she dn't like

aniversary with tears in her eyes..all..n he just listened luking at her expresionless...

k: and atlast i'm completely a human..

she said grabing him in a hug...he was about to respond bt declined his own thought...

r:i know everything..by earlier...

she broke the hug n luked at him...in delima...

k:wht? how? i mean maine toh kisi ko btaya bhi nhi...aise kaise pta chal gya..aap mujse gussa

ho..sorry plz maaf krdo..mei apko sad nhi dkh skti n na hi apse baat

krna chod skti hu plz rey...plz..kisi ko btana..agr kisi ko pta chal gya apko phle se pta chal gya

toh..

she was speaking continuously...he was angry frstly bt it flew away seeing her back in her

baatcutter state whch he was missing..he tried to speak bt she never alowd

..he stared at her for a while n get lost in her bt soon cum back as she was still blabering..he

moved his head twice the oposite side n pulled her towards him...

with this sudden jhatka n the clossiness she becum quiet...n lukd at him..his hot breath at her

lips..

r; now listen baatcutter...let me explain my part now...

n he tell her everthing how he followd her n all..

while she poted angrily..he held his ears pouting too..

r: sorry..

k: huh..u dn't trust me...

r:neither do u..so 1 n 1 cancel..dono ka equal ho gya...

kriya luked at him in disblief n then they both laughed...n kriya moved towards almirah to get her

clothes for changing wen rey hugged her frm behind n held her clothes n whispered in her ear...

R:let me dress u...

while she blushed n wid dat they shared a kiss in the same position...




It was amazing loved it till core mindblowing work and enhding loved it

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rey - the detective...😆

akhir rey ko pata chal hi gaya...

fairy: angle mat bol rey ko pata chala toh...😆

finally kria human ban gayo...😛

fantastic update sis...👏
Edited by .....pujan..... - 12 years ago
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awesome update
finally kria is a human
loved it
thanks for pm

Edited by Aanchal_Kreya - 12 years ago

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