FF:Sanaya Barun Mohit( Pighalta Asman)Part 10-Pg21 - Page 11

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daljeet thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Liked the update. The story has moved forward.

But I don't get it that why he thinks that Arnav has something dangerous in his mind?


Why did Samrat go behind her? As Arnav said, shouldn't he be mourning? Or is there something behind all this that we don't know?

Is a change coming in Kushi?


But still again I felt something amiss in the narrative technique!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daljeet

Liked the update. The story has moved forward.

But I don't get it that why he thinks that Arnav has something dangerous in his mind?


Why did Samrat go behind her? As Arnav said, shouldn't he be mourning? Or is there something behind all this that we don't know?

Is a change coming in Kushi?


But still again I felt something amiss in the narrative technique!


Point it out, what you missed in narrative technique, be specific, so that I try to improve.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one:)
I liked their morning encounter. Khushi giggling and Arnav looking at her. All this was really adorable and heart warming.

I loved it when Arnav said that he doesn't really care about what other think. This shows he respects Khushi.

OMG Khushi destroyed his favorite car?! But he too pissed her off, so I guess tit for tat.

Why was Samrat following her?

Khushi is smart, Arnav really got his match. She threatened him to tell about her medical history to his dad.

Continue soon:)


daljeet thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
I can't put my finger on it. But when I read your story, I feel there is something amiss. Maybe, the impersonal, objective writing style. But then, I know it is a kind of style. But maybe there is some defect in its execution.
I don't know exactly. But I don't get a satisfaction after reading the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
khushi is really smrt
but i really dont understand what kind of relation they share????????
is it love or only the lust or the only attempt to save his family lineage????????
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Posted: 12 years ago
The night after was cute... They couldn't get away a week without verbal fights...
Nice progress of the story...
yakkudimag thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daljeet

I can't put my finger on it. But when I read your story, I feel there is something amiss. Maybe, the impersonal, objective writing style. But then, I know it is a kind of style. But maybe there is some defect in its execution.

I don't know exactly. But I don't get a satisfaction after reading the update.


Impersonal writing..well I am a final year Law Student, and soon I will be a Litigator..so I have to be impersonal, although Personal approach has stronger effect..but you know..in litigation that has an adverse effect. Probably my academic style is affecting my writing..
yakkudimag thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Nice one:)

I liked their morning encounter. Khushi giggling and Arnav looking at her. All this was really adorable and heart warming.

I loved it when Arnav said that he doesn't really care about what other think. This shows he respects Khushi.

OMG Khushi destroyed his favorite car?! But he too pissed her off, so I guess tit for tat.

Why was Samrat following her?

Khushi is smart, Arnav really got his match. She threatened him to tell about her medical history to his dad.

Continue soon:)



It's just the beginning...😆


yakkudimag thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am busy with several issues like project, exam, down market 3rd class room mate and consequent room shifting..so give me some time. From October 6th I will be regular.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 9

Khushwant looked at him for sometimes. She felt that she had hit below the belt. She took a deep breath.

" It's not easy for me Arnavjee, do not make it more difficult..", Khushi said and went to bed. Within a minute she felt his hand on her waist, he was nuzzling on her shoulder, slowly he took off her nighty, "Trust me, I will not hurt you.."

She closed her eyes, did not open for the rest of the night. He was getting into her, as expected.

Next morning Arnav got a call from his mother-in-law. He listened to her carefully and digested it.


Mature contents, read at your own risk

After 2 weeks, one night she was in hospital. Arnav was calling her repeatedly.

" I have night duty.."

" You are there for last 12 hours..come home..else you will fall ill..."

" Emergency duty..stop calling me.."

" Then I am coming there..to take you back .."

" I am coming.."..Khushwant said in a disgusted tone. They ate silently.

"Are you sworn to silence today?" Arnav said when they get into their bedroom.

" It's not like that.."..

" Is it that much painful..?"

Khushwant understood what Arnav meant. She was menstruating, from the very beginning; it has been a great pain for her. She just cannot take these few days in a month. Arnav took her in his embrace. Khushwant needed him very badly at that moment. She was crying.

" At this state, you were working..why?"

" Just to divert my mind, I always do it..I can't take this.."

" Can't help it Khushwant, it comes by default with all girls..that day your mother told me about these days, that how much it causes pain to you..why were you avoiding me?"

" I don't know..." her crying increased. Arnav made her lay on the bed, laid beside her, started to caress her head. But her pain gave no signal to decrease. After few minutes , Arnav left the room and came back with a hot water bag. Started to caress her abdomen with the bag.

She was crying silently, suddenly she whimpered, "Arnavjee..it really hurts..", Arnav said ," It will be alright, try to sleep, I am here only..". Arnav hugged her, " Don't avoid me anymore Khushwant, I am your husband..".

" It is so painful.."

" When any married woman comes to you..you ask her to get her husband, have you ever thought why? Because they share a life, there are so many things between husband and wife which cannot be shared with anyone else..and you always take a bypass..it's not done...Khushwant.."

Eventually she slept. In his arms.

***

Within a week she found herself in Sydney, on their official honeymoon. Only one thought was in her mind that she was being able to satisfy him. She cannot reciprocate although Arnav never complained.

One night, during their encounter, Arnav said ," move with me.."

" I can't.."

Arnav withdrew then and there, left the bed. Lit a cigarette and sat on the sofa. She remained laid on the bed. Sad and rejected. Slowly she got up and made her way to the bathroom. And then she felt him groping her from behind.

He fondled her bosom ruthlessly , teased her buds without any mercy, made her face to face, and bit her buds roughly and kissed her vehemently. Pushed her to the bed. Ravished her body with his lips and teeth. Finally he said, " Turn around .."

She understood what he wanted, she was that sensible.

" You left me no option than taking you from behind, I didn't want to dominate you, since you cannot move with me..so I will get my satisfaction in my way..Since you feel nothing, at least let me feel something."

This was new to her, and she actually liked it. She moved her hips with equal feminine invitations. He increased his pace and heard a soft moan. He whispered in her ear, " Not bad.." and continued. He heard her moaning which was louder this time, he changed the position, now they were face to face.

He started it again, said "Next time you say no, I will have you like this..I understand, when you say no, it means yes...you like the beast in me.."

"No.." she whispered..

"No? When I molested you in that rainy night, why didn't you lodge a police complaint against me ?"

" Arnavjee, please.."

" What..you want me to stop? I won't..."

" I don't want you to stop.." she said and kissed him. Arnav did not stop for the rest of the night.

Next afternoon, he smirked.

"What?"..Khushwant asked.

" I won.."

" What..?"

" No..all your defences, tactics..failed..you are not defected, I proved that last night, I told you, it needs a real man to take a woman out of her..I did it last night. Yashwant Chaudhry is not the only man, who made his wife pregnant twice, that to in crucial time..Arnav Randhawa is the real man who made Yashwant's sister moan last night..nothing can be more satisfying than making a reluctant woman moan in bed..."

Khushwant didn't speak a word. She didn't expect this. From last few week's behaviour of Arnav she was actually being fond of him.

She couldn't see Arnav in that situation. Every night Arnav was struggling with himself, when she was disappointing him in bed, Arnav was having a tough time. She started to inject herself with those hormones again. Arnav was fully unaware of that, otherwise he won't have allowed this. But Khushwant couldn't see his suffering. She wanted to give some happiness to Arnav in their honeymoon.

But when Arnav taunted her about Yashwant, then she got hurt. She lost her faith again.

**

Khushwant was roaming around the city, she did some shopping for both the families, her friends. Meanwhile Arnav was making some important calls to India, he was in the hotel room. Then the room service came, he wanted some tea, he had no change for tip, so he searched in Khushwants handbag, Khushwant left that, she had a plan to get a new handbag. He gave the tips and then his eyes fell on something. He took a closer view, within a second his blood started to boil in anger.

When Khushwant got back to the hotel she saw her belongings were ransacked , wildly. Arnav was fuming in anger.

" What happened?"

" What do you think of yourself?" Arnav showed the medicine packet." You again injected yourself? I told you not to use these shits.."

" It was not serving any purpose Arnavjee..you were suffering.."

" To hell with that..why did you use them when I strictly prohibited..like a fool I was bragging..you get pleasure..right..every time you hurt me and you feel happy..".

Now Khushwant lost her calm. " Who got the pleasure? It was you...you were bragging that you defeated my brother in the race of your so-called manhood..you raped me.."

" I raped you?"

" Yes.."

" In that case you should have screamed, not moaned Mrs. Randhawa..last night "

" I don't want to talk about last night or any night I spent with you.."

" Who is asking you to talk? You called me a rapist..right..I will show you..what is rape..right here right now.."

She tried to escape, but it was too late..she was pinned against the wall, where she was kissed ruthlessly, Arnav was unfastening his belt while he was taking all her clothes off. And then his eyes fell on the ring , that ring, his mother's ring, immediately he released her from his grip.

" I am sorry Khushwant...I am sorry, I should have been more patient.."

She was crying silently in bed, she again felt his hand," Promise me, you will not use them again..promise me..", Arnav whispered in her ear.." one day you will feel for me..I know..I will wait for that day..but I don't want you like this..please..promise me."

" I can't..why don't you understand this..?"

" Try to sleep..I will not make any attempt..I promise..unless you come to me.."






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