Tarey new os:Aashiqui prt 3 pg 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys m ravina n i want to write new os on tarey...if u like it pls give your lovely feedback m waiting...

In swayam house
tani bedroom...
Tani:hiii rey...
Rey:hey tani why u sound low today what happen...
Tani:kuch nahi rey woh mein tuhmse i mean mujhe tuhme tanx bolna hai...
Rey:kyu kya hua...
Tani: woh tuhmne mere liye humare relation ke liye ndc pe part nahi liya issliye...m really sorry rey mere wajah se yeh sab hua...
Rey:isme tuhmari koi galti nahi hai tani sari galti meri hai maine uncle jhooth kaha mujhe usi waqt sari sachayi bata deni chahiye thi...
Tani:par yeh sab meri wajah se hua na meine tauji se jhooth bola meri wajah se tuhmare aur tuhmare dosto mein kadvahat huru hui m really very sorry rey iss wajah se mein apne aap ko kabhi maaaf nahi kar sakti...
Rey:tani...tum pls mujhe yeh sab mat yaad dilao...
Tani:rey i love u...
Rey:i love u tooo tai...




Kaisa tha yeh toh bas tralior hai...pls feedback dena apkko accha laga toh next part lamba likhungi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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DUDE U SHLD DEFINATELY CONTINUE IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi ye traloir bahot accha that plz do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome ... Update it dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Like the concept
update soon
and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2
next morning
tani:bhai m sorry bhai...
Swayam:tani ka hua ...sorry kisliye...
Tani:meri wajah se yeh sab ho raha hai meri wajah se rey participate nahi kar raha hai...m really very sorry...
Swayam:tum yeh mujhe kyu keh rahi ho tumhe mujhse nahi puri gang se mafi magni chahiye tani tumne bohot bura kiya hai iss bar...
Tani:janti hoo bhai agar meine unse mafi mangi toh woh mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karenge issliye main chahti hoon ki aap unse iss bare mein baat kare...
Swayam:ohhh issliye bythe tum hi jake mafi mango woh meri bhi baat nahi snege...
N he lives
in colll
tani in canteen...
Viky:kab tak chalega yeh sab...
Nil:jab tak tani gs hain...
Neha:shes going very bad yaar...
Tanii:hey guys mere bare mein baat kar rahe the na...
Vicky:haan aur kiske bare mein karenge...
Tani:m sorry...
Vick:kya sunai nahi diya...
Tani:m sorry...
Nil;maafi mang rahi hai hamse ...
Neha:ab maafi mangkar kya hoga tani joh karna tha woh kar liya tumne hamari gang mein darar dal di...
Tani:mera woh matlab nahi tha neha meri baat toh sunno...
Vicky:kkya sunne tuhmare wajah se rey ne ndc mein part lene se in kar kar diya aur tum kehrahi ho koi baat nahi...
Swayam:vicky relax...
Sharon;kyu swayam ham sirf issliye chup hain kyu ki tani tuhmari behan hai...pehle woh shivam tha aur ab yeh tani uski kami puri kar rahi hai...
Tani:started crying mujhe maaf kardo aage se tuhmare beech kabhi nahi aaogi...
Vicky:aur aane ki koshish bhi mat karna...
Tani:leaves the place...

Fire exit
tani:mujhe yaha se jaana hoga main kisi ke layak nahi hoon nahi rey ke pyaar ke nahi hi mein achi behen ban pai aur na hi dost issliye meri koi frndz nahi ...yeh mera aakhri chance hai rey ke liye rey ke career ke kiye mujhe kuch dino ke liye jana hi hoga...
Reycalll:hi tani kkahah ho tum...
Tani:rey woh mein fire exit meinhun...
Rey:k wahi ruko mujhe tunse kuch baat karni hai ...
Tani:aur mujhe bhi aap aayeye mein aapka yaha wait karti hoon...
Rey enter..
Rey:yaha kya kar rahi thi woh bhi mere bina...
Tani:kuch nahi woh kuch soach rahi thi...
Rey:k woh mein kehna chahta hoon ki...
Tani:pehle mein rey...
Rey:kya...
Tani:woh mein kal tauji ke saaath kuch dino ke liye jodhpur jaa rahi hoon...
Rey:kya par kyu...
Tani:woh maa ne bulaya hai kuch kaam hai...
Rey:sad par tuhmare bina main kaise...
Tani:kuch hi dino ki baat hai rey...
Rey:k fine...
Tani:aur tumkuch kehne wale the na...
Rey:tuhmari baat sunkar mein meri baat bhul gaya achha man chalta hoon kuch kaam hai...
N he leavea...


Hows it...
-Fam_TaaReY- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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both parts are nice ... update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow dear very nice update yplz do update soonaar awesome fabulous mindblowing part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsm update dear poor taani..i am feelimg bad 4 her plz update soon n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmm finally taani jodhpur ja rahi hai ...gud update ...waiting fr next part

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