|| Healing the Broken One || TaaRey SS: Chp.1Up - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome concept !! 👏 👏
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hey such a awesome concept and something different

plz update soon and thanks for the pm do it again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sashaz_sis

nice concept...continue soon...😊


thank you and will do ! 😊
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Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey

Awsum concept di luved it continue soon


thank you so much and will do! 😊
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Originally posted by: --coco--

Good concept, do continue.
Thank you for the pm.


Thank you!
and no problem 😊
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#56

Originally posted by: anju101

I hope you didn't forget about this one cause you know I would love to read it. :)


I didn't forget because I'm back with an update! 😆
but thank you 😃
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Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

amazingg concept...!!

really looking forward to this...
please do update soon =)


Thank you so much !
Really looking forward to writing this.
and will do! 😊
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Chapter 1:
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Her laughter echoed throughout the whole house, filing the place with life. I ran around the house, trying to get a hold of her, just like we did when we were younger.

After minutes of chasing her, she came to a sudden halt. Her eyes grew wide with mock fear as she turned around to look at me. I looked at the wall behind her, and a smirk made its way onto my lips.

There was a prolonged silence, and in that moment, I heard the winds blowing through the house, the waves crashing against the sand, and her heavy breathing.

My pace grew slower as I cornered her. I put my hands on both sides of the wall, to prevent any chance of her running away from me again.

I stared intensely into her big, beautiful brown eyes that could make anyone fall in love with her, and I mean anyone. That was the first thing that had attracted me to her. The innocence in those eyes had the power to make you fall flat on the ground.

I shifted my gaze to her lips, which were trembling with nervousness. I loved the effect I had on her.

I pushed my body against her, and leaned my face closer to hers until our noses were touching.

I could feel her breath on my face, and the sweet smell of strawberries radiating off her body.

Closer, and Closer, and Closer. With her eyes fully closed, and her lips shaking, she looked more than beautiful.

I put my lips on hers and-

End of Flashback

"Papa, Pappi, DAD" A tiny hand grabbed onto my leg and tugged me down to her level.

"Yes Aliya?" I smiled at her, and grabbed her, pulling her up into my arms.

"Bhai's not giving me his chocolate. Mujhe chocolate chaiye." She pouted her lips out and whined in a high pitch voice, perfectly replicating her mother.

"Angel, yeh chocolate ka nahi, sone ka time hai!" I put her down and turned back around to finish washing the dishes.

"Nahi Daddy, I want chocolates! Please, Please, Please." She wrapped her arms and legs around my leg.

I looked down at her face, which was turning red with anger. Her eyes were so close to tears. I instantly felt a tug at my heartstrings, and gave into her charm. "Fine, but siraf ek, aur uske baad apne daanth(teeth) achi tara se brush karna, okay?"

Her tears were now replaced with a toothless grin.

"Shaan" I shouted loud enough for my son to hear me. He jogged downstairs and stood in front of me with a chocolate covered face.

"Haan papa?" He asked while plopping another lindor chocolate into his mouth.

"Ek chocolate apni sister ko bhi do, aur kudh khana bandh karo." I put on a stern face, before he could protest. He hung his head down in clear disappointed, handed a chocolate over to Aliya and put the rest on the counter.

"Now upar jao and brush your teeth. Tum bhi angel." I looked at my daughter who had devoured the whole chocolate in less than a second.

They both nodded and ran back upstairs. I finished washing the dishes and followed them upstairs.

By the time I got to their room, they both were sitting in bed, waiting for me.

I walk over to Shaan's bed and tucked him in. I was about to kiss his forehead but he turns his head making a disgusted face. Teenager Issues.

Shaking my head, I walk over to Angel, kiss her forehead and tuck her in too.

"Goodnight guys" I turn around to walk away but Angel grabs my hand and pulls me back.

"Daddy"

"Yes angel?"

"Can we have a bed time story? Please, Please, Please" The amount of times this girl pleads in day is uncountable.

"No sweetheart, aaj raat nahi. Mai bahut thak gaya hoon. Maybe tomorrow?" I try to reason with her.

"No tonight, haina Shaan bhai?" She glares at her brother, who looks up completely confused to as what we were talking about.

"What?"

"Dad ko hum eek bed time story nahi batani chaiye?" She made her glare stronger. I couldn't help but let out a muffled laugh which to my luck went unnoticed by the two kids.

"Yeah Dad, c'mon, aap ne humi kitne time se story nahi batai.." Both the kids start pleading in unison.

"Fine." I sigh and grab a chair for me to sit on.

Putting the chair in between, their two beds, I start my story.

"Aaj, mai aapko ek kahani bataunga ek larke aur larki ki joh complete opposites thai."

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So, I know I'm super late, but I had kinda dropped this concept in the middle but no worries now I am back, I hope you guys like this. It really focuses on Rey's bond with his children.

Enjoy, Like and Comment!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: paruls

Awesome concept !! 👏 👏


Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: --taareylove---

hey such a awesome concept and something different


plz update soon and thanks for the pm do it again


Thanks so much 😃
and will do soon!

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