ArHi FF! Dante's Labyrinth: Thread 1 [Completed]

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

you had me at druggie with an anti-social attitude.. :)

let's see how they unravel each other's minds this time around...

thanks for the PM :)

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Wow interesting start
Both Arnav n Khushi in a syc ward
Arnav branded a junky n khushi branded a killer
Poor khushi looks like to be framed
Question is will they hit it off straight away
Thanks for pm n keep em comin

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

I'm reading your work for the first time. This FF was the first one that came up when I entered the FF forum and the title itself was intriguing to grab my attention.

And I'm impressed with whatever I read in the first chapter. A very innovative concept and something different and I'm always up for such things.

So here, Khushi is accused of murdering her sister but she claims otherwise and hence is put in a psychiatric ward for treatment and Arnav is a druggie sent in for rehab. Nice! And by the looks of it, Arnav already seems to be taking an interest in Khushi.

I can already foresee the future of these two. They helping out each other come out of their problems. Will we see both coming out of the hospital and unravelling the murder mystery?

so this is a thriller + murder mystery+ badass psycho Arnav + supposed delusional Khushi + hospital scenario = wonderful idea!👏

Don't send me PMs. I'll follow it on my own.😊

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

congrats on this new one:)

well it does sound very interesting! ive never read something like that before, i mean its quite different from the usual but im looking forward to the next chapter as sometimes a change is good!

i ll admit im a bit confused about the first chapter but im sure all my confusions will be clearing by the next one!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Wow a brilliant and amazing, loving the concept of the story. Are we in store for another murder/ intense storyline. So both Arnav and khushi have been placed in a psychiatric facility because they are mentally disturbed, but I loved Arnav's response to the place he is in "It's the house of crackpots,". Please continue soon, eager to read how Arnav ended up in the facility and thanks for the PM xx

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

I think it is important that I thank the transport company you traveled in. :) But 13.5 hours? I'm guessing you were close to being in the facility like our charming leads here.

Interesting. Will be waiting for your updates. :)