AR: Ricochet #2 [Chapter 10 - Page 50 // ON HOLD]

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

i didn't understand two lines... 😳

"He's diving. Falling. Headstrong. Passionate"

"And he all but runs to his room because what even."

i loved how it was all present...

the way u maintained up the timeline... it was all armaan.. and it provided an insight into his life..

beautiful write up... :D

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

So I have another thread to catch up on now. Brilliant. Thanks byotch.

You know, I'm not giving you 9 chapters worth of comments. Its unfair. I'm dying, so I can't help it.

I know you're going to kill me. Shit.

Bye.

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Aakansha Agarwal

@Jenniferfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

congrats for new thread...
awesome part
loved it!!!

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JhakaasAccio

@JhakaasAccio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Reserve :)

I am so latee! The editing of the reserve is going to take time kyuki my net's not working and - am from somebody's phone to reserve😳

Bye now

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awesome update :-) loved Armaan's conversation with his mum :D congrats for the second thread

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

congrats on new thread awesome update

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doublep

@doublep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

NEW THREAD!! Congrats!special thank you to all the people who spammed and made Aanya inaugurate thread 2 with her update.

The most likeable attribute of Armaan is that he is so normal. I may be contradicting myself a bit since I like Riddhima with all her complexities and exceptional strength but there's an easy aura to him. I especially liked the second to last paragraph where you summed up his trait with "He dives deep.Head first. Headstrong. Passionate." and the juxtaposition with Riddhima's character. While I liked this conversation

"Any girl would be lucky to have you, Armaan, you know that don't you?"

"What?" his voice is little more than a squeak and he rights himself, "I mean, what?"

"You told me you keep messing things up in your relationships, I'm just saying, that's not true. You're great."

and the other mother-to son talks, it sometimes felt a tad bit formal.just my opinion. The best part of it was your little note at the bottom though because I know what you mean and I can't be the receiver or giver of unabashed affection too.

Can't give a satisfying comment because papers/drafts are killing me. But your updates are my respites so update more and soon.

I love Flightless Bird btw. Twilight was the only movie of the series I enjoyed and the song was dreamy stuff even though the lyrics don't shout romance at all.

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hosanna..

@hosanna..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Great chapter! I loved the talks between Armaan and his mom. Waiting to read how Armaan makes up to Riddhima :) I understand on how you are making Armaan's character and Riddhima's.