** GULMOHAR ** a SS on virmaan ... part 6 up !

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys..

whenever i read stories of virman from this forum ... i too wanted to write something of my own ...
and this is my first ever attempt in my life to write something..
so do bare with my flaws in writing ... nd keep me corrected if you find any...
i got this idea when i was travelling in a bus way back to my house so thought of posting it before I forget it...
Gulmohar means The Seal Of Flowers ;and represents aspirational values...
Don't know how far my story gives aspiration to you ... But definitely your comments and suggestion will inspire me to write more ...
I'll give you a brief intro of my gulmohar...

Manvi is an ordinary girl with no extra tallents...that's how others jude about her though she's not so... Virat was her first crush ... her first love...😉from her school days ,presntly busy maintaining her hectic middle class single life as an employee in a company ...

Virat as usual " aakon ka taara" of the school ,never thought of Manvi more than his classmate and his mother's friend's daughter... now a well known doctor... keeps contact with his friends circle...
both Manvi and Virat have no idea of each other's present status...

Manvi's and Virat's mothers were friends .."not close friends";
so these two behaves in such a way they knew each other ..but Virat never bothered about Manvi's presence...


This story starts from Manvi getting an invite to her school reunion... mostly moves with Manvi's POV...


** this story may sound similar but this is purely my idea NOT a COPY ; if anybody has a problem you can directly tell me I shall make necessary changes to it...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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** GULMOHAR **

Mein chahein kitne bhi aage bhadoon apne zindagi mein ...
Kahin bhi paunch jaoon ...
nikkaal nahi paaya thumhe apne khayaalon se...
Dekha tha ek khwaab humesha se ...
tumhare kandon pe sar rakhke;
kadmon se kadam milakke hummare saamne aayi har mushkil ka paar karne ka ... Sirf teri banke jeene ka...
Sab tha teek humare beech...
Par patha nahi aisa kya huva jo bana diya humme ek jism hone se pehele juda...
Jab jab tum se aage badne ki koshish ki hai ...
tab tab tum aaye ho mere aankon ke saamne mujhe
yaad dhillane;
apni toote sapnon ko ...
ehsaas dhilane ;
apni toote dill ki dard ko...
kyun dard hota hai itna teri har inkaar
mujhe pehchaan ne se...
kyun hota hai meri har koshishein na kaamyaab
thujhe bhoolne ki...
de paogi mere ek sawaal ka jawaab ;
Kya tum bhi mere liye wahi mehsoos karthe ho jo mein tere liye
karthi hoon... ????

(and this is manvi POV ..😆)
**well that's it guys for now ...don't know how it is ...
do comment...
Is it good or bad ??
any kinds of criticisms are welcomed...😉😆
b4 u throw tammatars & chappals at me
*let me run off with my life...* 🤣🤣🤣


Edited by totallyspies_1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Something sounds interesting nd different...
Like to read more...
Plz continue..
Nd if u can... Pm me too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi,
Nice intro.
Do cntnue soon.
All the best dear.
U r good in hindi eventhough u belong to kerala.
I'm impressed.
Tk cre.
Bye. . . . . :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's really nice, do update the next part soonnn:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice beginning...
cont soon n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it awesome👏
intro is also good virat a well known doctor n manvi an employee in a company amazing n different too😃
n then manvi's pov her feeling the awy u shows is also amazing❤️
its a nice concept plzzz cont soon
n pm me if u can when u update
oh n i love the tittle its very UNIQUE👍🏼
Edited by amgud - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey It Sound Great!

Do Continue And Pm next Update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nandani (hpe i said it right)
It was so good
I really loved it the concept evrythng was jst fab
Ab jaldi cnt karo wth viraat's pov and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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too good, dear.. well written...
loved it... update soon... and pm me plsss
and if you didnt update ...

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