Arshi FF - Unfaithful#2 - Link to Thread 3 on pg.1 - Page 81

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing 👏
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Years passed!!!!!!
Shyam was now totally out of scope...
Lavanya is still in picture... pity on Aryan...
seems Arnav is devastated in dese 18 months...
when ur writing the next update on how arnav missed khushi badly..
do equally depict how khushi missed arnav as well...
update soon varu...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear...

I read this again :-).

I should say that this was a filler chapter but a vital one and I absolutely appreciate the transition you have shown

shyam's dialogue was sick though, he saying to his mother if he was with khushi he would have been childless...that's cruel. But I liked what you have shown that he had a girl and his mother didn't get what she wanted...well god doesn't give you everything especially not to people who are insensitive...

What do I say about La, well she is lucky to have a son who loves her unconditionally and is unaware of her true feelings...

but the best bit is ArHi meeting and arnav lashing at khushi to have left him alone when he needed her most...

the next chap would be worth the wait...you being a romantic writer will do something magical.

thanks

sri.
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Posted: 11 years ago
now I want to really find out what happened
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Posted: 11 years ago
i felt really vry bad wn aryan said he loves labanya more tham arnav
shyam got married again n la-arnav rdivorced now was lavanya really givingher motherly love to aryan its real dn its really heart warming
wat has arnav done to himself n can feel even khushi z not in peace without arnav waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rehsanzsobti

when u update next part?


Next update will take some time. Sorry😊
Edited by V3Od - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 22

Khushi wanting to let Arnav know her decision cause she felt it right to implement her decision immediately rather than postponing things which would only lead to changes that would ultimately result in complications & trouble for Arnav shows how firm minded & how genuinely she is concerned for Arnav & his family


Khushi explaining to Arnav that keeping in mind Aryan's future she felt it was most appropriate for her to leave RM & also that she needed to find a light for herself that would pave a way for her in her life is applaudible 👏 Her words of how a child would instantly believe the words of his/her mother, which might earn a score for Lavanya if she manipulates the truth & tells Aryan that their happy family broke due to Arnav having kissed another woman might scar Aryan's child burning hatred for Arnav in the little child's heart & that since she knew how much Arnav loved his son she did not ever want to be the reason for Arnav losing Aryan was well framed


Arnav letting Khushi know that he had called Lavanya back but the truth was that she did not want to come back & her words ringing back in his heart but then Khushi telling him that he should try it till he succeeds for the sake of his son as tables might turn & he might even face the fateful reality of losing his son if Lavanya frames the story on her side brought out the pain in Arnav as well as the care Khushi had for Arnav who she wanted to be happy


Arnav listening patiently to Khushi & then each wishing good luck for the other & parting to lead their own futures which was still a puzzle to them was well written


Khushi telling that she thought it is best to leave before the kids could come home as she wouldn't be able to deny their pleas showed how much she loved children 🤗


Arnav & Ananya's convo was excellent ... Arnav telling his mom that he let Khushi follow her decision as he was no one in reality to stop her though he as well as she knew that there was something more than friendship they shared & that he wanted her to live a guit-free life ... then Ananya asking him what would he do next at which she heard so much of pain in her son's voice was awesomely written

Thanks for the PM 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 23

The starting of the update was really shocking to read Riya's talk with Anjali that Aryan loved his mama more than his papa, but the way Anji explained to the small child that Aryan will realize who loves him the most as time goes & that none had the right to force anything on him was well framed


So Shyam 😡 has settled & he seems not to be bothered even a bit of his past life. Didn't like it when he told his mother that he was relieved that he didn't stick with Khushi & stayed childless ... this proves that the love Shyam claimed to have for Khushi was never true & proves Khushi's decision right else he wouldn't have uttered those words even if he had chosen to move on in his life ... Mrs.Jha is totally annoying 😡 ... a child is also a human like every other human, be it a boy or a girl ... how could she shamelessly say that she wasn't least happy about the arrival of her grand daughter just because it wasn't a boy


It was a shock to see Lavanya spending time with Aryan, maybe it was the result of Arnav's constant pleas to Lavanya but wonder where all this will go as Aryan wishes to be with his mom more ... Arnav's state sounds helpless 😭


Khushi hurt to see the forlorn look adorning the man's face whom she wanted to be happy for the rest of his life seated in front of her, Arnav recognizing the voice he had missed for 18 months but thinking it to be imaginary, seeing Khushi in reality but pain taking over him that he lashed out on her but leaving the place immediately cause he knew that it wasn't her fault, he reminiscing the past of how he deliberately avoided Khushi's calls which would weaken him more, Khushi meeting Arnav again in the parking lot & trying to ask him if he was fine though her eyes showed out to Arnav that she could read from his face that nothing was alright in his life, Khushi feeling an urge to soothe Arnav but hesitant as she felt it wasn't right rather shocked to find Arnav wiping away her tears threw light on the quantum Arnav suffered after Khushi's departure which he hadn't shared with anybody else & how it hurt Khushi to see Arnav in such a torn state


Thanks for the PM. Eager to read the next chapter ... wonder what would happen next & what Arnav would tell Khushi ... WAITING

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update...
Can't wait to see what happened in Arshi's life for the past 18 months..
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Posted: 11 years ago
I miss reading quicker updates of this story...
Feel sad for Arnv-Khusi ...they are bearing the brunt of what has happened truly... Both are sad and hurting inside.. Whereas Shyam & La have moved on...
Cannot wait to read their conversation

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